2/25/2013 c5 173HC247
Yay! SO happy to see this updated. I'm glad Nakoma came clean to Pocahontas here. it just shows sometimes, a girl needs her best friend :) And Pocahontas's last line here is priceless and so in character.
Love it! Please bring us more soon!
Yay! SO happy to see this updated. I'm glad Nakoma came clean to Pocahontas here. it just shows sometimes, a girl needs her best friend :) And Pocahontas's last line here is priceless and so in character.
Love it! Please bring us more soon!
2/17/2013 c5 6RhapsodyinB
I'm glad Nakoma is a heroine in this story. It shows that while she remains traditional in some ways, Pocahontas' influence has rubbed off on her.
I'm interested to see where this goes.
I'm glad Nakoma is a heroine in this story. It shows that while she remains traditional in some ways, Pocahontas' influence has rubbed off on her.
I'm interested to see where this goes.
2/15/2013 c5 3DarkRose2006
Thank you for updating! I am glad your life has settled down long enough for you to update! It's great to see the story continuing! As always, loved the chapter, and the angst. I hope you are able to update again soon!
DarkRose2006
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Thank you for updating! I am glad your life has settled down long enough for you to update! It's great to see the story continuing! As always, loved the chapter, and the angst. I hope you are able to update again soon!
DarkRose2006
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11/12/2012 c2 44Jyoti
WOOH! GO NAKOMA! I am so proud of her. Wonderful job. I really like this story.
WOOH! GO NAKOMA! I am so proud of her. Wonderful job. I really like this story.
4/27/2012 c1 Jyoti
Wow this is amazing I really like it. I'm interested to see where this would go. Nahkoma is a great woman and she deserves more. Her husband was way out of line especially talking about Pocahontas like that. But that's what makes the story even more intriguing.
Wow this is amazing I really like it. I'm interested to see where this would go. Nahkoma is a great woman and she deserves more. Her husband was way out of line especially talking about Pocahontas like that. But that's what makes the story even more intriguing.
4/9/2012 c4 7Naerhaella
Very nice chapter! I'm kind of glad that Hassun showed some love and concern for Nakoma :)
Pocahontas has arrived! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Very nice chapter! I'm kind of glad that Hassun showed some love and concern for Nakoma :)
Pocahontas has arrived! Can't wait to see what happens next!
4/3/2012 c4 ladyofwonder
That was a really good and intense chapter.
Great job
I can't wait for more :)
That was a really good and intense chapter.
Great job
I can't wait for more :)
4/1/2012 c4 3DarkRose2006
Thanks for the update! It's great to see the story continue. What an interesting twist you've added to the story, one that I was not expecting. I can't wait to hear more and see where you are going with the story. Please continue and update again soon!
~DarkRose2006
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Thanks for the update! It's great to see the story continue. What an interesting twist you've added to the story, one that I was not expecting. I can't wait to hear more and see where you are going with the story. Please continue and update again soon!
~DarkRose2006
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2/29/2012 c3 7Naerhaella
Great chapter! Love how John is always so emphatic, putting others before his own health :)
Really looking forward to what happens next ;)
Keep up the good work! :D
Great chapter! Love how John is always so emphatic, putting others before his own health :)
Really looking forward to what happens next ;)
Keep up the good work! :D
2/28/2012 c3 3DarkRose2006
Thanks for the update! It was a great continuation to the story. I just can't wait for the next chapter to see what John has planned! I am sure it'll mean a lot of trouble for himself! Update again soon!
~DarkRose2006
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Thanks for the update! It was a great continuation to the story. I just can't wait for the next chapter to see what John has planned! I am sure it'll mean a lot of trouble for himself! Update again soon!
~DarkRose2006
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2/27/2012 c3 HC the too lazy
Oooh! The plot thickens! It's so typical of Nakoma to play the caretaker and she does it so well. It'll be interesting to see what happens when Pocahontas and Powahaton arrive. Hopefully they'll bring a little bit of whoop-*** with them!
Great chapter, girlie! And good to see you writing agina! I missed it and provided the perfect little break from my midterm stress. Looking forward to the next one :)
Oooh! The plot thickens! It's so typical of Nakoma to play the caretaker and she does it so well. It'll be interesting to see what happens when Pocahontas and Powahaton arrive. Hopefully they'll bring a little bit of whoop-*** with them!
Great chapter, girlie! And good to see you writing agina! I missed it and provided the perfect little break from my midterm stress. Looking forward to the next one :)
2/18/2012 c2 DarkRose2006
Beautiful story! I absolutely love it so far! I don't often find good Pocahontas stories that I truly enjoy, but this one I love. I love it when John finds himself in deep trouble. I can't wait to hear more, please update soon! Oh, and one quick little error...in the first chapter I noticed you had 'are tribe' instead of 'our tribe'-just wanted to let you know. Update soon, I'll be waiting!
~DarkRose2006
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Beautiful story! I absolutely love it so far! I don't often find good Pocahontas stories that I truly enjoy, but this one I love. I love it when John finds himself in deep trouble. I can't wait to hear more, please update soon! Oh, and one quick little error...in the first chapter I noticed you had 'are tribe' instead of 'our tribe'-just wanted to let you know. Update soon, I'll be waiting!
~DarkRose2006
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1/20/2012 c2 60doodlegirll
Lovely chapter. :) I enjoyed it.
However, to what extent were John and the others tortured? How, specifically?
I'm interested in seeing how Hassun takes the news that Nakoma helped the others. I hope he doesn't react too violently.
Can't wait for the next chapter. :)
Lovely chapter. :) I enjoyed it.
However, to what extent were John and the others tortured? How, specifically?
I'm interested in seeing how Hassun takes the news that Nakoma helped the others. I hope he doesn't react too violently.
Can't wait for the next chapter. :)
1/20/2012 c2 13babyb26
Wonderful chapter, as always. Go Nakoma, stand up for your people and BFF! I loved this line, "Well, I first get saved by Pocahontas and now you. I must have that affect on the Powhatan women." JS does have that effect doesn't he? I am curious as to what the next chapter will bring us and the relationship development btw JS and Nakoma. Will you be shaking some relationship things up? If so, go for it, change every now and again is interesting!
Wonderful chapter, as always. Go Nakoma, stand up for your people and BFF! I loved this line, "Well, I first get saved by Pocahontas and now you. I must have that affect on the Powhatan women." JS does have that effect doesn't he? I am curious as to what the next chapter will bring us and the relationship development btw JS and Nakoma. Will you be shaking some relationship things up? If so, go for it, change every now and again is interesting!