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12/27/2020 c30 20SSJ3 Kyuubi Gohan
Good story. In particular I give significant points to how you played Tobi, I always respect uniqueness and it was a great twist.
12/26/2020 c30 Guest
Awesome story my friend you kept me up with your story you are an awesome writer, cant wait for your sequel and I wish your story was canon, Kishimoto should take this story to consideration
12/11/2020 c7 faz551
Sorry but there's no Konan in this story, first Konan is older than his mother and the personality is totally off. If you can't assume that Konan is a lot older than Naruto and that she have a different personality than Sakura or Hinata but a mature personaity then don't make this pairing, don't put a teenager in the shoes of Konan for the sake of your little drama...
11/16/2020 c30 CB3C
Such a nice story i'm looking forward the next season if you do
10/10/2020 c30 Etro champion
And this is why you wanted my favorite fanfiction writers on here I thank you I had an idea to improve on your story but the end of the story I want to show you something that I thought you work out I like the way you wrote it don't get me wrong but I want to show you who went to the end of your apology how it should sound you did a fabulous job don't take it in the wrong way but imma show you let me know what you think of it cuz I like the fact you listen to people when it comes to suggestions and ideas I wish you the best and hope you're safe in this coronavirus19 era
10/6/2020 c30 Guest
Don’t usually do a review of a fanfiction, but damm... this story was really good. The character development and the story in general was just really good. It’s a shame there aren’t a lot fanfics with naruto x konan
9/27/2020 c30 roance devl
honest i loved the story i love tooit's like in naruto the last movie
9/11/2020 c30 KieS ZN
No Lemons :( xd
9/5/2020 c30 manu
please more nartuo x konan please the history super
9/2/2020 c15 Jondoe0321
Frggin epic
8/27/2020 c3 Guest
why do you have to put forward the romance ? This is not adventure, but only romance between a 16 year old child and a woman the same age as her mother ..
8/26/2020 c1 13thunderofdeath97
few issues here, despite it being fanfiction and not cannon, i have to bring these up, one being the biju aren't demons, two, the jinchuriki is what naruto is, not what he possessed, and three the rinnegan being gifted to naruto was kind of dumb like that, i mean there could have been a big battle and a stressful situation which led to it, but just being given it? almost as bad as kishimotio being a sasuke fanboy like he was in cannon
8/20/2020 c1 Tenjo
Sorry about the rant... I’m tired and felt like being a dickhead.
8/20/2020 c1 Tenjo
As much as I like the concept... it completely ignores Karin (since I assume it followed canon until this point) who is an Uzumaki, and the fact that Nagato’s rinnegan was a result of Madara transplanting his eyes. I’m sure it’s explained further, but that’s as far as I can remember. It’s an Otsutsuki trait and the only clans we know descend from them are the Senju, Uchiha and Hyūga.
8/19/2020 c1 Rice with Chest-Nuts
hohohooo~ this seems legit...
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