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2/9/2012 c2 5Archer 250
2 chapters in and a writer's block. That's a record :P.
2/7/2012 c1 Sterling Shadow
Just a little more spaceing and a better description of the characters...

Cant wait to readthe next chapter!
1/26/2012 c1 4IRISHWULFHOUND
atropureus means purple in Latin, it has great potential. them being related is a refreshing twist
1/25/2012 c1 0095
Someone finaly made Leo and Aeris bro and sis, AWSOME!

goob story btw
1/24/2012 c1 2Bogren
Not bad, not bad at all. This story has a lot of potential. I haven't seen one quite like this. If you really want help I (unlike Archer 250 (I'm just agreeing with you man, so don't hate)) like writing and reading romance. So hey, if you want help or a critic, I'm always here.


Bogren :3
1/24/2012 c1 5Archer 250
Congrats on your first fic. :)

I really like your writing style (But then again, I like many writing styles, ranging from short ones to Tolkien-esque epic).

The title can stay, it sounds good enough. I don't think I can help you with the fic unless you want every character to pick up a firearm/sword and go kill each other in disturbing detail (And in the end, everyone dies).


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