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12/18/2017 c6 47Vampire Tails
Just reminding you that this wonderful story exists. :3
Also, when someone new starts dialogue, they should have their own paragraph. Some areas didn't have that.
Anyway, I loved this so much! please continue!
2/19/2013 c6 2SnarkyAndProudHufflepuff
So I read this from this is the first time that I have read this, and the first time that I have reviewed your story. Your story is quite interesting with the plot; I don't see any obvious spelling/grammar mistakes in this.

Although if I could give out a little tip I like stories where when a character(s) speak that they are in different sentences; paragraphs. You've got them munched together several times and it is kind of difficult seeing who is talking.

Other than that I enjoy this; though I am curious if there are any canon toys from any of the movies that are going to be in this story. If not that's fine; I'm just curious. I like this so far; great job.
4/18/2012 c5 8shadowlord123456
What happens next?
3/2/2012 c1 AwkwardChic
i like it! at first i thought Lotso was gonna hurt jessie again! it was epic!
2/2/2012 c3 109purpledragon6
1/18/2012 c2 purpledragon6
1/14/2012 c1 purpledragon6
This story is... Adorable! I luv it! Plz update!

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