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1/19/2012 c1 3Whitlock's Darlin
Beautifully written. I knew there was going to be SOMETHING with the tragedy label, but the twist caught me completely off guard. Incredibly moving story. Great job.
1/19/2012 c1 DeirdreJG
So amazing. So sad. Too bad E couldn't get there in time.
1/18/2012 c1 3Orchid Child
I get it.

I see it as Bella had a personality disorder?

And her dual personality would sometimes take over and Edward would slowly fall for Maribel because she was more normal because she was more in the know while Bella struggled, right? Maybe not, I'm not sure.

But it is tragic how Bella would see herself in the mirror and think she saw Maribel and so forth.

oh goodness this was beautifully written.

But I would love it if you would reply to tell me if I'm right or not. XD
1/18/2012 c1 Twilightlvr1
Wow, I thought that was very powerful and very skillfully written. I pride myself on being able to figure things out, but your story my dear totally blew me away. I actually went back and read it a 2nd time so I could pick up on your little clues as to what is really going on. I could actually feel Bellas pain and confusion through your words. As well as Edward being so torn - in the middle as to what he should do. He knows if she finds out the truth he might lose his "comfort" forever. While incredibly sad, I salute you on a very clever one shot.
1/18/2012 c1 1123xoxo3211
I love this. I don't want to sound stupid, but the ending confused me a little. Who is Maribel?
1/18/2012 c1 ReluctantRomantic
Wow. This was incredibly well done. It's not often that I don't see the twist coming, and I confess, you caught me completely off-guard.

Beautifully written and told. Thank you!
1/18/2012 c1 1LoVe4ever666
That was amazing, I only wish it continued just a little further. But great none the less.
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