4/17/2012 c1 24Nispedana
It was a... nice read. I just hope that you put in more paragraphs though, you know like descriptive stuff so we could picture it better^^
It was a... nice read. I just hope that you put in more paragraphs though, you know like descriptive stuff so we could picture it better^^
4/11/2012 c1 6Bexteron
Wow, this was strange. Good don't worry. You wrote quite well and I couldn't see any spelling errors. I just...I couldn't imagine going to this highschool. Sounds to "alive" for my taste lol...Ok, bad pun, I know. -_-"
You seemed to have crossed over these two anime/mangas I take it? - quite well. Well done! :D
Wow, this was strange. Good don't worry. You wrote quite well and I couldn't see any spelling errors. I just...I couldn't imagine going to this highschool. Sounds to "alive" for my taste lol...Ok, bad pun, I know. -_-"
You seemed to have crossed over these two anime/mangas I take it? - quite well. Well done! :D