
1/29/2024 c1 karterfan
There was some beautiful imagery in this story. I loved the insight into Ryan's dark, deep thoughts. Well done.
There was some beautiful imagery in this story. I loved the insight into Ryan's dark, deep thoughts. Well done.
1/23/2012 c5
2LoganSunshine
Is there more to it or not? Either way it's a good story. You are getting better with the correct use of words and punctuation. Keep up the good work, looking forward to more.

Is there more to it or not? Either way it's a good story. You are getting better with the correct use of words and punctuation. Keep up the good work, looking forward to more.