for The Knight's Diary2/22/2012 c2 
11Himewolf398
Your grammar isn't really that bad. It's no where near bad where it makes me want to stop reading so don't worry about it. Good chapter and I hope to see you update soon.
11Himewolf398Your grammar isn't really that bad. It's no where near bad where it makes me want to stop reading so don't worry about it. Good chapter and I hope to see you update soon.
2/18/2012 c2 Melchizedek
Cool chapter, please update soon.
Cool chapter, please update soon.
2/14/2012 c2 Balthier
Nice, so Yuno now suspects something is wrong. I'm so betting she is going to try and kill Aru now.
Can't wait for more. Please update soon.
Nice, so Yuno now suspects something is wrong. I'm so betting she is going to try and kill Aru now.
Can't wait for more. Please update soon.
2/5/2012 c2 saphren
Yuno is going to try very hard to kill Akise. So Akise's diary is similar to the fourth's?
Yuno is going to try very hard to kill Akise. So Akise's diary is similar to the fourth's?
1/30/2012 c1 Haruka
This is an interesting story, you should continue it.
Update please!
This is an interesting story, you should continue it.
Update please!
1/29/2012 c1 20EnvyIsMySin
Yes, please continue this! It seems really great, and I absolutely love the AkisexTsubaki pairing! (:
My only suggestion would be to maybe get a beta reader, just for grammar? It's okay, but it seems a bit off to me.
20EnvyIsMySinYes, please continue this! It seems really great, and I absolutely love the AkisexTsubaki pairing! (:
My only suggestion would be to maybe get a beta reader, just for grammar? It's okay, but it seems a bit off to me.
1/16/2012 c1 saphren
The Knight's diary is a pretty strange diary considering that this is Akise we're talking about. So now there are 13 diary users. Yay for AkisexTsubaki my fave pairing in the story!
The Knight's diary is a pretty strange diary considering that this is Akise we're talking about. So now there are 13 diary users. Yay for AkisexTsubaki my fave pairing in the story!
1/15/2012 c1 Melchizedek
Cool, a story with Aru and Tsubaki. Awesome!
Please write more.
Cool, a story with Aru and Tsubaki. Awesome!
Please write more.
1/13/2012 c1 20Fateion
Please continue !
Akise is my favorite character and I think that he should be the main character than yukiteru.
For the story itself is a good start, but I wonder which the future diary holder that you replace so Akise can join
20FateionPlease continue !
Akise is my favorite character and I think that he should be the main character than yukiteru.
For the story itself is a good start, but I wonder which the future diary holder that you replace so Akise can join
1/12/2012 c1 6PrinceofUruk
I love this premise.
But you have bad grammar and have misused alot of words.
Please try to improve that or get a good beta reader/editor.
If this takes off well I will enjoy it alot.
There needs to be more Tsubaki x Akise and Paradox Centric Fics.
6PrinceofUrukI love this premise.
But you have bad grammar and have misused alot of words.
Please try to improve that or get a good beta reader/editor.
If this takes off well I will enjoy it alot.
There needs to be more Tsubaki x Akise and Paradox Centric Fics.
1/12/2012 c1 11Himewolf398
FINALLY! An AkisexTsubaki story! I honestly thought this day would never come. I'm so glad that's not the case. Anyway, it's a good start and I hope you update soon.
11Himewolf398FINALLY! An AkisexTsubaki story! I honestly thought this day would never come. I'm so glad that's not the case. Anyway, it's a good start and I hope you update soon.