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11/15/2014 c1 8579
Looking forward to your next story of this pairing.
6/11/2014 c1 5Hanataba
Really enjoyed this - if only longer :) I'd love to see more of them from you _
10/11/2013 c1 it iz wat it iz
write more :)
7/2/2013 c1 freah breath
Sorry was too lazy to login. Anyway i liked it was pretty dope. Good job,i give you 5 stars.
7/1/2013 c1 Fresh breath
I have to say I loved the beginning paragraph. Very nice and unique.
7/1/2013 c1 Fresh breath
Was too lazy to post as myself but I have to say that you did a brilliant job. It was dope I loved it. They all in character which is great. And to be frank with u I loved this pairing. Its is sad though how they're little fanfics bout these 2. I love the dialogue between these two! Great job. I give ya 5 STARS! They sky is the limit when it comes to fanfic and crack pairings can be awesome. Good jobo! Don't know why found this pairing sooner.
4/7/2013 c1 Guest
You bastard!

I was looking for the next chapter button and saw none. D:

I was soo entranced in your story. I love this paring, and your writing is fa nominal!

You should definitely make this into a story.
7/19/2012 c1 nindjo
that was a great storry and just what i was looking for azain playing with yoruichi's heart and fears thanks for posting this
7/17/2012 c1 evanesco99211
Wow, very believable! To wake up from a dream which is in another dream which is in yet another dream is kinda fun and interesting (I've had it once) as long it's not this kind of creepy. No one likes the feeling of being helpless especially in the presence of such psyco...

I doubt anyone even someone as strong as Yoruichi or Ichigo, heck even Kenpachi, wouldn't be rattled after such nightmare.
2/26/2012 c1 10ShizukaYuukiMistress10
I really did love this pairing in your story! It was so well written and your unique idea was brilliant! ;-PP Great story!
1/19/2012 c1 bellaluna88
Loved this story! I have really been wanting to read some Aizen and Yourichi stories but I could never find any. I'm not sure if this is a one shot but if it's not I hope your able to update soon. :)
1/16/2012 c1 Silvermist76
First of, I love the title :)

I just saw the text you sent me yesterday where you said that the title was based of a quote you liked from HG. But really, this title is much better than the one I suggested :P

So on with the story. I really liked this masquerade concept, it's definitely interesting. Your opening paragraph was great. It really caught my attention especially the 'Others mingled, glasses of wine or flutes of champagne adorning one of their manicured hands, extravagant masks covering their faces, and their very laughter elegant in nature.'

I can imagine Yoruichi and Aizen being that mysterious and amazing duo right at the centre with all the spotlights on them. This wasn't OOC, so don't worry. Though at times I did sort of get confused by who was speaking-I had to read it twice or thrice before I fully understood it. But that's not a big problem, it still was pretty good :)

I liked how this had a nice flow to it. You didn't change scenes abruptly. Like how they went from the ballroom to the balcony and then to her bedroom. Now the question is, was it real or not real? ;)

I'd say it's not real..Aizen's a powerful person so maybe this whole thing was an illusion? Or wait, it's an illusion inside an illusion! Haha kinda like Inception then :P

He kissed her and she didn’t react.

Damn it. I wanted her to bite his lips or something! He deserves it :P

Okay so I did spot a few mistakes here and there, but they’re really tiny.

For example :

‘bedroo,m’ should be ‘bedroom’. It’s a small typo so chillax.

‘She took in breath’ , there should be an ‘a’ between in and breath. Once again it’s a small error 

And that’s about it! :D

So when are you going to write the sequel? This totally deserves a follow up chapter, I mean I’m confused; was it real or not real?

Keep up the good work :)

1/15/2012 c1 1112hinata123
Words could not begin to describe how much I enjoyed reading your story. I read it twice before reviewing for it. you didn't have to worry about the characters being ooc because they were in character. You took two of my favorite characters and created an awesome story with them. You should continue this story or make another with Yoruichi and Aizen. I know many readers will agree when I say you did very well with this story.
1/15/2012 c1 53Sariniste
Well, this was unexpected and original and brightened my morning. Both Aizen and Yoruichi are in-character and the storyline is tantalizing and chilling. Only a few small grammatical and spelling errors to mar the surface of this lovely word painting.

You should keep writing about these two, since you do them so well. Definitely an unusual pairing but they are both wonderful characters and certainly two of my favorites.

Excellent job!
1/15/2012 c1 Guest
I like it so far! Please update soon'

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