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5/6/2012 c6 5DownwiththeSupernatural
Another great chapter. Sorry I have been soo slack on reviews, but I've had a lot going on, but yay for me finally getting caught up on one of my fave stories!

Poor Mozzie is just trying to protect Lilly but if you ask me, that little girl needs no protection. Hes who does, but we know men are stubborn.

And the interaction with Hughes was so awkward for him that it was hilarious. I'm really curious to see where you're taking this next so update fast! And save me a chicken nugget xD
4/21/2012 c6 Miss MaryAnn
I loved the chapter and I especially love Red. She is such a brash, antagonistic little brat and yet she is very appealing, especially if you have a death wish or are masochistic, hehe. Truly, she is an original. Thank you for creating her.
4/21/2012 c6 4BaDWolF89
Interested in how Red knows Adler though, can't wait to see what happens next.
3/2/2012 c5 26colakirk
Good ole Peter to the rescue again! Just in the nick of time too! And even with all the danger, Red was more put out about being taken as a joke for the hitman than almost getting killed. She sure is a wild one. She was more than deserving of Peter taking his hand her bratty backside. I hope you update soon becasue i'm most certainly into this adventure story now.
3/2/2012 c4 colakirk
Another fantastic chapter - Peter will have to have the patience of a saint to see this girl to safety witout having to carry out his suggestion. It was interestng that Peter's explanation of the deal with Keller cemented Red's desire even more. Loved the escape down the fire escape - true White Collar style!
3/2/2012 c3 colakirk
I so loved this chapter with Peter stepping into a parental role without hesitation Loved him calling her out and letting the doctors know her name was Lilly Burke. That sounded just right. Peter has his hands full now with more than one surrogate child!
3/2/2012 c2 colakirk
Red sure is an interesting character. I loved how she stood up to Peter and even managed to pull a little con on him.

"Mozzie's my pimp." LOL
3/2/2012 c1 colakirk
A great start to what is sure to be a fun Mozzie and friend adventure.I'm glad Lily shot Marcus in the knee - he deserved at least that after kicking our beloved Mozzie. Loved the nod at To Kill a Mockingbird - one of my favourite stories from my childhood.
3/1/2012 c5 lindsay
I love it keep writing. Lilly is tough I like her. Can't wait to read whats next.
2/29/2012 c5 Giggles McGee
I love how brave Red is. But she's frightened too and hides it. She not only made an amazing escape but now stopped someone hiding in the apartment. You're a great story teller!
2/29/2012 c5 6joy2190
Love that tough nut Red still can't resist Elizabeth's mothering.
2/29/2012 c5 Miss MaryAnn
I loved that her knights in shining armor, Peter, Neal and Mozzie, came to her rescue. Too bad Peter wasn't able to finish what he started, hehe. The story is moving along very well.
2/19/2012 c4 84supergirl3684
may peter should just give in to his urge! haha! I think I can my "dad" characters thanking "thier" kids for not being so unruly!
2/19/2012 c3 supergirl3684
oh boy...if I were Peter I'd just shoot her and get it over with! LOL!
2/19/2012 c2 supergirl3684
she's a tough girlie! Something tells me Moz is gonna regret his descion...at least a little! :D
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