
10/19/2015 c1 CSG
Hey Lisa *waves* I found it. I think you did good. I'm interested & off to read chapter 2.
Hey Lisa *waves* I found it. I think you did good. I'm interested & off to read chapter 2.
3/2/2012 c2
4Vampgirl79
Hi Lisa :) As I said to you on Fb, I had no idea you write ff! I am so happy that i looked up your story and read it. So far only 2 chaps in and I'm hooked! I cant wait to see where else this leads. I love it all, the setting, storyline and characters! I enjoyed reading the background on how Bella grew up. Its a shame about Charlie though he sounds not so nice ;( But it sounds like Bell and Renee have a good relationship. I think its cool too she lives in Australia. I also love that Bella decided to take a trip to LA to visit her bestie Angela. Ange seems like a trip already. I am really liking your Bella character too! Oh and its a great change to ahve Bella and Edward meet sooner. I cant stand in some ffs where it takes so long for them to finally meet, lol. I loved their first meeting. It was funny that Mike found Bella at the store and of course was hitting on her instantly, asking her out, haa. Typical Mike, lol. Awesome of sexy Edward to come to Bella's rescue and they have instant chemistry a d sparks fly. I can tell already i am going to like this Edward ;) Again, this is wonderful so far! I look forward to the next chap which i assume will be the party. And I have a feeling that gorgeous bronze haired guy will be there! Thanks for sharing this with us Lisa and so looking fwd to the next update! *hugs, Leslie

Hi Lisa :) As I said to you on Fb, I had no idea you write ff! I am so happy that i looked up your story and read it. So far only 2 chaps in and I'm hooked! I cant wait to see where else this leads. I love it all, the setting, storyline and characters! I enjoyed reading the background on how Bella grew up. Its a shame about Charlie though he sounds not so nice ;( But it sounds like Bell and Renee have a good relationship. I think its cool too she lives in Australia. I also love that Bella decided to take a trip to LA to visit her bestie Angela. Ange seems like a trip already. I am really liking your Bella character too! Oh and its a great change to ahve Bella and Edward meet sooner. I cant stand in some ffs where it takes so long for them to finally meet, lol. I loved their first meeting. It was funny that Mike found Bella at the store and of course was hitting on her instantly, asking her out, haa. Typical Mike, lol. Awesome of sexy Edward to come to Bella's rescue and they have instant chemistry a d sparks fly. I can tell already i am going to like this Edward ;) Again, this is wonderful so far! I look forward to the next chap which i assume will be the party. And I have a feeling that gorgeous bronze haired guy will be there! Thanks for sharing this with us Lisa and so looking fwd to the next update! *hugs, Leslie
2/3/2012 c2 17cullen
well Lisa I'm waiting for Cullen the cop-SEXY-mmmmmmmmm-good chapter update -can't wait for more
well Lisa I'm waiting for Cullen the cop-SEXY-mmmmmmmmm-good chapter update -can't wait for more
2/2/2012 c2
20twilightnaley19
Great Chapter. Poor Mike but he should realize Bella isnt interested, and Edward has the best timing ever. Cant wait to read more.

Great Chapter. Poor Mike but he should realize Bella isnt interested, and Edward has the best timing ever. Cant wait to read more.
1/21/2012 c1 17cullen
Way to go Lisa- good start mmmmm now thinking about Edward as a cop is a huge turn on Can't wait for more
Way to go Lisa- good start mmmmm now thinking about Edward as a cop is a huge turn on Can't wait for more
1/21/2012 c1 laters baby
Looks like its going to be a realy god story can't wait to find out how the part goes
Looks like its going to be a realy god story can't wait to find out how the part goes
1/21/2012 c1
15Mxpi1970
Hee hee..well done to you EARTHSISTA (love the name btw) on your first fanfic...it's bright and airy and typical of a singledom...I loved it...want more :D now please (if that's not too much to ask)!xxxx

Hee hee..well done to you EARTHSISTA (love the name btw) on your first fanfic...it's bright and airy and typical of a singledom...I loved it...want more :D now please (if that's not too much to ask)!xxxx
1/20/2012 c1 bpanther
Here thanks to Loopy Lou! I'm looking forward to read more about your Bella.
Congrats for giving writing a go and be brave enough to post it.
Here thanks to Loopy Lou! I'm looking forward to read more about your Bella.
Congrats for giving writing a go and be brave enough to post it.
1/20/2012 c1
22loopylou992
WAHOO! You did it! You have no idea how proud and pleased I am you have taken the leap. This is great and look forward to more

WAHOO! You did it! You have no idea how proud and pleased I am you have taken the leap. This is great and look forward to more