1/27/2021 c1 1Candylover778
Awww! Its so cute!(When Bella imprinted on Paul!)
Doucheward deserved it!
Awww! Its so cute!(When Bella imprinted on Paul!)
Doucheward deserved it!
2/19/2015 c1 Lady Sohma
this story was amazing. I would have even liked to seen it as a chapter story.
this story was amazing. I would have even liked to seen it as a chapter story.
7/27/2014 c1 Babysis64
this was a good on shot story I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing with us. Glad that the pack saved Bella.
this was a good on shot story I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing with us. Glad that the pack saved Bella.
5/16/2014 c1 Guest
I liked it and would love to read more one day
I liked it and would love to read more one day
12/8/2012 c1 Guest
short but good. :)
short but good. :)
1/25/2012 c1 11juxtaposed92
Okay well a few things need explaining such as how Bella found out they were cheating but yet none of the cullens knew including Jasper who can feel their emotions, how Alice doesn't know she knows since surely she would have seen how Bella found out, how the Cullens or even Charlie didn't know that Edward was hitting Bella and how Charlie phased and Bella suddenly phased since surely it would have been triggered when they met.
Other then that it was alright.
Okay well a few things need explaining such as how Bella found out they were cheating but yet none of the cullens knew including Jasper who can feel their emotions, how Alice doesn't know she knows since surely she would have seen how Bella found out, how the Cullens or even Charlie didn't know that Edward was hitting Bella and how Charlie phased and Bella suddenly phased since surely it would have been triggered when they met.
Other then that it was alright.
1/24/2012 c1 47rororogers
ummm yeah ok. Interesting, but you should probably look into a beta reader, lots of mistakes.
ummm yeah ok. Interesting, but you should probably look into a beta reader, lots of mistakes.