for White Spirit1/21/2017 c1 Jose19
I hope the story gets updated, and being a spellsword will suit him very well because he could a asset to the world but I wonder if he will regain his memories of his past because Nirn is a very harsh world full of violence and bloodshed.
I hope the story gets updated, and being a spellsword will suit him very well because he could a asset to the world but I wonder if he will regain his memories of his past because Nirn is a very harsh world full of violence and bloodshed.
1/8/2017 c2 Jose19
This is not bad but the Dragonborn has the ability to become a badass if you make him learn all of his shouts he can become very formidable since the Dragonborn has the power of a Dragon inside of him.
The question is what to make him because you are literally trying to become a Spellsword a hybrid warrior and mage.
This is not bad but the Dragonborn has the ability to become a badass if you make him learn all of his shouts he can become very formidable since the Dragonborn has the power of a Dragon inside of him.
The question is what to make him because you are literally trying to become a Spellsword a hybrid warrior and mage.
3/22/2015 c2 Guest
Great story though I want to know what is it with great stories and ending a chapter with a cliff-hanger and not having the next chapter up
Great story though I want to know what is it with great stories and ending a chapter with a cliff-hanger and not having the next chapter up
1/21/2015 c1 
7Myra the Dovahkiin
great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.
Will Niveus ever remember his past as Naruto? Or will he continue on as normal? Also is he aware he was adopted by Savos or does he think that the elf is his grandfather?
7Myra the Dovahkiingreat story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.
Will Niveus ever remember his past as Naruto? Or will he continue on as normal? Also is he aware he was adopted by Savos or does he think that the elf is his grandfather?
4/30/2014 c2 Guest
well I think that you're protagonist should join the companions circle.
well I think that you're protagonist should join the companions circle.
12/31/2013 c2 9Kutasan
It's actually spelled Sovngarde. All Nordic and stuff. Real world Nordic. Good fic, keep it up.
9KutasanIt's actually spelled Sovngarde. All Nordic and stuff. Real world Nordic. Good fic, keep it up.
1/1/2013 c2 7Myra the Dovahkiin
great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.
7Myra the Dovahkiingreat story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.
11/26/2012 c1 1Blogman66
Great story so far! Really interesting compeared to the other Naruto/Elder scrolls x-overs. Hope you update soon.
1Blogman66Great story so far! Really interesting compeared to the other Naruto/Elder scrolls x-overs. Hope you update soon.
6/1/2012 c2 anonymous
hope you can update soon, i like this story
hope you can update soon, i like this story