for Strawhats Plus Vampire9/17 c37 Guest
No vendetta on your name but I'm disappointed only seeing 2 One Piece... Really I have no angry, grudge feeling on your aliases name, moniker or whatever... It's okay...
No vendetta on your name but I'm disappointed only seeing 2 One Piece... Really I have no angry, grudge feeling on your aliases name, moniker or whatever... It's okay...
7/17 c37 
8Spiders123
I guess it’s probably better you didn’t continue
If you had done the law thing
Akua and her sister might have died since laws ship was destroyed after he lost against Blackbeard
Also I would have found it unfair that outer Moka lived but ace still dies
8Spiders123I guess it’s probably better you didn’t continue
If you had done the law thing
Akua and her sister might have died since laws ship was destroyed after he lost against Blackbeard
Also I would have found it unfair that outer Moka lived but ace still dies
3/29 c37 Donovan Bain
Comentario traducido al ingles con Google traductor:
Rayos, la verdad es mucho lo que quisiera comentar, tanto que no se si podre decir todo lo que quiero en este comentario. Pero creo que lo primero que debería decirte es que me dejas anemico con este final.
La verdad no pensaba engancharme asi de nuevo a un fanfic, por que en cerio, EN CERIO ha pasado mucho tiempo desde la ultima vez que habia estado leyendo capitulo tras capitulo de uno. Y si bien el inicio estuvo algo flojo, mejoraste mucho con los años y se vio las ganas que le echaste encima. Siendo por eso el por que me siento algo mal al ver que con los años no encontraste las fuerza para poder teminarlo, ya que me identifico un poco con tu situación.
La verdad yo también había estado en esa situación con un fic, pasando años para que realmente lo terminara (y eso que era un fic corto). Asi que entiendo lo frustrante que te debiste de haber sentido al concluir de que no podrías continuar, y la verdad temo que esto me pase a mí con mucha de mis historias pese a que en verdad quisiera terminarlas (aunque las mias no tienes ni un solo lector XD). Asi que tu caso me golpeo personalmente.
Aun asi esto que nos diste al final, de verdad se aparecía y me calma el corazón. Es bueno ver que cuando menos nos diste los detalles de lo que estabas planeando para el fic, para no dejarnos con la incertidumbre de como continuaba la historia. Me encanto que incluso te tomaras las molestias de contarnos las interacciones que tendrían los personajes y el como evolucionarían sus relaciones, ya que era lo que mas me gustaba de este fic.
Aunque aun asi me siento bastante triste por que no hayas podido terminarlo, y ahora mismo estoy cargando con el peso de haberme encariñado a una historia que fue descontinuada U_U.
Pero bueno, ya no se puede hacer nada con eso y lo acepto.
Sin embargo, dejando ese tema de lado y yendo a la critica del fic: Como dije, comenzaste bastante normal el fic y se notaba que era de los primeros que escribias, sin embargo era lo bastante decente para continuarlo. Y que bueno que lo hiciste, por que mejorabas mucho con el pasar de los capitulos. Fue algo aburrido ver la adaptación de los mismo capitulos auto-conclusivos del manga, pero afortunadamente equilibraste bien eso con la parte original. Y aun que le llamabas capitulos de relleno a las partes que no continuaban la historia del manga, como el torneo de la escuela o el encuentro de los muguiwaras con las familias de las chicas, la verdad fueron los mas interesantes y que me mantenian enganchado. Ojala hubieras escrito mas capitulos como esos.
Por otra parte yendo con tus personajes originales (Ryuuga y Morgan), la verdad te las arreglaste muy bien para incluirlos a la historia de forma organica, generando muy buenas escenas con los personajes de Rorario Vampire y One Piece. La batalla de Ryuuga vs Zoro fue genial, y Morgan estuvo perfecta para generar el salseo entre Zoro y Kurumu XD.
Y hablando de eso, los ship fueron hermosos. Me encanto el de Luffy x Mizore, y del Zoro x Kurumu fue el mejor segun mi opinion. Y del Luffy x Iner Moka, fue bastante interesante, aun que por desgracia creo que le falto explorarse mas. Principalmente por que Iner Moka realmente no interactuaba mucho con Luffy al estar casi siempre encerrada en el rosario. Ademas de que como el fic se descontinuo antes de que llegaran a la mejor parte de ambos, el ship no pudo explotarse tanto. Aun asi se sentía bastante bonito ver a Iner Moka interesada por Luffy, aun que ella se empeñara en negarlo XD (Aun que a opinion personal me gusto mas la pareja unilateral con Mizore :3).
Por cierto, al principio yo esperaba que Ruby estuviera en el harem unilateral de Luffy, pero te doy la razon de que fue mas divertido verla interesada en Zoro XD. Dios que grandiosas escenas nos dieron.
Dicho todo eso la verdad quisiera comentar muchas mas cosas, pero temo que el comentario me quede demasiado largo, asi que solo mencionare un par de cosas mas.
1. Me hubiera gustado ver a Luffy y Tsukune pelear justo en alguna pelea. La verdad me quede con ganas de algo asi (me encanto su amistad)
2. Me gusto que no hicieras a Chopper y Yuraki pareja. Aun que vi a algunos que te lo sugirieron, yo personalmente no queria verlo XP.
3. Siento que usaste demasiado la expresión de "sonrisa" para describir las interacciones de Luffy, incluso en momentos cuando no parecía encajar. Afortunadamente lo arreglaste con el tiempo.
4. Me gustaria poder subir tu fic traducido al español a mi cuenta de Watpad, ¿me darias el permiso?, te prometo que te dare todo el credito por el fic (NT: digo esto, pero la verdad es que probablemente igual lo tradusca, para que el sector hispano conozca este fic XP).
5. ¿No te molestaria si en algun momento alguien se tomara la molestia de continuar este fic con las ideas que dejaste?. La verdad a mi me gustaria hacerlo apenas me desocupe de los demas fic con los que estoy comprometido, aun que quien sepa si tenga tiempo XP
Y eso seria todo, me encanto tu fic y espero que actualmente este bien, ya que te senti muy triste en esta ultima parte. Casi y quieria abrazarte para contenerte.
Como sea el caso, vere si me puedo leer alguno de tus otros fics, ademas de algunos de los que recomendaste en distintos capitulos. Estoy interesado en tu fic de Jojo's Parte 4 x High School DxD, pero tendria que ver o leerme primero el manga o anime, ya que lo conozco solo de nombre. Aun quiero darle la oportunidad.
Con eso dicho, me despido de una ves y dejo de alargar mas el comentario XP
BYE.
NT: Por cierto, yo fui el que dejo accidentalmente el comentario anterior con el tema de una relación de Izuku x Arturia. Perdon por eso, no tenia nada que ver con el fic u_u.
Comment translated into English with Google translator:
Damn, the truth is that I would like to comment a lot, so much so that I don't know if I can say everything I want in this comment. But I think the first thing I should tell you is that you leave me anemic with this ending.
The truth is that I wasn't thinking of getting hooked on a fanfic like that again, because seriously, IN CERIOUS it's been a long time since the last time I'd been reading chapter after chapter of one. And although the start was somewhat weak, you improved a lot over the years and the desire that you put on it was seen. That being the reason why I feel somewhat bad seeing that over the years you did not find the strength to be able to finish it, since I somewhat identify with your situation.
The truth is that I had also been in that situation with a fic, taking years to really finish it (and that it was a short fic). So I understand how frustrating you must have felt when you concluded that you could not continue, and the truth is that this will happen to me with many of my stories despite the fact that I really wanted to finish them (although mine do not have a single reader XD). So your case hit me personally.
Even so, what you gave us at the end, really appeared and calms my heart. It's good to see that you at least gave us the details of what you were planning for the fic, so as not to leave us uncertain as to how the story would continue. I loved that you even took the trouble to tell us about the interactions that the characters would have and how their relationships would evolve, since that was what I liked the most about this fic.
Although I still feel quite sad that you couldn't finish it, and right now I'm carrying the weight of having become attached to a story that was discontinued U_U.
But hey, nothing can be done with that anymore and I accept it.
However, leaving that issue aside and going to the criticism of the fic: As I said, you started the fic quite normal and you could tell that it was one of the first you wrote, however it was decent enough to continue it. And it's good that you did, because you improved a lot with the passing of the chapters. It was kind of boring to see the adaptation of the same self-contained chapters of the manga, but luckily you balanced that well with the original part. And even though you called filler chapters the parts that did not continue the story of the manga, like the school tournament or the meeting of the muguiwaras with the girls' families, the truth was that they were the most interesting and kept me hooked. I wish you had written more chapters like that.
On the other hand, going with your original characters (Ryuuga and Morgan), the truth is that you managed very well to include them in the story in an organic way, generating very good scenes with the characters from Rorario Vampire and One Piece. The Ryuuga vs Zoro battle was great, and Morgan was perfect to generate the sauce between Zoro and Kurumu XD.
And speaking of which, the ships were beautiful. I loved the Luffy x Mizore one, and the Zoro x Kurumu one was the best in my opinion. And Luffy x Iner Moka, it was quite interesting, although unfortunately I think it needed to be explored more. Mainly because Iner Moka didn't really interact much with Luffy since she was almost always locked in the rosary. In addition to the fact that since the fic was discontinued before they reached the best part of both, the ship could not be exploited as much. Even so, it felt pretty nice to see Iner Moka interested in Luffy, even though she insisted on denying it XD (Although in my personal opinion I liked the one-sided couple with Mizore better :3).
By the way, at first I expected Ruby to be in Luffy's one-sided harem, but I give you the reason that it was more fun to see her interested in Zoro XD. God what great scenes they gave us.
Having said all that, the truth is that I would like to comment on many more things, but I am afraid that the comment is too long for me, so I will only mention a couple of other things.
1. I would have liked to see Luffy and Tsukune fight fair in some fight. The truth is that I wanted something like that (I loved their friendship)
2. I liked that you didn't make Chopper and Yuraki a couple. Although I saw some who suggested it to you, I personally did not want to see XP.
3. I feel like you used the expression "smile" too much to describe Luffy's interactions, even at times when it didn't seem to fit. Fortunately you fixed it with time.
4. I would like to be able to upload your fic translated into Spanish to my Watpad account, would you give me permission? I promise that I will give you all the credit for the fic (NT: I say this, but the truth is that I probably translate it anyway , so that the Hispanic sector knows this fic XP).
5. Wouldn't it bother you if at some point someone took the trouble to continue this fic with the ideas you left? The truth is that I would like to do it as soon as I get rid of the other fic with which I am committed, Even if who knows if I have time XP
And that would be all, I loved your fic and I hope that it is currently well, since I felt very sad in this last part. Almost and I wanted to hug you to contain you.
As the case may be, I'll see if I can read any of your other fics, in addition to some of the ones you recommended in different chapters. I'm interested in your Jojo's Part 4 x High School DxD fic, but I would have to watch or read the manga or anime first, since I only know it by name. I still want to give it a chance.
With that said, I say goodbye at once and stop lengthening the comment XP
BYE.
NT: By the way, I was the one who accidentally left the previous comment with the subject of an Izuku x Arturia relationship. Sorry about that, it had nothing to do with the fic u_u.
Comentario traducido al ingles con Google traductor:
Rayos, la verdad es mucho lo que quisiera comentar, tanto que no se si podre decir todo lo que quiero en este comentario. Pero creo que lo primero que debería decirte es que me dejas anemico con este final.
La verdad no pensaba engancharme asi de nuevo a un fanfic, por que en cerio, EN CERIO ha pasado mucho tiempo desde la ultima vez que habia estado leyendo capitulo tras capitulo de uno. Y si bien el inicio estuvo algo flojo, mejoraste mucho con los años y se vio las ganas que le echaste encima. Siendo por eso el por que me siento algo mal al ver que con los años no encontraste las fuerza para poder teminarlo, ya que me identifico un poco con tu situación.
La verdad yo también había estado en esa situación con un fic, pasando años para que realmente lo terminara (y eso que era un fic corto). Asi que entiendo lo frustrante que te debiste de haber sentido al concluir de que no podrías continuar, y la verdad temo que esto me pase a mí con mucha de mis historias pese a que en verdad quisiera terminarlas (aunque las mias no tienes ni un solo lector XD). Asi que tu caso me golpeo personalmente.
Aun asi esto que nos diste al final, de verdad se aparecía y me calma el corazón. Es bueno ver que cuando menos nos diste los detalles de lo que estabas planeando para el fic, para no dejarnos con la incertidumbre de como continuaba la historia. Me encanto que incluso te tomaras las molestias de contarnos las interacciones que tendrían los personajes y el como evolucionarían sus relaciones, ya que era lo que mas me gustaba de este fic.
Aunque aun asi me siento bastante triste por que no hayas podido terminarlo, y ahora mismo estoy cargando con el peso de haberme encariñado a una historia que fue descontinuada U_U.
Pero bueno, ya no se puede hacer nada con eso y lo acepto.
Sin embargo, dejando ese tema de lado y yendo a la critica del fic: Como dije, comenzaste bastante normal el fic y se notaba que era de los primeros que escribias, sin embargo era lo bastante decente para continuarlo. Y que bueno que lo hiciste, por que mejorabas mucho con el pasar de los capitulos. Fue algo aburrido ver la adaptación de los mismo capitulos auto-conclusivos del manga, pero afortunadamente equilibraste bien eso con la parte original. Y aun que le llamabas capitulos de relleno a las partes que no continuaban la historia del manga, como el torneo de la escuela o el encuentro de los muguiwaras con las familias de las chicas, la verdad fueron los mas interesantes y que me mantenian enganchado. Ojala hubieras escrito mas capitulos como esos.
Por otra parte yendo con tus personajes originales (Ryuuga y Morgan), la verdad te las arreglaste muy bien para incluirlos a la historia de forma organica, generando muy buenas escenas con los personajes de Rorario Vampire y One Piece. La batalla de Ryuuga vs Zoro fue genial, y Morgan estuvo perfecta para generar el salseo entre Zoro y Kurumu XD.
Y hablando de eso, los ship fueron hermosos. Me encanto el de Luffy x Mizore, y del Zoro x Kurumu fue el mejor segun mi opinion. Y del Luffy x Iner Moka, fue bastante interesante, aun que por desgracia creo que le falto explorarse mas. Principalmente por que Iner Moka realmente no interactuaba mucho con Luffy al estar casi siempre encerrada en el rosario. Ademas de que como el fic se descontinuo antes de que llegaran a la mejor parte de ambos, el ship no pudo explotarse tanto. Aun asi se sentía bastante bonito ver a Iner Moka interesada por Luffy, aun que ella se empeñara en negarlo XD (Aun que a opinion personal me gusto mas la pareja unilateral con Mizore :3).
Por cierto, al principio yo esperaba que Ruby estuviera en el harem unilateral de Luffy, pero te doy la razon de que fue mas divertido verla interesada en Zoro XD. Dios que grandiosas escenas nos dieron.
Dicho todo eso la verdad quisiera comentar muchas mas cosas, pero temo que el comentario me quede demasiado largo, asi que solo mencionare un par de cosas mas.
1. Me hubiera gustado ver a Luffy y Tsukune pelear justo en alguna pelea. La verdad me quede con ganas de algo asi (me encanto su amistad)
2. Me gusto que no hicieras a Chopper y Yuraki pareja. Aun que vi a algunos que te lo sugirieron, yo personalmente no queria verlo XP.
3. Siento que usaste demasiado la expresión de "sonrisa" para describir las interacciones de Luffy, incluso en momentos cuando no parecía encajar. Afortunadamente lo arreglaste con el tiempo.
4. Me gustaria poder subir tu fic traducido al español a mi cuenta de Watpad, ¿me darias el permiso?, te prometo que te dare todo el credito por el fic (NT: digo esto, pero la verdad es que probablemente igual lo tradusca, para que el sector hispano conozca este fic XP).
5. ¿No te molestaria si en algun momento alguien se tomara la molestia de continuar este fic con las ideas que dejaste?. La verdad a mi me gustaria hacerlo apenas me desocupe de los demas fic con los que estoy comprometido, aun que quien sepa si tenga tiempo XP
Y eso seria todo, me encanto tu fic y espero que actualmente este bien, ya que te senti muy triste en esta ultima parte. Casi y quieria abrazarte para contenerte.
Como sea el caso, vere si me puedo leer alguno de tus otros fics, ademas de algunos de los que recomendaste en distintos capitulos. Estoy interesado en tu fic de Jojo's Parte 4 x High School DxD, pero tendria que ver o leerme primero el manga o anime, ya que lo conozco solo de nombre. Aun quiero darle la oportunidad.
Con eso dicho, me despido de una ves y dejo de alargar mas el comentario XP
BYE.
NT: Por cierto, yo fui el que dejo accidentalmente el comentario anterior con el tema de una relación de Izuku x Arturia. Perdon por eso, no tenia nada que ver con el fic u_u.
Comment translated into English with Google translator:
Damn, the truth is that I would like to comment a lot, so much so that I don't know if I can say everything I want in this comment. But I think the first thing I should tell you is that you leave me anemic with this ending.
The truth is that I wasn't thinking of getting hooked on a fanfic like that again, because seriously, IN CERIOUS it's been a long time since the last time I'd been reading chapter after chapter of one. And although the start was somewhat weak, you improved a lot over the years and the desire that you put on it was seen. That being the reason why I feel somewhat bad seeing that over the years you did not find the strength to be able to finish it, since I somewhat identify with your situation.
The truth is that I had also been in that situation with a fic, taking years to really finish it (and that it was a short fic). So I understand how frustrating you must have felt when you concluded that you could not continue, and the truth is that this will happen to me with many of my stories despite the fact that I really wanted to finish them (although mine do not have a single reader XD). So your case hit me personally.
Even so, what you gave us at the end, really appeared and calms my heart. It's good to see that you at least gave us the details of what you were planning for the fic, so as not to leave us uncertain as to how the story would continue. I loved that you even took the trouble to tell us about the interactions that the characters would have and how their relationships would evolve, since that was what I liked the most about this fic.
Although I still feel quite sad that you couldn't finish it, and right now I'm carrying the weight of having become attached to a story that was discontinued U_U.
But hey, nothing can be done with that anymore and I accept it.
However, leaving that issue aside and going to the criticism of the fic: As I said, you started the fic quite normal and you could tell that it was one of the first you wrote, however it was decent enough to continue it. And it's good that you did, because you improved a lot with the passing of the chapters. It was kind of boring to see the adaptation of the same self-contained chapters of the manga, but luckily you balanced that well with the original part. And even though you called filler chapters the parts that did not continue the story of the manga, like the school tournament or the meeting of the muguiwaras with the girls' families, the truth was that they were the most interesting and kept me hooked. I wish you had written more chapters like that.
On the other hand, going with your original characters (Ryuuga and Morgan), the truth is that you managed very well to include them in the story in an organic way, generating very good scenes with the characters from Rorario Vampire and One Piece. The Ryuuga vs Zoro battle was great, and Morgan was perfect to generate the sauce between Zoro and Kurumu XD.
And speaking of which, the ships were beautiful. I loved the Luffy x Mizore one, and the Zoro x Kurumu one was the best in my opinion. And Luffy x Iner Moka, it was quite interesting, although unfortunately I think it needed to be explored more. Mainly because Iner Moka didn't really interact much with Luffy since she was almost always locked in the rosary. In addition to the fact that since the fic was discontinued before they reached the best part of both, the ship could not be exploited as much. Even so, it felt pretty nice to see Iner Moka interested in Luffy, even though she insisted on denying it XD (Although in my personal opinion I liked the one-sided couple with Mizore better :3).
By the way, at first I expected Ruby to be in Luffy's one-sided harem, but I give you the reason that it was more fun to see her interested in Zoro XD. God what great scenes they gave us.
Having said all that, the truth is that I would like to comment on many more things, but I am afraid that the comment is too long for me, so I will only mention a couple of other things.
1. I would have liked to see Luffy and Tsukune fight fair in some fight. The truth is that I wanted something like that (I loved their friendship)
2. I liked that you didn't make Chopper and Yuraki a couple. Although I saw some who suggested it to you, I personally did not want to see XP.
3. I feel like you used the expression "smile" too much to describe Luffy's interactions, even at times when it didn't seem to fit. Fortunately you fixed it with time.
4. I would like to be able to upload your fic translated into Spanish to my Watpad account, would you give me permission? I promise that I will give you all the credit for the fic (NT: I say this, but the truth is that I probably translate it anyway , so that the Hispanic sector knows this fic XP).
5. Wouldn't it bother you if at some point someone took the trouble to continue this fic with the ideas you left? The truth is that I would like to do it as soon as I get rid of the other fic with which I am committed, Even if who knows if I have time XP
And that would be all, I loved your fic and I hope that it is currently well, since I felt very sad in this last part. Almost and I wanted to hug you to contain you.
As the case may be, I'll see if I can read any of your other fics, in addition to some of the ones you recommended in different chapters. I'm interested in your Jojo's Part 4 x High School DxD fic, but I would have to watch or read the manga or anime first, since I only know it by name. I still want to give it a chance.
With that said, I say goodbye at once and stop lengthening the comment XP
BYE.
NT: By the way, I was the one who accidentally left the previous comment with the subject of an Izuku x Arturia relationship. Sorry about that, it had nothing to do with the fic u_u.
3/23 c1 Guest
Disculpen por el comentario anterior, estaba usando la caja de comentario en este fic para editar una publicación de facebook y la subí por accidente
Disculpen por el comentario anterior, estaba usando la caja de comentario en este fic para editar una publicación de facebook y la subí por accidente
3/20 c1 Guest
Arturia x Izuku.
Cómo sería su relación?: Cómo Izuku es bastante parecido a Shirou, yo diría que su relación con Arturia podría ser casi lo mismo que en la ruta Fate. Aunque aplicando al caminó de Izuku, Arturia tendría que estar mucho sobre el para que no siga un caminó autodestructivo y recordarle que no tiene que hacer todo solo.
Cómo sería su hij y que tan fuerte sería?: Considerando que el poder de Arturia no es hereditario (por qué ser Servants no se hereda) y el de Izuku tampoco. Sería solo un niño normal.
Pero conciderando quienes son sus padres. El mismísimo rey Arturo y el que probablemente será el N1 de Japón. El niño podría crecer inspirado a convertirse en un héroe como sus padres, por lo cual Saber terminaría dándole un entrenamiento firmal
Arturia x Izuku.
Cómo sería su relación?: Cómo Izuku es bastante parecido a Shirou, yo diría que su relación con Arturia podría ser casi lo mismo que en la ruta Fate. Aunque aplicando al caminó de Izuku, Arturia tendría que estar mucho sobre el para que no siga un caminó autodestructivo y recordarle que no tiene que hacer todo solo.
Cómo sería su hij y que tan fuerte sería?: Considerando que el poder de Arturia no es hereditario (por qué ser Servants no se hereda) y el de Izuku tampoco. Sería solo un niño normal.
Pero conciderando quienes son sus padres. El mismísimo rey Arturo y el que probablemente será el N1 de Japón. El niño podría crecer inspirado a convertirse en un héroe como sus padres, por lo cual Saber terminaría dándole un entrenamiento firmal
10/13/2022 c35 Larro44-LL
Haha I’m surprised I stuck it out knowing this story is discontinued. It was interesting
Haha I’m surprised I stuck it out knowing this story is discontinued. It was interesting
8/8/2022 c9 8RenegadeForLife
If they had a surrogate body law could probably move one personality into it.
8RenegadeForLifeIf they had a surrogate body law could probably move one personality into it.
5/20/2022 c11 2Pinkypi
Tsukune should give offerings to a Zoro and Luffy. With their presence he isn't being targeted so damn hard xD
2PinkypiTsukune should give offerings to a Zoro and Luffy. With their presence he isn't being targeted so damn hard xD
5/20/2022 c9 Pinkypi
if this wasn't one piece involved the solution would actually be harder to reach in the end since they'd approach it totally wrong since no one knows that Inner Moka was actually the original Moka while outer is actually the crafted one. Xd I'm enjoying this!
if this wasn't one piece involved the solution would actually be harder to reach in the end since they'd approach it totally wrong since no one knows that Inner Moka was actually the original Moka while outer is actually the crafted one. Xd I'm enjoying this!
2/12/2022 c37 Oscar
Fue una muy buena historia que acabe en solo dos días de lectura. Aunque originalmente la Vi en Youtube fue agradable leerla ya que me fue bastante entretenida.
Nota: fue bueno de tu parte agregar la conclusión final.
Fue una muy buena historia que acabe en solo dos días de lectura. Aunque originalmente la Vi en Youtube fue agradable leerla ya que me fue bastante entretenida.
Nota: fue bueno de tu parte agregar la conclusión final.
8/29/2021 c1 jormanrodas23
interesente, sere honesto no me gustan los crossovers porque en los fics se centran en un prota y al otro lo dejan de lado, incluso hacen q le robe sus wifus, asi que dependiendo de los siguientes capitulos dire mi opinion (espero luffy no robe sus wifus pues luffy igual tiene sus wifus q son: boa, shirahoshi, vivi, rebecca y margaret)
interesente, sere honesto no me gustan los crossovers porque en los fics se centran en un prota y al otro lo dejan de lado, incluso hacen q le robe sus wifus, asi que dependiendo de los siguientes capitulos dire mi opinion (espero luffy no robe sus wifus pues luffy igual tiene sus wifus q son: boa, shirahoshi, vivi, rebecca y margaret)
7/30/2021 c37 7TheLivingMyth
I must say, I completely forgot about this story until now. I just remembered it when looking through possible One Piece crossovers cause I've been in the mood for that recently. I am disappointed that it's come to such a bittersweet end, but i am grateful to at least know where you intended to continue/end this story. This was perhaps one of the first fanfictions I truly got into back in like 2014 to 15 when I discovered fanfiction was a thing. It's sad to see this come to a close, but I am thankful for the amount of effort and former ambition you had for what I like to label as a phenomenal piece of art.
Thank you for making part of my teenage years less depressing, and enjoy the rest of your time writing/reading others work.
Ciao!
~TheLivingMyth
7TheLivingMythI must say, I completely forgot about this story until now. I just remembered it when looking through possible One Piece crossovers cause I've been in the mood for that recently. I am disappointed that it's come to such a bittersweet end, but i am grateful to at least know where you intended to continue/end this story. This was perhaps one of the first fanfictions I truly got into back in like 2014 to 15 when I discovered fanfiction was a thing. It's sad to see this come to a close, but I am thankful for the amount of effort and former ambition you had for what I like to label as a phenomenal piece of art.
Thank you for making part of my teenage years less depressing, and enjoy the rest of your time writing/reading others work.
Ciao!
~TheLivingMyth