
1/10/2012 c1 poems2songs
wonderful story... really liked it... nice and very touching... good job... great work!
wonderful story... really liked it... nice and very touching... good job... great work!
1/9/2012 c1 nertz
That was a really nice one shot. The time lines and flow of the story is really really well written and well planned. Good on ya mate
That was a really nice one shot. The time lines and flow of the story is really really well written and well planned. Good on ya mate
1/8/2012 c1 Tweedledoo
You've always stuck to the romance genre, so it's a surprise to see a family fic from you. But I think you pulled it off really well. This is amazing. The transition was smooth, and the over-result had a lot of impact. You never fail to disappoint me with your stories. Anyhoo, write more!
You've always stuck to the romance genre, so it's a surprise to see a family fic from you. But I think you pulled it off really well. This is amazing. The transition was smooth, and the over-result had a lot of impact. You never fail to disappoint me with your stories. Anyhoo, write more!
1/8/2012 c1 Abigail
WOW! I got teary-eyed and felt all warm and fuzzy. It's nice to see you back with another PoT fic.
WOW! I got teary-eyed and felt all warm and fuzzy. It's nice to see you back with another PoT fic.
1/8/2012 c1
6Waisk
*round of applause* Loved this heartwarming story...the time skips really tied the whole thing together, strangely enough, and I have to say that it was VERY refreshing to read this after all the complicated, messed up piles of romance and angst fanfics out there. Bravo again for reminding us just why we all love PoT ;)

*round of applause* Loved this heartwarming story...the time skips really tied the whole thing together, strangely enough, and I have to say that it was VERY refreshing to read this after all the complicated, messed up piles of romance and angst fanfics out there. Bravo again for reminding us just why we all love PoT ;)
1/8/2012 c1
1achromaticly
Aww..
I really like this one. It's rare to find family fic like this lately. This fic gave a heartwarming feelings. I found myself smiling fondly at the end. I didn't find any mistakes, and if there were any, I didn't notice because I was too caught up in the story.
I love the way you characterize everyone, especially nanjiroh. He is so... Fatherly, for once.
Good job. :)

Aww..
I really like this one. It's rare to find family fic like this lately. This fic gave a heartwarming feelings. I found myself smiling fondly at the end. I didn't find any mistakes, and if there were any, I didn't notice because I was too caught up in the story.
I love the way you characterize everyone, especially nanjiroh. He is so... Fatherly, for once.
Good job. :)