for The Knight's Diary10/6/2013 c14 
5insanityisablessedgift
I love this story! It's the only Mirai Nikki fanfic I like, and with my favourite couple(Tsubaki and Aru) it makes this reading much more enjoyable. My one suggestion to improve this fic is to re-read your work. You tend to write run-on sentences, so adding a period and it would be fixed in no time! As well, some sentences don't have comas, therefore when reading, there isn't a break for the reader to have. Add some so there could be breaks, therefore makes it more flowing. Otherwise, keep up the good work.
Happy Writing!
5insanityisablessedgiftI love this story! It's the only Mirai Nikki fanfic I like, and with my favourite couple(Tsubaki and Aru) it makes this reading much more enjoyable. My one suggestion to improve this fic is to re-read your work. You tend to write run-on sentences, so adding a period and it would be fixed in no time! As well, some sentences don't have comas, therefore when reading, there isn't a break for the reader to have. Add some so there could be breaks, therefore makes it more flowing. Otherwise, keep up the good work.
Happy Writing!
10/1/2013 c13 Kyaaa
Kyaaaaa tsudere tsubaki is so cute pls update soon (_)
Kyaaaaa tsudere tsubaki is so cute pls update soon (_)
8/16/2013 c8 Guest
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8/16/2013 c14 Guest
FINALLY YOU UPDATED! Great chapter! Please update soon!
FINALLY YOU UPDATED! Great chapter! Please update soon!
8/16/2013 c14 Guest
The last part was cute tsubaki acting all tsudere and stuff xD i love this fanfic pls update soon
The last part was cute tsubaki acting all tsudere and stuff xD i love this fanfic pls update soon
8/16/2013 c13 Guest
Finally an update it felt like i was waiting forever i love this fanfic so much pls update soon
Finally an update it felt like i was waiting forever i love this fanfic so much pls update soon
7/23/2013 c13 Guest
This story is Awesome! I cant believe i just found out about it! Update soon please! :D
This story is Awesome! I cant believe i just found out about it! Update soon please! :D
7/22/2013 c13 27Madcinder
"Either we vote on who gets to be god and then we all tell Deus our decision, or we all stay here and die."
"I vote we all stay and die. But that's just me..."
27Madcinder"Either we vote on who gets to be god and then we all tell Deus our decision, or we all stay here and die."
"I vote we all stay and die. But that's just me..."
7/22/2013 c12 Madcinder
I suspected you might be pulling that one of Mr. Mayor. Very clever, Aru's diary not actually being a future diary. Incidentally, I find myself wondering how the watcher diary spies on 12th's diary. Does the information come out the same way, so the guy has to listen to it?
Also, bath scene.;)
I suspected you might be pulling that one of Mr. Mayor. Very clever, Aru's diary not actually being a future diary. Incidentally, I find myself wondering how the watcher diary spies on 12th's diary. Does the information come out the same way, so the guy has to listen to it?
Also, bath scene.;)
7/20/2013 c5 Madcinder
It's totally believable, really, considering how Aru acted in the actual series. Might be going a bit faster than Tsubaki is comfortable with, but Aru's just like that, isn't he?
It's totally believable, really, considering how Aru acted in the actual series. Might be going a bit faster than Tsubaki is comfortable with, but Aru's just like that, isn't he?
6/25/2013 c13 Guest
I love this! You capture akise and tsubaki personality so well!
I love this! You capture akise and tsubaki personality so well!
6/15/2013 c13 6suinotsuki
An update! *_*
So many feels in this chapter...
I was so scared for Tsubaki!
6suinotsukiAn update! *_*
So many feels in this chapter...
I was so scared for Tsubaki!
6/12/2013 c13 1wilkiswilk
...I spoke too soon in my last review. Now Yuno's on the loose again, and have brainwashed Yukki as well...
But Akise will sort things out, yes? I liked your description of the Yuno and Yukki vs Akise and Tsubaki conflict, and it was a very nice chapter I hope to see more soon
1wilkiswilk...I spoke too soon in my last review. Now Yuno's on the loose again, and have brainwashed Yukki as well...
But Akise will sort things out, yes? I liked your description of the Yuno and Yukki vs Akise and Tsubaki conflict, and it was a very nice chapter I hope to see more soon