for Cold1/17/2022 c3 Guest
beautifully written
beautifully written
4/20/2014 c3 Moonshadow0501
Whoa, this has got to be one of the best naruto fanfictions i've ever read... The characters are spot on and you can feel Gaara and Ino's emotions so well. Is it awkward that I'm reviewing this 2 years after its been updated?
Whoa, this has got to be one of the best naruto fanfictions i've ever read... The characters are spot on and you can feel Gaara and Ino's emotions so well. Is it awkward that I'm reviewing this 2 years after its been updated?
6/10/2013 c3 
5AnxietyForDays
This is definitely a great story. xD I feel awkward reviewing because this hasn't been updated in forever. But whatever good job! :D
5AnxietyForDaysThis is definitely a great story. xD I feel awkward reviewing because this hasn't been updated in forever. But whatever good job! :D
6/19/2012 c3 please ff.net delete account
Why do I feel goosebumps whenever reading this? It was that good, especially this chapter. Too much was revealed in Gaara's part that I felt his sadness with every word expressed. You are very good in portraying the two and the situation they found themselves in. Lovely chap!
Why do I feel goosebumps whenever reading this? It was that good, especially this chapter. Too much was revealed in Gaara's part that I felt his sadness with every word expressed. You are very good in portraying the two and the situation they found themselves in. Lovely chap!
5/26/2012 c3 1TrueGaaraRose
Lovely writing, just beautiful. The story really draws you in, and you can feel Gaara's emotion. I like how you express his attraction without him being OOC. I love where the story is going, update soon, please.
1TrueGaaraRoseLovely writing, just beautiful. The story really draws you in, and you can feel Gaara's emotion. I like how you express his attraction without him being OOC. I love where the story is going, update soon, please.
5/25/2012 c3 sdf
you have a way with words that i really love. your characterization and the dynamics between them so far is amazing. i'd be hard-pressed to find a fault with this right now.
you have a way with words that i really love. your characterization and the dynamics between them so far is amazing. i'd be hard-pressed to find a fault with this right now.
5/24/2012 c3 14SilentStar-009
I know, there aren't many InoGaara fics and its one of my favorite parings! Love you story so far and you do a great job at keeping him in character. Hope to read more from you soon :)
14SilentStar-009I know, there aren't many InoGaara fics and its one of my favorite parings! Love you story so far and you do a great job at keeping him in character. Hope to read more from you soon :)
2/18/2012 c2 2Lissa Raven
I DEMAND ANOTHER CHAPTER...pretty please? I'll give you a cookie. You know you want a cookie.
2Lissa RavenI DEMAND ANOTHER CHAPTER...pretty please? I'll give you a cookie. You know you want a cookie.
1/24/2012 c2 FoxShadow
Wooot! Another well writed chapter! Words from top to bottom make my breathing uneven! I feel that it should be said how much talent you have, rather in writing or in the ideas department, Gaara is quite the difficult character when wanting not to go all OOC on him, soo an really, really excelent job! Keep up the update, can't wait for more!
Wooot! Another well writed chapter! Words from top to bottom make my breathing uneven! I feel that it should be said how much talent you have, rather in writing or in the ideas department, Gaara is quite the difficult character when wanting not to go all OOC on him, soo an really, really excelent job! Keep up the update, can't wait for more!
1/21/2012 c2 Cookie.monster
I really like this chapter because 1. It's Florence + the machines and 2. We get to see more of Gaara. It's okay, dialogue is always hard to write. Please update
I really like this chapter because 1. It's Florence + the machines and 2. We get to see more of Gaara. It's okay, dialogue is always hard to write. Please update
1/21/2012 c2 rina
I'm in love with your writing, it's so pretty! I love your gaara, he's so dynamic!
I'm in love with your writing, it's so pretty! I love your gaara, he's so dynamic!
1/21/2012 c2 please ff.net delete account
That simply touched me. The words from the top till it ends just gave me a moment of tense and yearning. I'm astonished in just how well you have shaped Gaara which I know I could've failed in some degree. Having Gaara dominating most of this chapter makes it more clear where they are standing and I applaud you in how well you've formed this.
SOPA/PIPA/ACTA/whatever, they can't control us or it'd be them against the world. Hopefully what we feared won't be landed on us. Its a good thing you reminded us about this or we'd just be blinded by their plans. Surely, will do.
That simply touched me. The words from the top till it ends just gave me a moment of tense and yearning. I'm astonished in just how well you have shaped Gaara which I know I could've failed in some degree. Having Gaara dominating most of this chapter makes it more clear where they are standing and I applaud you in how well you've formed this.
SOPA/PIPA/ACTA/whatever, they can't control us or it'd be them against the world. Hopefully what we feared won't be landed on us. Its a good thing you reminded us about this or we'd just be blinded by their plans. Surely, will do.
1/20/2012 c1 please ff.net delete account
Yes! Make it a drabble! Make more of this if you can please!
I love your style of writing: simple, contentful and memorable. They certainly remained as much as in-character the last time I encountered their (official) scenes. Good job. And that last line gave me chills; its a nice start for their relationship.
Really hoping to see more of this...
Yes! Make it a drabble! Make more of this if you can please!
I love your style of writing: simple, contentful and memorable. They certainly remained as much as in-character the last time I encountered their (official) scenes. Good job. And that last line gave me chills; its a nice start for their relationship.
Really hoping to see more of this...