for My Death: Myrtle's Story1/18/2018 c1 Guest
I find it interesting that you chose Myrtle of all characters to focus on. It's nice to see a different version of the ending. I think you stayed in character as much as you could, even though a little bit of it is dramatic. Good story, thanks for writing it.
I find it interesting that you chose Myrtle of all characters to focus on. It's nice to see a different version of the ending. I think you stayed in character as much as you could, even though a little bit of it is dramatic. Good story, thanks for writing it.
10/26/2015 c1 Andrew
I loved it, I love how you infected a new ending into the story, it shows a more tranquil position to where there death consists, an how his frightful death rejuvenated.
I loved it, I love how you infected a new ending into the story, it shows a more tranquil position to where there death consists, an how his frightful death rejuvenated.
2/11/2012 c1 Chris from Nashville
The beginning was kind of choppy, but it doesnt say tha Myrtle is very educated so that might reflect her personality. I like the afterlife part, and how Gatsby finally learned that he couldnt relive the past. Great stuff
The beginning was kind of choppy, but it doesnt say tha Myrtle is very educated so that might reflect her personality. I like the afterlife part, and how Gatsby finally learned that he couldnt relive the past. Great stuff