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1/23/2013 c2 10BeeWonderland
Omgodish! Really good! I have got to know what happens!
8/4/2012 c2 3The Booknerds
Hmm... interesting... keep up the good work and update again soon
4/19/2012 c2 7EG Winston
This is great! When will you be updating?
2/22/2012 c2 5skitteryissexy
For a first time writer this is really good. i have a few stories that i have written please review mine and let me know if they are any good
1/30/2012 c2 1Angelbaby63
I'm lovin' the flashbacks! Great chapter, update soon please :)
1/28/2012 c2 Ealasaid Una
did she lied so her brother wouldn't worry about her?i am that her brother and Spot are there for her.
1/27/2012 c1 Angelbaby63
Love!

You're writting is great and I already am enjoying your characters. Your use of language is believable and sophisicated at the same time. Make sure to include some backstory on the next chapter so we understand what's going on a little better, but it's a great start! Love, love, love! Update soon please :)
1/26/2012 c1 Ealasaid Una
Are Johnny and Skits:Kid Blink and Skittery?if so what are they doing in Brooklyn?

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