1/20/2012 c1 13babyb26
OMG, your back! I am on the edge of my seat, dangling from your plot cliff. Such drama already. Great chapter and I am most defiantly intrigued with your plot. I can't wait for more.
OMG, your back! I am on the edge of my seat, dangling from your plot cliff. Such drama already. Great chapter and I am most defiantly intrigued with your plot. I can't wait for more.
1/20/2012 c2 7Naerhaella
Very good chapter!
Kept me glued to the computer screen XD, really intense - could almost feel what John was.
Can't wait for Chief Powhatan to hear about what they are doing -.-
Hopefully he'll get things right.
I love how Nakoma is behaving, very brave - to literary risk her life just to do what is right. :)
Seriously, can't wait for the next chapter!
Keep up the good work! :D
Very good chapter!
Kept me glued to the computer screen XD, really intense - could almost feel what John was.
Can't wait for Chief Powhatan to hear about what they are doing -.-
Hopefully he'll get things right.
I love how Nakoma is behaving, very brave - to literary risk her life just to do what is right. :)
Seriously, can't wait for the next chapter!
Keep up the good work! :D
1/19/2012 c2 173HC247
Another great chapter! I love how John never loses his sarcasm ;)
Sorry for the short review, but I'm in the middle of contracts readings and research, but know I loved it and I can't wait for more!
Another great chapter! I love how John never loses his sarcasm ;)
Sorry for the short review, but I'm in the middle of contracts readings and research, but know I loved it and I can't wait for more!
1/19/2012 c2 ladyofwonder
This was a really intense chapter.
I loved it :)
I can't wait for another chapter :)
This was a really intense chapter.
I loved it :)
I can't wait for another chapter :)
1/17/2012 c1 HC247
Love. this.
I know I told you this before, but this story has so much potential so so amazingly awesome and you're off to a brilliant start already!
I love that you have such an original premise here, and not just the "Poca-meets-smith-drama-free happily-ever-after" that we usually see here (Not that either of us have ever been guilty of that or anything, but ya know...*coughs*)
Anyway, i can't wait to see how you'll develop this. I'm still not really loving Hassan, despite our conversation the other night, but I suppose I'll give the boy a chance. he may have a redeeming quality or two, I guess.
Brilliant job, love! Looking forward to more! :)
Love. this.
I know I told you this before, but this story has so much potential so so amazingly awesome and you're off to a brilliant start already!
I love that you have such an original premise here, and not just the "Poca-meets-smith-drama-free happily-ever-after" that we usually see here (Not that either of us have ever been guilty of that or anything, but ya know...*coughs*)
Anyway, i can't wait to see how you'll develop this. I'm still not really loving Hassan, despite our conversation the other night, but I suppose I'll give the boy a chance. he may have a redeeming quality or two, I guess.
Brilliant job, love! Looking forward to more! :)
1/13/2012 c1 7Naerhaella
I really enjoyed this chapter, I'm very anxious to know what happens with poor John Smith. Also what has been of Pocahontas life :)
Just a question, I'm not such a big fan of the ending of Pocahontas II (Actually hated that she denied John's offer to go with him), so I was wondering : Will it be any possibility that they 'encounter' each other in this story?
Anyway, you don't have to answer if you don't want to ;) Please update soon! and keep up the good work!
I really enjoyed this chapter, I'm very anxious to know what happens with poor John Smith. Also what has been of Pocahontas life :)
Just a question, I'm not such a big fan of the ending of Pocahontas II (Actually hated that she denied John's offer to go with him), so I was wondering : Will it be any possibility that they 'encounter' each other in this story?
Anyway, you don't have to answer if you don't want to ;) Please update soon! and keep up the good work!
1/10/2012 c1 ladyofwonder
I love this fanfiction it is so intense.
I can't wait for another chapter :)
I love this fanfiction it is so intense.
I can't wait for another chapter :)