for Darkness9/2/2013 c1 
7EmeraldStorm7
The first four lines really got me, "wherever you are bodies follow, alive or dead". That was really striking, gripped me from the start, to me that speaks of Voldemort's ability to leave a trail of death behind but also his ability to manipulate people into joining his cause, to gathering followers. And you did that with just 4 lines? Amazing, I am in complete awe of your poetic talent.
Loved the whole thing
Beautiful, absolutely beautiful
7EmeraldStorm7The first four lines really got me, "wherever you are bodies follow, alive or dead". That was really striking, gripped me from the start, to me that speaks of Voldemort's ability to leave a trail of death behind but also his ability to manipulate people into joining his cause, to gathering followers. And you did that with just 4 lines? Amazing, I am in complete awe of your poetic talent.
Loved the whole thing
Beautiful, absolutely beautiful
6/15/2013 c1 5J. S. Armstrong
This was very well written, I liked it. It was intense, beautiful, and sad at the same time... Poor Cecilia, it appears like she has suffered so much in the past because of her love for Voldemort.
5J. S. ArmstrongThis was very well written, I liked it. It was intense, beautiful, and sad at the same time... Poor Cecilia, it appears like she has suffered so much in the past because of her love for Voldemort.
1/27/2013 c1 Guest
Wow that was good!
Wow that was good!
9/21/2012 c1 13Silwen Prince
Jarring! I loved the flow, the short lines, and her scared yet determined voice! I loved the "wherever you are/bodies follow/whether alive or dead." The part where you say "whether alive or dead," really surprised me and the imagery is very disturbing. Just a few grammar errors, but they don't really detract from your poem. Sorry, I'm a grammar freak and I'm trying to stop being one...Anyway, I love how you gave his lover a name, and a really pretty one at that. I'm curious as to when she broke up with Voldemort, at what stage in his life did she leave? That would be interesting to know.
13Silwen PrinceJarring! I loved the flow, the short lines, and her scared yet determined voice! I loved the "wherever you are/bodies follow/whether alive or dead." The part where you say "whether alive or dead," really surprised me and the imagery is very disturbing. Just a few grammar errors, but they don't really detract from your poem. Sorry, I'm a grammar freak and I'm trying to stop being one...Anyway, I love how you gave his lover a name, and a really pretty one at that. I'm curious as to when she broke up with Voldemort, at what stage in his life did she leave? That would be interesting to know.
6/24/2012 c1 3Reading Lover 866
Wow. That was really good! You are such a great poet. Please do more.
-Jennifer
3Reading Lover 866Wow. That was really good! You are such a great poet. Please do more.
-Jennifer