for Every Little Thing1/18/2018 c3 frenchies
Hey I don't know if you will ever read this comment . I like your story so far. But I'm french any the french you used (which is a good idea by the way) doest mean anything. So I decided to give some proper translation if you still can correct it :
petite amie- mon coeur, ma chérie, mon amour (you can choose one, it is what men give as nick name to a woman they loved)
obtenir, votre cul putain hors de mon canapé en ce moment - Vire tes fesse de mon canapé tout de suite! or Sort de ce canapé maintenant! (thé second sentence is more polite, I think thé first one is better for the character)
détendre mon chéri - détends-toi mon chérie.
So I hope you will not take offense , and I will enjoy reading the rest of your story
Hey I don't know if you will ever read this comment . I like your story so far. But I'm french any the french you used (which is a good idea by the way) doest mean anything. So I decided to give some proper translation if you still can correct it :
petite amie- mon coeur, ma chérie, mon amour (you can choose one, it is what men give as nick name to a woman they loved)
obtenir, votre cul putain hors de mon canapé en ce moment - Vire tes fesse de mon canapé tout de suite! or Sort de ce canapé maintenant! (thé second sentence is more polite, I think thé first one is better for the character)
détendre mon chéri - détends-toi mon chérie.
So I hope you will not take offense , and I will enjoy reading the rest of your story
9/22/2013 c9 EmptySurface
This was beautifully written. I must say it would be amusing to read about when Audrey find out about Harry's fame! That must come as another shock. :P
This was beautifully written. I must say it would be amusing to read about when Audrey find out about Harry's fame! That must come as another shock. :P
10/17/2012 c9 
1IceLumos
I Absolutely Loved It! I Haven't Read Any Good Audrey Stories Before And Really Enjoyed This One!
1IceLumosI Absolutely Loved It! I Haven't Read Any Good Audrey Stories Before And Really Enjoyed This One!
4/9/2012 c9 12littleme36
This was really nice, I like how she interacted with everyone- and how Ginny and Hermione helped her sort out her issues with magic :) x
12littleme36This was really nice, I like how she interacted with everyone- and how Ginny and Hermione helped her sort out her issues with magic :) x
3/15/2012 c9 7brilliant incandescence
I've loved this story so much. It's sad to see it end, but I can't say that I didn't like the ending. I liked that you ended it with something from Audrey's side.
7brilliant incandescenceI've loved this story so much. It's sad to see it end, but I can't say that I didn't like the ending. I liked that you ended it with something from Audrey's side.
3/15/2012 c9 25HogwartsDreamer113
a good ending to a great story. Would you be willing to write a sequel to this, like when Percy proposed to Audrey, when they have Molly and Lucy, or even both? I would definitely read it if you did. :)
25HogwartsDreamer113a good ending to a great story. Would you be willing to write a sequel to this, like when Percy proposed to Audrey, when they have Molly and Lucy, or even both? I would definitely read it if you did. :)
3/1/2012 c1 frankie
I like this! A lot! I like Percy in this story and how he and his family are around each other. It's well written too. But I like how you make Percy put to be; so many people make him the bad guy. This is cute and romantic with some sweet sibling fluff, and perfectly balanced between the three. This is really good.
I like this! A lot! I like Percy in this story and how he and his family are around each other. It's well written too. But I like how you make Percy put to be; so many people make him the bad guy. This is cute and romantic with some sweet sibling fluff, and perfectly balanced between the three. This is really good.
2/27/2012 c8 10NyGi
Ahh Fred... his death still makes me wanna cry :(
Really sweet that Percy wanted Audrey to meet him and please, please never ever have her meet Auntie Muriel!
10NyGiAhh Fred... his death still makes me wanna cry :(
Really sweet that Percy wanted Audrey to meet him and please, please never ever have her meet Auntie Muriel!
2/24/2012 c8 7brilliant incandescence
Aww, I was wondering when Fred would come into the picture. I guess that answers that. I liked that jab at Muriel, totally deserved it.
7brilliant incandescenceAww, I was wondering when Fred would come into the picture. I guess that answers that. I liked that jab at Muriel, totally deserved it.
2/24/2012 c8 25HogwartsDreamer113
This was a wonderful story, and I'm kind of sad that it's ending, but yet, I'm exited to see what you will include in the epilouge, although I have an idea. Thanks for sharing this spectacular story with us. :)
25HogwartsDreamer113This was a wonderful story, and I'm kind of sad that it's ending, but yet, I'm exited to see what you will include in the epilouge, although I have an idea. Thanks for sharing this spectacular story with us. :)