for Mahora's Maelstrom2/24/2021 c5 
1ShadowRealmComics
I hope you finished this story sometime in the future, for I like the concept that you have here. I understand for my is not enough time to write due to two job and not finding a job to pay that amount, one is I am on call all the time if there is work and I get one two 72 dollar tickets and anther working as a night stocker at Walmart.
1ShadowRealmComicsI hope you finished this story sometime in the future, for I like the concept that you have here. I understand for my is not enough time to write due to two job and not finding a job to pay that amount, one is I am on call all the time if there is work and I get one two 72 dollar tickets and anther working as a night stocker at Walmart.
1/10/2021 c5 Guest
no problem dude stay safe and belated haooy new year
no problem dude stay safe and belated haooy new year
1/1/2021 c5 BK201DarkKitsune
Well thanks for letting us know hope you find the will to write again i had liked where the story was going but hey sometimes you feel like writing and there are times where you don't hope ya have a good new years
Well thanks for letting us know hope you find the will to write again i had liked where the story was going but hey sometimes you feel like writing and there are times where you don't hope ya have a good new years
12/23/2020 c5 France
Dommage j'adorerais vautre histoire j'espère que tout vaux problème se sont résolu bon courage pour la suite
Dommage j'adorerais vautre histoire j'espère que tout vaux problème se sont résolu bon courage pour la suite
12/23/2020 c5 4animecollecter
funny. i forgot about this story a long time ago. so i am not upset in the slightest for what you are doing for this story. hopefully you have a new story in the future. i look forward to it.
4animecollecterfunny. i forgot about this story a long time ago. so i am not upset in the slightest for what you are doing for this story. hopefully you have a new story in the future. i look forward to it.
12/23/2020 c5 Rezuvious
I forgot this story even existed though reading a chapter refreshed my memory.
Glad you were considerate enough to let us know what has happened. A lot of people just stop communicating and some even outright delete there account without a word.
I forgot this story even existed though reading a chapter refreshed my memory.
Glad you were considerate enough to let us know what has happened. A lot of people just stop communicating and some even outright delete there account without a word.
12/22/2020 c1 1Mpower0438
I think you should space more for paragraphs and dialogue so that the chapters don't seem so cluttered. It would be easier to read and the flow would be better. Good luck.
1Mpower0438I think you should space more for paragraphs and dialogue so that the chapters don't seem so cluttered. It would be easier to read and the flow would be better. Good luck.
1/21/2020 c1 Sinn3r
I understand life is more important but its been several YEARS. Are you still alive?
I understand life is more important but its been several YEARS. Are you still alive?
3/22/2016 c1 1TrueRedDragonGodEmperor
I don't really get why authors decide to make Naruto taller. He isn' suppose to be a giant. Minato Namikaze was 5' 8" and Kushina Uzumaki was 5' 3". So why was Naruto made 6'. It doesn't make sense. Naruto was 5' 4" in canon so it wasn't as if he was stunted by the foxes' power. Additionally, the fox assisted with regeneration and helped keep Naruto alive during some of his fights. He was able to recover faster then other ninjas. That being said, there would be no way that the fox stunted Naruto's growth.
1TrueRedDragonGodEmperorI don't really get why authors decide to make Naruto taller. He isn' suppose to be a giant. Minato Namikaze was 5' 8" and Kushina Uzumaki was 5' 3". So why was Naruto made 6'. It doesn't make sense. Naruto was 5' 4" in canon so it wasn't as if he was stunted by the foxes' power. Additionally, the fox assisted with regeneration and helped keep Naruto alive during some of his fights. He was able to recover faster then other ninjas. That being said, there would be no way that the fox stunted Naruto's growth.