for Quicksilver1/23/2012 c2 
4Melithiane
Nicely written. I like the way you change the diffrent places and persons, you really get at once who is meant with it. Still, you need to work on the names of Eggy's robots. "EggGrizzly" is nice but if you make any other robots up, you should think of better names.., But in the end it is really good, keep it up!
4MelithianeNicely written. I like the way you change the diffrent places and persons, you really get at once who is meant with it. Still, you need to work on the names of Eggy's robots. "EggGrizzly" is nice but if you make any other robots up, you should think of better names.., But in the end it is really good, keep it up!