for A Bold Step Forward8/26 c3 HenryManning
Good story. I slightly agree with Illuminated, it would've been very interesting to see Hinata become Danzo-like when she will be old. Hope you continue this fic.
Good story. I slightly agree with Illuminated, it would've been very interesting to see Hinata become Danzo-like when she will be old. Hope you continue this fic.
12/4/2022 c3 Illuminated
I enjoyed your three chapters, especially with Hinata being so professsional and pragmatic. I hope sakura ends up dead on a slab in this story. I could see Hinata becoming Danzo-like in her old age in a story like this.
I hope you come back to this story someday when you have time.
I enjoyed your three chapters, especially with Hinata being so professsional and pragmatic. I hope sakura ends up dead on a slab in this story. I could see Hinata becoming Danzo-like in her old age in a story like this.
I hope you come back to this story someday when you have time.
12/23/2020 c3 Danny Williams
Great story (left with cliff hanger).
You have great stories but you need to update them.
Great story (left with cliff hanger).
You have great stories but you need to update them.
11/28/2020 c3 
16starfiction123
Ok I'm actually sad this ended so soon. This was a great potential story! In enjoyed it and I never really liked sauske until he mellowed out in boruto so fudge I'm with the voice that was made! This needs to continue honestly lol
16starfiction123Ok I'm actually sad this ended so soon. This was a great potential story! In enjoyed it and I never really liked sauske until he mellowed out in boruto so fudge I'm with the voice that was made! This needs to continue honestly lol
5/2/2018 c3 1insanemaelstorm
This is pretty good. Love how sasuke died. Hope he stays dead. Loved orochiamru's reaction to his dead. Hope sakura is dead too. Man this is great. Can't wait to read more
1insanemaelstormThis is pretty good. Love how sasuke died. Hope he stays dead. Loved orochiamru's reaction to his dead. Hope sakura is dead too. Man this is great. Can't wait to read more
4/5/2018 c3 16Jewlbunny
She's gonna kill Hinata. Or will she? Naruto will have to stop her to save the one person that loves him. But what will that take? Hope to read more soon.
16JewlbunnyShe's gonna kill Hinata. Or will she? Naruto will have to stop her to save the one person that loves him. But what will that take? Hope to read more soon.
4/1/2018 c3 Crimson Hawk Wolf
I like how your doing things in this story. I think Sasuke so fast might be a bit off but I guess it could be because Hinata just moved to fast and unexpected that he might not of had time to react while focusing on Naruto like he was. I wonder where things might go from here and how things will progress for everyone. I hope things won’t be to hard for Hinata in the long run.
I like how your doing things in this story. I think Sasuke so fast might be a bit off but I guess it could be because Hinata just moved to fast and unexpected that he might not of had time to react while focusing on Naruto like he was. I wonder where things might go from here and how things will progress for everyone. I hope things won’t be to hard for Hinata in the long run.
4/1/2018 c3 4RavenShadow
I just came across this story yesterday and I love it. I could not stop reading it. You seem to be taking the characters in a different direction, I'm interested in seeing how this plays out.
4RavenShadowI just came across this story yesterday and I love it. I could not stop reading it. You seem to be taking the characters in a different direction, I'm interested in seeing how this plays out.
4/1/2018 c3 2SilentSambo88
This chapter...was bashing for the sake of bashing. And I absolutely *hate* it when writers do that.
Hinata had no right killing Sasuke as easily as she did here. You didn't even pretend to have Sasuke put up the fight he should have - because we know that if he had put up a fight, he still would have won just like in canon. Plus, his behavior prior to death was typical of a "bash" fic.
Sorry, but this chapter ruined the entire story for me.
2SilentSambo88This chapter...was bashing for the sake of bashing. And I absolutely *hate* it when writers do that.
Hinata had no right killing Sasuke as easily as she did here. You didn't even pretend to have Sasuke put up the fight he should have - because we know that if he had put up a fight, he still would have won just like in canon. Plus, his behavior prior to death was typical of a "bash" fic.
Sorry, but this chapter ruined the entire story for me.
3/31/2018 c3 15Leaf Ranger
What the hell Sakura? Uugghhh, dumb idiot.
Overall though, nice chapter. Wow sasuke went down and fast. Guess all that training did nothing for you, did it Sasuke?
Keep up the good work.
15Leaf RangerWhat the hell Sakura? Uugghhh, dumb idiot.
Overall though, nice chapter. Wow sasuke went down and fast. Guess all that training did nothing for you, did it Sasuke?
Keep up the good work.
3/31/2018 c3 SPark681
So Sasuke is dead and maybe soon Sakura... good riddance to garbage in my book anyways keep up the great work!
So Sasuke is dead and maybe soon Sakura... good riddance to garbage in my book anyways keep up the great work!
3/31/2018 c3 9NarHina
Anti climatic, I don't mind Hinata killing Sasuke, but you should made a bit more of fight instead having him be killed so easily. Like Hinata gentle fist surprises him allowing her to finish him after a quick fight.
As for Sakura did she just commit suicides makes sense, but the dialog before it was leading to her killing Hinata not herself.
Well it is new and story is good, if a bit anti climatic, but the idea is there. I feel Hinata is to OC without any build up to it yet. I don't mind her being defensive, but maybe mention why and that she hates Sasuke for what he did to Naruto.
Naruto and Hinata Forever:)
9NarHinaAnti climatic, I don't mind Hinata killing Sasuke, but you should made a bit more of fight instead having him be killed so easily. Like Hinata gentle fist surprises him allowing her to finish him after a quick fight.
As for Sakura did she just commit suicides makes sense, but the dialog before it was leading to her killing Hinata not herself.
Well it is new and story is good, if a bit anti climatic, but the idea is there. I feel Hinata is to OC without any build up to it yet. I don't mind her being defensive, but maybe mention why and that she hates Sasuke for what he did to Naruto.
Naruto and Hinata Forever:)
3/31/2018 c3 jenuzumaki
I love how Hinata kept on rejecting Sasuke’s invitation to join him, and was even insulting him a little bit by ignoring his charm. I just thought Hinata would never kill Sasuke since it would hurt Naruto.
Sakura was an idiot for abandoning her village. When she said she would avenge Sasuke, did she mean to kill Itachi and Hinata? Or only Hinata?
I love how Hinata kept on rejecting Sasuke’s invitation to join him, and was even insulting him a little bit by ignoring his charm. I just thought Hinata would never kill Sasuke since it would hurt Naruto.
Sakura was an idiot for abandoning her village. When she said she would avenge Sasuke, did she mean to kill Itachi and Hinata? Or only Hinata?