
12/7/2014 c5 kurttylover1209
fucking awesome chapter please make more!
fucking awesome chapter please make more!
1/18/2012 c3 TheEmberRaven
Ok, here's my thoughts on this chapter. (I notice I'm kinda alone over here in the review box *sniff*) Anyway, this is good and your holding back info to keep me hooked. Might I suggest checking your spelling carefully before submitting, though? I caught some mistakes, which is ok, but good spelling is much appreciated. Just a thought.
Ok, here's my thoughts on this chapter. (I notice I'm kinda alone over here in the review box *sniff*) Anyway, this is good and your holding back info to keep me hooked. Might I suggest checking your spelling carefully before submitting, though? I caught some mistakes, which is ok, but good spelling is much appreciated. Just a thought.
1/16/2012 c1 TheEmberRaven
Ooh I likey likey. Good characters, believable dialouge, cool action. Next chappie!
Ooh I likey likey. Good characters, believable dialouge, cool action. Next chappie!