for Someone Like You3/2/2012 c1 
1MsEm
I had to re-read this whole story again after the surprise ending! Great job write this. I absolutely loved it!
1MsEmI had to re-read this whole story again after the surprise ending! Great job write this. I absolutely loved it!
3/2/2012 c1 31Rebadams7
So sad, so misunderstood. not much help for anyone in those days
and now, darkness falls for them all
Sigh
R
31Rebadams7So sad, so misunderstood. not much help for anyone in those days
and now, darkness falls for them all
Sigh
R
3/2/2012 c1 papillione
Wow,so sad.So far it is the best entry I've read!I did suspect that Bella has a split personality at about the middle,but it is a great idea!I still thought about this story after two daysyou did really great!I wish you the best of luck for the contest!
Wow,so sad.So far it is the best entry I've read!I did suspect that Bella has a split personality at about the middle,but it is a great idea!I still thought about this story after two daysyou did really great!I wish you the best of luck for the contest!
3/1/2012 c1 ybee
Loved every minute of it! Wished it didn't have to end like that, of course. So beautifully written... Going to check out your multi-chapter fic now!
Loved every minute of it! Wished it didn't have to end like that, of course. So beautifully written... Going to check out your multi-chapter fic now!
2/29/2012 c1 Elli-Iris
Wow. What an amazing story. I read it on my phone today so I couldn't review with detail as I go like I like to. The thought of his cheating was killing me. And to know he wasn't. Not really. That Bella was more than mentally ill, she was living with two separate personalities. Yes he loved them both. He didn't want to lose either. But he was ready to confront her with it. He thought he found his Bella again. But she ended them both. So many tears. Him having to find her that way. She wouldn't harm a fly, but herself. She thought she was giving herself to him so he can be happy. But that will never happen. He will have to live without them both. Bella and Maribel. "The deer gives its life so that we can live." Perhaps she is finally setting him free. Will he ever get over this? Will Alice? So very sad. Everyday a struggle for her just to get out of bed. Her suffering is done but theirs has only begun. And she dies not knowing. Not understanding.
Very well written. The secret was kept from me to the very end.
Iris~Elli
Wow. What an amazing story. I read it on my phone today so I couldn't review with detail as I go like I like to. The thought of his cheating was killing me. And to know he wasn't. Not really. That Bella was more than mentally ill, she was living with two separate personalities. Yes he loved them both. He didn't want to lose either. But he was ready to confront her with it. He thought he found his Bella again. But she ended them both. So many tears. Him having to find her that way. She wouldn't harm a fly, but herself. She thought she was giving herself to him so he can be happy. But that will never happen. He will have to live without them both. Bella and Maribel. "The deer gives its life so that we can live." Perhaps she is finally setting him free. Will he ever get over this? Will Alice? So very sad. Everyday a struggle for her just to get out of bed. Her suffering is done but theirs has only begun. And she dies not knowing. Not understanding.
Very well written. The secret was kept from me to the very end.
Iris~Elli
2/29/2012 c1 kneon
Wow, this was really good. I hope I'm right, but Bella and Maribel are the same person? Bella, either has bio polar or split personality.
I was shocked by the ending. Poor Edward at first I was so mad at him, but he was really stuck in a sad situation.
Wow, this was really good. I hope I'm right, but Bella and Maribel are the same person? Bella, either has bio polar or split personality.
I was shocked by the ending. Poor Edward at first I was so mad at him, but he was really stuck in a sad situation.
2/28/2012 c1 itsanewday
Wow! I'm kinda speechless right now...You are a fantastic writer. I read all the chapters of High Fidelity yesterday and now this. Amazing!
Wow! I'm kinda speechless right now...You are a fantastic writer. I read all the chapters of High Fidelity yesterday and now this. Amazing!
2/27/2012 c1 1DMBSJB18
Holy crud, that caught me off guard. Beautiful. A little confused though.. why did everyone consider that cheating? Why did everyone else talk about it like it was two seperate people?
Very strongly written. I love it.
1DMBSJB18Holy crud, that caught me off guard. Beautiful. A little confused though.. why did everyone consider that cheating? Why did everyone else talk about it like it was two seperate people?
Very strongly written. I love it.
2/27/2012 c1 DMBSJB18
Holy crud, that caught me off guard. Beautiful. A little confused though.. why did everyone consider that cheating? Why did everyone else talk about it like it was two seperate people?
Very strongly written. I love it.
Holy crud, that caught me off guard. Beautiful. A little confused though.. why did everyone consider that cheating? Why did everyone else talk about it like it was two seperate people?
Very strongly written. I love it.
2/25/2012 c1 2Capricorn75
Damn, girl, you made me cry. That was exquisitely written! So much sorrow, pain, and hope combined into one story. My heart is broken for all of them.
2Capricorn75Damn, girl, you made me cry. That was exquisitely written! So much sorrow, pain, and hope combined into one story. My heart is broken for all of them.
2/22/2012 c1 16Jessypt
This was absolutely devastating and so, so well written! It took me a bit to realize the twist but my head is still swirling with what-ifs. One of the best entries I've read!
Well done, bb!
Jess xoxo
16JessyptThis was absolutely devastating and so, so well written! It took me a bit to realize the twist but my head is still swirling with what-ifs. One of the best entries I've read!
Well done, bb!
Jess xoxo
2/22/2012 c1 Jessica0306
I started reading HF yesterday, and then I told my friend about it (see her review below). Then, she read this, and told me not to read it bc it would crush me. SHE WAS RIGHT. I mean, of course I read it. The writing is excellent. The story is heartbreaking. And the love and devotion Edward has is amazing. Great job, and thanks for the broken heart. ;)
I started reading HF yesterday, and then I told my friend about it (see her review below). Then, she read this, and told me not to read it bc it would crush me. SHE WAS RIGHT. I mean, of course I read it. The writing is excellent. The story is heartbreaking. And the love and devotion Edward has is amazing. Great job, and thanks for the broken heart. ;)
2/22/2012 c1 4chosmer
So, your story was a total Debbie Downer. I had my friend Jess read it. This is us from work chat today:
Jessica: can we talk about our stories?
Jessica: Or something.
Jessica: To keep me from committing a maribella
Christina: oh gawd
Christina: that story
Christina: At first I was all... I HATE YOU EDWARD... SHE NEEDS YOU... YOU ARE MAKING HER WORSE
Christina: Then I was all (insert 'Y U NO' icon)
Christina: (insert Holy Crap face icon)
Christina: (Inset hysterically crying icon)
Jessica: She wanted to be better for him.
Christina: I love how he talks about her... how much he adored her...
Christina: she was always it for him
Jessica: THE ONLY ONE
Jessica: He asked her for a year to marry him, pursued her...
Christina: (about to cry icon)
Jessica: He felt bad for cheating on her...WITH HER!
Christina: why story, why!
Jessica: you just HAD to go and read it.
4chosmerSo, your story was a total Debbie Downer. I had my friend Jess read it. This is us from work chat today:
Jessica: can we talk about our stories?
Jessica: Or something.
Jessica: To keep me from committing a maribella
Christina: oh gawd
Christina: that story
Christina: At first I was all... I HATE YOU EDWARD... SHE NEEDS YOU... YOU ARE MAKING HER WORSE
Christina: Then I was all (insert 'Y U NO' icon)
Christina: (insert Holy Crap face icon)
Christina: (Inset hysterically crying icon)
Jessica: She wanted to be better for him.
Christina: I love how he talks about her... how much he adored her...
Christina: she was always it for him
Jessica: THE ONLY ONE
Jessica: He asked her for a year to marry him, pursued her...
Christina: (about to cry icon)
Jessica: He felt bad for cheating on her...WITH HER!
Christina: why story, why!
Jessica: you just HAD to go and read it.
2/22/2012 c1 cullenbabe
This is truly heartbreaking. I didn't see where your story twisted in the end. Great job :)
This is truly heartbreaking. I didn't see where your story twisted in the end. Great job :)