
5/26/2013 c1 TheChaosRider
The other reviews are right you really should make another chapter or give the rights to someone else who will continue it
The other reviews are right you really should make another chapter or give the rights to someone else who will continue it
11/28/2012 c1 k
keep it coming!
keep it coming!
11/20/2012 c1 Guest
i think is a great story hope to see the next ch.
i think is a great story hope to see the next ch.
4/6/2012 c1
6thesuspectingheroine
come on it was just getting good can you hurry and do the next chapter?

come on it was just getting good can you hurry and do the next chapter?