
1/24/2012 c4 LazyNezumi
Oh that's getting pretty interesting I shall say. Liked the bit about garden,great idea. Update as soon as you can please ;3
~Akai-Miko
Oh that's getting pretty interesting I shall say. Liked the bit about garden,great idea. Update as soon as you can please ;3
~Akai-Miko
1/23/2012 c1 JenovaJuice97
I absolutely loved when Nanao said, "When I die." I can see her saying that straight faced in a monotone voice.
I absolutely loved when Nanao said, "When I die." I can see her saying that straight faced in a monotone voice.
1/23/2012 c4 Skyethestarlitangel
I really like this story. Update soon.
I really like this story. Update soon.
1/20/2012 c3
21VeVe2491
Two things -
1) Just googled Shunsui and Oh My Chad! He is elderly :O
2)I'm so confused :L
But minus my confusion since I'm not exactly a Bleach fan, I am enjoying this :D Please update Asap! ^_^

Two things -
1) Just googled Shunsui and Oh My Chad! He is elderly :O
2)I'm so confused :L
But minus my confusion since I'm not exactly a Bleach fan, I am enjoying this :D Please update Asap! ^_^
1/18/2012 c2 Snowkid
aaaaw hisagi is so cuteeeee, more like nice but i love him xD
poor shun! he should lighten up some! xD
aaaaw hisagi is so cuteeeee, more like nice but i love him xD
poor shun! he should lighten up some! xD
1/17/2012 c1
2cherryblossomnights
This is pretty good for a first story!
I'd like to compliment you're word choice. You have a great vocabulary.
However, something to work on would be to try to make sure your sentences don't run on for too long without the proper punctuation. That'll really help with the fluency of the story and will be easier to read.
Very good though!

This is pretty good for a first story!
I'd like to compliment you're word choice. You have a great vocabulary.
However, something to work on would be to try to make sure your sentences don't run on for too long without the proper punctuation. That'll really help with the fluency of the story and will be easier to read.
Very good though!