for Complicated5/28/2014 c4 
7Arivania Moons
Wow. How was I not suspecting that comment at the end. I mean come on! the entire thing wasn't complicated! BUT, it is your story, so I don't give a damn.
7Arivania MoonsWow. How was I not suspecting that comment at the end. I mean come on! the entire thing wasn't complicated! BUT, it is your story, so I don't give a damn.
12/15/2013 c4 6Mana's Madness
Cute! I like that it ran parallel with Sk8ter BoyZ and yet was its own story
6Mana's MadnessCute! I like that it ran parallel with Sk8ter BoyZ and yet was its own story
8/29/2013 c4 8Animefun101
I so totally enjoyed this as well and you ahould totally do another one i found it cute what you did and how you added blindshipping into it well done and keep on writing i loved it :)
8Animefun101I so totally enjoyed this as well and you ahould totally do another one i found it cute what you did and how you added blindshipping into it well done and keep on writing i loved it :)
3/26/2013 c4 11Vanitas' Queen21
its so sweet! wish i had a boyfriend like atem...he's sooooo hot...and compassionate!
11Vanitas' Queen21its so sweet! wish i had a boyfriend like atem...he's sooooo hot...and compassionate!
3/10/2012 c4 sk84ndd327r0y
Several words colds describe the awesomeness that is you and your stories...
Holy Ra! Amazing. Beautiful! Wonderness! (is that even a word?)... There are several more but my vocabulary isn't all that big.
So greatness!
Several words colds describe the awesomeness that is you and your stories...
Holy Ra! Amazing. Beautiful! Wonderness! (is that even a word?)... There are several more but my vocabulary isn't all that big.
So greatness!
3/2/2012 c4 2tallym4rk
Hey, this is amazing! I hope you keep the writing up. You're a great writer! Too cute. :3
2tallym4rkHey, this is amazing! I hope you keep the writing up. You're a great writer! Too cute. :3
1/12/2012 c3 sk84ndd327r0y
Ah the greatness of EgyptsBlackRose! YOU ARE EFFING AWESOME! Your stories are awesome and I am really sad the next chapter will be the last one! So cute though!
Ah the greatness of EgyptsBlackRose! YOU ARE EFFING AWESOME! Your stories are awesome and I am really sad the next chapter will be the last one! So cute though!
1/9/2012 c3 25Aqua Burst 7
This seems like a cool story so far. I thought the part where Cyrtal was doing Heba's make-up cute. I love Yugi's outfit. I like the line, And (+1 dead puppy), Heba thought. I don't know why but that made me laugh. Keep up the good work.
25Aqua Burst 7This seems like a cool story so far. I thought the part where Cyrtal was doing Heba's make-up cute. I love Yugi's outfit. I like the line, And (+1 dead puppy), Heba thought. I don't know why but that made me laugh. Keep up the good work.
1/9/2012 c3 41crystal moon princess
awwwwww atem kiss heba 3 ! I love that heba sang skater boy with yugi^_^ It was so cute and sweet^_^ but it sad that this story is going to end so quickly! :( but annyway thank you for making this awsome story^_^
41crystal moon princessawwwwww atem kiss heba 3 ! I love that heba sang skater boy with yugi^_^ It was so cute and sweet^_^ but it sad that this story is going to end so quickly! :( but annyway thank you for making this awsome story^_^
1/9/2012 c2 crystal moon princess
awwwww awsome sequel/story hikary^_^! I cant wait to see what happends next^_^ poor heba having to stand that verruca . grrrrrrr well atem loves heba is pretty simple^_^ I Hope heba has a good time at the dance with atem ;) but I got the feeling yami is going to have a heart attack lol^_^ Well amazing story hikari, I can say that it was a great chapter not that I was expecting annything else from you^_^ hope you update soon^_^ I want to see what happend next^_^
awwwww awsome sequel/story hikary^_^! I cant wait to see what happends next^_^ poor heba having to stand that verruca . grrrrrrr well atem loves heba is pretty simple^_^ I Hope heba has a good time at the dance with atem ;) but I got the feeling yami is going to have a heart attack lol^_^ Well amazing story hikari, I can say that it was a great chapter not that I was expecting annything else from you^_^ hope you update soon^_^ I want to see what happend next^_^