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4/9/2012 c6 Annie
I really love this fic and it's a shame that you're losing momentum on it. May I suggest that if you're losing your muse you watch episodes with plenty of Steve/Kono interaction or reading other fics on the pairing, it might help. I hope you gain momentum again soon as I'm keen to read more!
3/10/2012 c6 5christinaxa
Oh my, another hot chapter, Merl! Such a busy couple we've got here, having sex all over the place. But I can totally see them doing that just; their personalities go right along with it. I like how you also dug a little bit into Kono's feelings, I'm definitely looking forward to more of their insights on their new "relationship."

I don't really have a specific prompt or suggestion, but I'm assuming that this is taking place while Lori is still on the team right? (Around episode 15). So maybe you could write something from the governor's ball they attended in episode 16? I thought Steve and Kono looked so good in their outfits, shame that they didn't have any scenes alone.
3/10/2012 c6 sphekie
So does chin & Danny know Steve/kono r together? Awesome chapter by the way, I can't get enough of them too.
3/10/2012 c6 30Nienna Tinehtele
That was hot! lol and there doesn't need to be a special reason for writing smut...you know you always have readers who will read it. Loved it!
3/10/2012 c6 36francis2
Phew, hot! I so envy Kono right now. I guess Danny and Chin will have a field day finding them like this.
3/10/2012 c6 bushy4
Great chapter. Very hot and I loved it! I love anything you write

A small idea for a one shot

What if Steve and Kono had a bet over drinks that they can get anyone they wanted in the bar. Jealousy insues and then they figure out they want each other.
3/10/2012 c6 sky
just one word HOT
3/10/2012 c6 4Ghostrider
Very hot scenes these last two chapters ;-)

As for your muse, hmmm, let me think...

Don't know how you feel about Tony Archer, but what about a bit with him and Kono as they go out to talk to the lady in the last episode? Or Tony and Steve, maybe Danny, on the boat at the end? He DID offer to be their Yenta/Mother Hen, didn't he? Not to mention the fact he's Old Style New Yawk. I shudder to think of what would happen if Tony and Joe ever meet up. It'd be much like Grumpy Ol' McGarrett and Williams. Imagine Steve and Danny watching that, Chin shaking his head, smiling that small smile of his, Kono helplessly snorting and Doc wondering if the space-time continuum somehow has inverted back on itself (I think)
3/10/2012 c6 18cm757
so maybe you've lost a little momentum on this fic. You know what, who cares? It's still a beautiful story, amazingly written, and it's still hot as hell. So keep working on it, because I'll tell you what, we're all gonna be anxiously waiting for the next chapter.

Great work ;)
3/10/2012 c6 3TvFanatic97
I'm glad that you continued from the last chapter because I wanted to see whether they'd be in an awkward morning after situation but they most definitely were not ;) if you have lost momentum on this fic then I'm happy with waiting with no updates until you get your muse! Update soon please (if possible).
3/9/2012 c6 7teenycee
OMFG. THAT IS SO HOT.
3/9/2012 c6 44Sidalee
Wow, that was super hot yet very tasteful at the same time. I like Kono's easygoing acceptance about they altered relationship and bonus points for her wearing Steve's clothes.

I love this fic.
3/5/2012 c5 7poisonedship
This wasn't the last chapter, was it? I hope there's more.
3/3/2012 c5 36francis2
This was all kinds of awesome.
2/27/2012 c5 sphekie
Yes! Steve finally get his girl..lol!

So glad u post this chapter up...this story is amazing and the scene w/Steve & kono was intensely HOT! ;)

Thanks for ur chapter! Keep up with u good work!
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