for Erikson7/16/2023 c32 AidualcLupa
I am so intrigued by your story - unusual and complex, compelling and entertaining. There are even more chapters on your website ( .com) with a dramatic twist that makes me beg for a sequel.
But at the same time, you let us share a little bit of your private life and the dramas that happen in the background. The illness of your son Payton, the death of your mother. I am so sorry to hear how you are struggling to keep your head above water. How hard it is for you to stay strong. Despite sick children, money worries, pandemic and loss of loved ones. I can more than understand that you are depressed, that you are grieving. If I were there I would take you in my arms and encourage you. Let you know that you are not alone and after this valley, good times are waiting for you again. And give you a baby dog. Feel loved
I am so intrigued by your story - unusual and complex, compelling and entertaining. There are even more chapters on your website ( .com) with a dramatic twist that makes me beg for a sequel.
But at the same time, you let us share a little bit of your private life and the dramas that happen in the background. The illness of your son Payton, the death of your mother. I am so sorry to hear how you are struggling to keep your head above water. How hard it is for you to stay strong. Despite sick children, money worries, pandemic and loss of loved ones. I can more than understand that you are depressed, that you are grieving. If I were there I would take you in my arms and encourage you. Let you know that you are not alone and after this valley, good times are waiting for you again. And give you a baby dog. Feel loved
1/7/2023 c32 Guest
Hey long time how's lil Payton.
I love ur writing style I reread every other year..:)
Hey long time how's lil Payton.
I love ur writing style I reread every other year..:)
10/28/2022 c32 theduskysky
OMG this is brilliant! Alas! It is unfinished! I hope you come back to this. It's too good not to know the ending!
OMG this is brilliant! Alas! It is unfinished! I hope you come back to this. It's too good not to know the ending!
12/15/2021 c32 SusanJ39
Hi, I read the whole story over the last couple of days. You might not be continuing the story (since 2018) but I enjoyed it and wanted to let you know. I would have liked more detail in the Eric/Sookie romance side, but I realize your focus was elsewhere. I hope you find time to continue writing in the future. Thanks.
Hi, I read the whole story over the last couple of days. You might not be continuing the story (since 2018) but I enjoyed it and wanted to let you know. I would have liked more detail in the Eric/Sookie romance side, but I realize your focus was elsewhere. I hope you find time to continue writing in the future. Thanks.
7/22/2021 c32 
3ShadoKat
I keep finding unfinished stories! I hope you come back and finish this someday. It's a fantastic arc, Eric and Sookie with a powerful teenage son. I've enjoyed it thoroughly. Thank you for the time you've spent writing it and I hope your son grows out of his ailments. By the way, you need a new beta. Lots of mistakes. And, American children don't generally say "bloody." Just letting you know because the story is great. Hit me up if you come back and want a good beta.
3ShadoKatI keep finding unfinished stories! I hope you come back and finish this someday. It's a fantastic arc, Eric and Sookie with a powerful teenage son. I've enjoyed it thoroughly. Thank you for the time you've spent writing it and I hope your son grows out of his ailments. By the way, you need a new beta. Lots of mistakes. And, American children don't generally say "bloody." Just letting you know because the story is great. Hit me up if you come back and want a good beta.
5/4/2021 c1 Blaze Zion
These are the type of stories I love to read. I hope I can see your work in NovelStar. There are also a lot of talented writers in that platform. You may check their group on Facebook.
These are the type of stories I love to read. I hope I can see your work in NovelStar. There are also a lot of talented writers in that platform. You may check their group on Facebook.
12/13/2020 c13 rebecca t.p. wrecker
I haven't read anything in the Sookieverse for ages; what a delight to find this story!
I haven't read anything in the Sookieverse for ages; what a delight to find this story!
7/31/2020 c32 17Lulubelle09
Very interesting story, though it’s marked as complete it doesn’t feel complete.
17Lulubelle09Very interesting story, though it’s marked as complete it doesn’t feel complete.
6/23/2020 c32 Please Update
I love this story!
I love this story!
6/23/2020 c25 Guest
Please don't tell me he's gonna die? And if he does is he going to come back?
Please don't tell me he's gonna die? And if he does is he going to come back?
4/15/2020 c32 AB Negative
Excellent story and I loved Eric and Sookie's son. Good job!
Excellent story and I loved Eric and Sookie's son. Good job!
1/31/2020 c32 7tanseynz
I usually don’t like kid Eric/Sookie, but this is a definitely good piece of writing, especially the last few chapters from Ericson’s POV. The raids to get the cellphones was rivetting- best chapter overall. Not a fan of this Sookie - too whiney/too compliant and a very helicopter mother indeed.
To me, this isn’t complete, not the least because there’s no resolution of the attempted takeover. Yet it’s still a great story. Ty for sharing it.
7tanseynzI usually don’t like kid Eric/Sookie, but this is a definitely good piece of writing, especially the last few chapters from Ericson’s POV. The raids to get the cellphones was rivetting- best chapter overall. Not a fan of this Sookie - too whiney/too compliant and a very helicopter mother indeed.
To me, this isn’t complete, not the least because there’s no resolution of the attempted takeover. Yet it’s still a great story. Ty for sharing it.