for Pull Strings and Strawberry Scents12/18/2017 c6 
47Vampire Tails
Just reminding you that this wonderful story exists. :3
Also, when someone new starts dialogue, they should have their own paragraph. Some areas didn't have that.
Anyway, I loved this so much! please continue!
47Vampire TailsJust reminding you that this wonderful story exists. :3
Also, when someone new starts dialogue, they should have their own paragraph. Some areas didn't have that.
Anyway, I loved this so much! please continue!
2/19/2013 c6 2SnarkyAndProudHufflepuff
So I read this from this is the first time that I have read this, and the first time that I have reviewed your story. Your story is quite interesting with the plot; I don't see any obvious spelling/grammar mistakes in this.
Although if I could give out a little tip I like stories where when a character(s) speak that they are in different sentences; paragraphs. You've got them munched together several times and it is kind of difficult seeing who is talking.
Other than that I enjoy this; though I am curious if there are any canon toys from any of the movies that are going to be in this story. If not that's fine; I'm just curious. I like this so far; great job.
2SnarkyAndProudHufflepuffSo I read this from this is the first time that I have read this, and the first time that I have reviewed your story. Your story is quite interesting with the plot; I don't see any obvious spelling/grammar mistakes in this.
Although if I could give out a little tip I like stories where when a character(s) speak that they are in different sentences; paragraphs. You've got them munched together several times and it is kind of difficult seeing who is talking.
Other than that I enjoy this; though I am curious if there are any canon toys from any of the movies that are going to be in this story. If not that's fine; I'm just curious. I like this so far; great job.
3/2/2012 c1 AwkwardChic
i like it! at first i thought Lotso was gonna hurt jessie again! it was epic!
i like it! at first i thought Lotso was gonna hurt jessie again! it was epic!