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6/25/2012 c1 Slayer the cat
good cover up Ron i bet both of them are red in thy face now
6/17/2012 c1 1Winged Peach
Oh, so adorable! Well done and thank you for sharing!
5/30/2012 c1 AngelaJean
Great story. Loved Ron being all nervous, really in character.
3/22/2012 c1 4Sunaona Shiratori
I absolutely love this pairing, you did an amazing job :)
3/19/2012 c1 2IsabelBlackT
I like the ending. So Ron.
3/3/2012 c1 Y
The last part, OMG! Your Ron is really Ronish.
2/13/2012 c1 88claraowl
*giggle giggle giggle giggle*

Ooh...WOAH!

Yay Crookshanks!

BTW- sometimes you missed a letter, with "on" instead of "one"
2/3/2012 c1 jibbs fan forevermore
: ) amazing.

P.S finish step by step incisor preety preety please
1/29/2012 c1 Kara Shadows
The last two lines! That was fantastic! Harry saw Hermione's bra! God, that was awesome! XD
1/19/2012 c1 Kristina
Love it! The last two sentences made me laugh out loud. Really reallly well- written!
1/17/2012 c1 5FlittingGemini
This. This right here! Everything was fantastic! Ok I read these for the smut and perfection but when Ron can bring Hermione to orgasm instantly the first time they do it, that gets dumb. BUT, you were awesome in that you mixed in real awkwardness with the non-matching set of underwear and the uncertainty of Ron and the pain that Hermione felt when he entered her.

You have an amazing ability to mix the unrealistic and pleasant smut with real love and awkwardness and newness that is supposed to come with sex. Well done! One of my favorites!
1/14/2012 c1 21CocoRocks
Romantic. I loved the ending. it was funny.
1/13/2012 c1 Hpfan
Awesome!
1/13/2012 c1 1ykickamoocow111
Generally speaking a very well written story and one that was also very enjoyable and very erotic as well. Only minor complaint is i don't like how Ron saw Lavender's breasts but other than that like i said it was a very enjoyable story.

Thankyou for writing it.
1/13/2012 c1 banshee1968
Ron's last line was perfect. Thanks

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