
12/11/2013 c1
7AnimeOwl
I hardly ever cry when I read things and this almost made me... T.T have you ever read the Maze Runner Trilogy? Cause based on this fanfic I think you'd like it. There's a disease and everything and people running around trying to find an impossible cure...yeah, you might wanna check it out.

I hardly ever cry when I read things and this almost made me... T.T have you ever read the Maze Runner Trilogy? Cause based on this fanfic I think you'd like it. There's a disease and everything and people running around trying to find an impossible cure...yeah, you might wanna check it out.
6/12/2013 c1 kitty
That was SSSOOOOOO SSSAAADDDi feel like im going to cry
That was SSSOOOOOO SSSAAADDDi feel like im going to cry
12/31/2012 c1
13Vatala Darkmist
No, no that's okay I wasn't using my heart you can just have it instead of reaching inside my chest and ripping it out painfully ;A;

No, no that's okay I wasn't using my heart you can just have it instead of reaching inside my chest and ripping it out painfully ;A;
9/22/2012 c1 Acemoneybags
This...was amazing. I cried. For once, I actually cried. Thank you for writing such a sad tale. I'm happy that this was created. I can't find the right words to describe this story. Thank you.
This...was amazing. I cried. For once, I actually cried. Thank you for writing such a sad tale. I'm happy that this was created. I can't find the right words to describe this story. Thank you.
7/12/2012 c1 Guest
Awesome!
Awesome!
5/23/2012 c1
2RedRose43
i started baeling my eyes out the second i read that natsu got bit. this was amazing and so fucking sad im crying so hard haha. this was reeeeeeeeeeealy good!(:

i started baeling my eyes out the second i read that natsu got bit. this was amazing and so fucking sad im crying so hard haha. this was reeeeeeeeeeealy good!(:
2/20/2012 c1
7Neguru Sucashi
Oh my god, your story really pierced my heart. Made me shiver all the way till the end, very good job! :)

Oh my god, your story really pierced my heart. Made me shiver all the way till the end, very good job! :)
1/22/2012 c1
12TheAliensDidIt
...My God. I'm just... I'm speechless. I can't even begin to describe the raw emotion, the suspense...
The thing I loved the most was your ability to get the mood of the story just right. I felt the desperation, the terror, the love - I felt like I was right there, with Lucy and Natsu and everyone else, watching them like a movie.
Everyone was in character, especially Natsu at the end. I can totally picture him sacrificing himself like that - and dying with a smile, too.
The only thing that sounded wrong in your story was this:
"There stood Erza, surrounded by the bloodied and severed bodies of her comrades, Gray and Juvia. Blood was splattered around the tent walls, and dripped from Erza's fanged mouth. Her red eyes glowed with bloodlust as she lunged forward, aiming for Lucy.
Lucy screamed, ducking and avoiding the attack, but before she could do anything else, a clawed hand clamped down on her shoulder.
It was Gray, with glowing red eyes and fanged teeth."
Now generally, "severed" means that you get your neck cut off. Gray shouldn't be able to attack anyone if he's headless.
That's okay though, your fic is still beautifully written. Amazing job.

...My God. I'm just... I'm speechless. I can't even begin to describe the raw emotion, the suspense...
The thing I loved the most was your ability to get the mood of the story just right. I felt the desperation, the terror, the love - I felt like I was right there, with Lucy and Natsu and everyone else, watching them like a movie.
Everyone was in character, especially Natsu at the end. I can totally picture him sacrificing himself like that - and dying with a smile, too.
The only thing that sounded wrong in your story was this:
"There stood Erza, surrounded by the bloodied and severed bodies of her comrades, Gray and Juvia. Blood was splattered around the tent walls, and dripped from Erza's fanged mouth. Her red eyes glowed with bloodlust as she lunged forward, aiming for Lucy.
Lucy screamed, ducking and avoiding the attack, but before she could do anything else, a clawed hand clamped down on her shoulder.
It was Gray, with glowing red eyes and fanged teeth."
Now generally, "severed" means that you get your neck cut off. Gray shouldn't be able to attack anyone if he's headless.
That's okay though, your fic is still beautifully written. Amazing job.
1/19/2012 c1
13xXx Fantasy xXx
I cried. Ohmygod. It's just too sad.
Don't get me wrong, it's super well-written and stuff!
But soooooo sad.
Good job :')

I cried. Ohmygod. It's just too sad.
Don't get me wrong, it's super well-written and stuff!
But soooooo sad.
Good job :')
1/18/2012 c1 nactive.Writer
I remember this story :D I think I was one of those people who favourited but didn't leave a review :0 I'm sorry . But anyways, the first time I read it I almost cried at the end! So sad T.T This story was well written :) Hope to see more stories from you in the near future
I remember this story :D I think I was one of those people who favourited but didn't leave a review :0 I'm sorry . But anyways, the first time I read it I almost cried at the end! So sad T.T This story was well written :) Hope to see more stories from you in the near future
1/18/2012 c1
4OctoberSkyes
Its just so depressing and beautiful and emotional….and depressing….
Argh, I can’t type when think straight when I’m crying….let alone type.
Still, the plot and emotion is exceptional, I love it (though its just so damn sad at the end).
Thank you sososososo much for re-uploading this one!
Now can you pleeeeeeeeeeeease upload "Lucy"?
-Autumn S.

Its just so depressing and beautiful and emotional….and depressing….
Argh, I can’t type when think straight when I’m crying….let alone type.
Still, the plot and emotion is exceptional, I love it (though its just so damn sad at the end).
Thank you sososososo much for re-uploading this one!
Now can you pleeeeeeeeeeeease upload "Lucy"?
-Autumn S.
1/17/2012 c1
2Mayonaka Kage
Awwwwwwww! So sad *tears* but pretty good I've never read a zombie apocalypse fanfic before so congrats to u for having one ( mumbles: wonderin when so done would make one )

Awwwwwwww! So sad *tears* but pretty good I've never read a zombie apocalypse fanfic before so congrats to u for having one ( mumbles: wonderin when so done would make one )