for Red Riding Hood2/12/2013 c3 Miyoko
Oh my gosh :) Wow this chapter was so amazing! I could picture every moment of it - the scenery reminds me a little bit if Mammoth or Ojai, California (Ojai is the quietest place you'll probably ever go to, I visited with my Parents for my fourteenth birthday xD) It reminds me kinda like Twilight (now I'm not a twilight fan trust me) the whole secret identity thing, shape shifting into a wolf- that is like kinda similar :) this is so much better than twilight believe me :) and this coming from a
Girl who knows people who just "Love" twilight and who talk about it 'all' the time and- um well I'm getting off topic here heehee sorry :) but anyway wonderful story here :) I love it! I love it more than fruit tarts (I'm a huge fan of fruit tarts heehee - )
Oh my gosh :) Wow this chapter was so amazing! I could picture every moment of it - the scenery reminds me a little bit if Mammoth or Ojai, California (Ojai is the quietest place you'll probably ever go to, I visited with my Parents for my fourteenth birthday xD) It reminds me kinda like Twilight (now I'm not a twilight fan trust me) the whole secret identity thing, shape shifting into a wolf- that is like kinda similar :) this is so much better than twilight believe me :) and this coming from a
Girl who knows people who just "Love" twilight and who talk about it 'all' the time and- um well I'm getting off topic here heehee sorry :) but anyway wonderful story here :) I love it! I love it more than fruit tarts (I'm a huge fan of fruit tarts heehee - )
2/11/2013 c13 Guest
Oh my goodness this chapter was amazing! I read from the very beginning and loved every bit. You should totally write more chapters :) what more can I say? I'm hooked :) thanks so much for writing this :) Alice
Oh my goodness this chapter was amazing! I read from the very beginning and loved every bit. You should totally write more chapters :) what more can I say? I'm hooked :) thanks so much for writing this :) Alice
1/13/2013 c6 Guest
i am enjoying it so far
i am enjoying it so far
12/30/2012 c13 
1ichigo kurosakee
AWESOME! I loved this chapter! I'm so happy that I was right about Charlie, but I hope Cailyn doesn't get hurt by all this. Thanks for updating! :D
-soulreaperforlife
1ichigo kurosakeeAWESOME! I loved this chapter! I'm so happy that I was right about Charlie, but I hope Cailyn doesn't get hurt by all this. Thanks for updating! :D
-soulreaperforlife
11/17/2012 c4 Ruby
Fix your grammar, there's some misspelled words and mixed up homophones, but otherwise it's really good! Also, I'm a big fan of Red Riding Hood too, I'm writing a version of it for my English class.
Fix your grammar, there's some misspelled words and mixed up homophones, but otherwise it's really good! Also, I'm a big fan of Red Riding Hood too, I'm writing a version of it for my English class.
11/8/2012 c12 3Bianca Bonami
Ok, really, that almost got tears in my eyes! (almost 'cause I'm cold hearted XD)
Please, keep on with this story, it's lovely! Although there are some grammar mistaked, but that's ok, everyone get those kind of mistakes
I loved it so far!
3Bianca BonamiOk, really, that almost got tears in my eyes! (almost 'cause I'm cold hearted XD)
Please, keep on with this story, it's lovely! Although there are some grammar mistaked, but that's ok, everyone get those kind of mistakes
I loved it so far!
10/21/2012 c12 Guest
COME on wright already dont just leave me hanging what happens !
COME on wright already dont just leave me hanging what happens !
10/20/2012 c6 Guest
this is awesome you got some serious talent that coming from a actual a
author you could go far but remember deatail you forgot that tell them what did have for breakfast?
this is awesome you got some serious talent that coming from a actual a
author you could go far but remember deatail you forgot that tell them what did have for breakfast?
9/15/2012 c12 13Softdream
Omigod her mom pimp slapped her? My dad said he was an alchoholic but he never actually got drunk i always think of how awesome my life is when i read stuff like this and then i think how i wish you would update
13SoftdreamOmigod her mom pimp slapped her? My dad said he was an alchoholic but he never actually got drunk i always think of how awesome my life is when i read stuff like this and then i think how i wish you would update
9/15/2012 c12 1ichigo kurosakee
;-; yes Cailyn, let out! Thank god for Kyle. I figured out what Charlie was after I reviewed last time, and you milady, are a very amazing writer! Kyle vs Charlie...epic. I know that the little red riding hood section of ff doesn't get visitors that often, but how can you have only 7 reviews?! 8 with this one but still! I am in love with this story. Thank you so much for updating :) This is an awesome weekend already.
-Soulreaperforlife3
1ichigo kurosakee;-; yes Cailyn, let out! Thank god for Kyle. I figured out what Charlie was after I reviewed last time, and you milady, are a very amazing writer! Kyle vs Charlie...epic. I know that the little red riding hood section of ff doesn't get visitors that often, but how can you have only 7 reviews?! 8 with this one but still! I am in love with this story. Thank you so much for updating :) This is an awesome weekend already.
-Soulreaperforlife3
8/26/2012 c11 Soulreaper4life
Yay! This chapter was awesome, there were a few grammatical errors but they weren't that big. As for the next chapter, I think that the action between Cailyn and her mom is a great idea. :) thank you.
-Soulreaperforlife
Yay! This chapter was awesome, there were a few grammatical errors but they weren't that big. As for the next chapter, I think that the action between Cailyn and her mom is a great idea. :) thank you.
-Soulreaperforlife
8/5/2012 c10 Soulreaperforlif
:) this made my morning. Thanks! This story is awesome and I laugh sometimes so I enjoy reading this! Thanks for updating:)
:) this made my morning. Thanks! This story is awesome and I laugh sometimes so I enjoy reading this! Thanks for updating:)
8/2/2012 c9 ichigo kurosakee
This is amazing! I love this story so much, I was sad when I saw that I had read all of the chapters but I hope you'll update soon:)
This is amazing! I love this story so much, I was sad when I saw that I had read all of the chapters but I hope you'll update soon:)
8/2/2012 c9 JB
Awesome! Load nor
Awesome! Load nor
7/19/2012 c9 Guest
nice to see you back with goog work
nice to see you back with goog work