for Violent Redemption5/20/2018 c6 LoveThatHBarton
Please, if you’re still there... Please continue this one, pleaaaaaaaaaase!
Please, if you’re still there... Please continue this one, pleaaaaaaaaaase!
3/28/2017 c6 LisaG16
PLEASE tell me you're going to finish this story! it's so cruel leaving poor Will in the state he's in! :(
PLEASE tell me you're going to finish this story! it's so cruel leaving poor Will in the state he's in! :(
9/9/2015 c6 
2genbo
I know that you haven't written in years, but please finish this great story that you have started.
Thanks for your time and I love your story.
I hope to read more soon.
Gen
Please continue & I hope that Will be saved.
2genboI know that you haven't written in years, but please finish this great story that you have started.
Thanks for your time and I love your story.
I hope to read more soon.
Gen
Please continue & I hope that Will be saved.
9/6/2015 c6 Guest
Please continue I want to know the ending . It's a good fan fic .
Please continue I want to know the ending . It's a good fan fic .
8/7/2015 c6 Guest
Oh no no no you can leave it here...! It is to good! I need to know what happened!
Oh no no no you can leave it here...! It is to good! I need to know what happened!
7/6/2015 c6 67aqaws321
Hi! Couldn't help but notice it's been quite a long time since you updated this, please come back! You can't leave it here!
67aqaws321Hi! Couldn't help but notice it's been quite a long time since you updated this, please come back! You can't leave it here!
4/8/2015 c6 Toet2000
Please please PLEASE next chapter!
I love your writing, though it's very cruel.
Please pick up your pen and let us know what happens next!
Please please PLEASE next chapter!
I love your writing, though it's very cruel.
Please pick up your pen and let us know what happens next!
3/5/2015 c6 2I-OfTheHawk
Hey! Really loved this story, I know there is a sequel, but are you going to add any more to this one? I sort of felt like it left you in completed. Do you think you'll make a chapter where they rescue him?
2I-OfTheHawkHey! Really loved this story, I know there is a sequel, but are you going to add any more to this one? I sort of felt like it left you in completed. Do you think you'll make a chapter where they rescue him?
2/25/2015 c6 1Darian Clarke
Just came across this and you haven't updated since 2012?! This is an outstanding piece of fiction, and I now must suffer waiting to see when (if) it will be updated. Dunno why you stopped writing this one, but it was a big mistake to do so. PLEASE finish this—catch the bad guys, teach the senator a lesson, and give poor Willie Brandt a rest after. Thanks!
1Darian ClarkeJust came across this and you haven't updated since 2012?! This is an outstanding piece of fiction, and I now must suffer waiting to see when (if) it will be updated. Dunno why you stopped writing this one, but it was a big mistake to do so. PLEASE finish this—catch the bad guys, teach the senator a lesson, and give poor Willie Brandt a rest after. Thanks!
2/23/2015 c6 xenia.lou
Thats not true. I can't believe you stopped here!
I love this story! Its awesome :)
Thats not true. I can't believe you stopped here!
I love this story! Its awesome :)
12/20/2014 c6 1Olympus97
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You seriously just did that? You seriously left it there?
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Your mission, should you choose to accept it (you'd better) is to update.
Eh... As Brandt said in After 'While, that was pretty bad.
1Olympus97...
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You seriously just did that? You seriously left it there?
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Your mission, should you choose to accept it (you'd better) is to update.
Eh... As Brandt said in After 'While, that was pretty bad.
12/6/2013 c6 Guest
I really love this story but I'm so frustrated that you seem to have abandoned it that I've decided never to read a WIP again. I can't deal with the stress!
I really love this story but I'm so frustrated that you seem to have abandoned it that I've decided never to read a WIP again. I can't deal with the stress!
10/16/2013 c6 whovian42
Great.
Another unfinished story.
(snark) I officially hate you (/snark)
You're much too good a writer to leave them like this, to leave ME like this LOL.
Hope that someday you'll be able to finish them up.
I love your writing and your characterizations.
Great.
Another unfinished story.
(snark) I officially hate you (/snark)
You're much too good a writer to leave them like this, to leave ME like this LOL.
Hope that someday you'll be able to finish them up.
I love your writing and your characterizations.