for Naruto: storming heritage9/30/2017 c1 Guest
fox forest
gaga grounds
snake swamp
fox forest
gaga grounds
snake swamp
4/5/2016 c1 Guest
Dame this wes good
Dame this wes good
1/22/2012 c1 
4SoulToSqueez
Hey where is the warning about me and a spoon ! :D
the story is so much better now there are brackets don't you think so? :P
(Look you have another review!) :D
STS xx
4SoulToSqueezHey where is the warning about me and a spoon ! :D
the story is so much better now there are brackets don't you think so? :P
(Look you have another review!) :D
STS xx
1/18/2012 c1 MrGoodyTwoShoes
You need to be using actual quotation marks ("") around the speaking parts.
You need to be using actual quotation marks ("") around the speaking parts.
1/18/2012 c1 Tobi Fan 321
Ever heard of brackets? You know the "(enter speech here)" is usually how a reader knows that someone is talking. Please fix that if you want people to enjoy reading this story.
Ever heard of brackets? You know the "(enter speech here)" is usually how a reader knows that someone is talking. Please fix that if you want people to enjoy reading this story.