for The Battle Mage of Hogwarts: Year 22/23/2020 c9 redmen6blight
I enjoyed this and your other Harry Potter fanfic really the only thing that bothered me was Lockhart's death. It wasn't nearly as satisfying because it was far to quick. It didn't have that "hello Karma" moment the original scene usually I hate Harry and Ginny pairings mostly because it came out of left field in the original. However your actually having them interact more than they did in the original.
I enjoyed this and your other Harry Potter fanfic really the only thing that bothered me was Lockhart's death. It wasn't nearly as satisfying because it was far to quick. It didn't have that "hello Karma" moment the original scene usually I hate Harry and Ginny pairings mostly because it came out of left field in the original. However your actually having them interact more than they did in the original.
7/2/2018 c9 Crimson Hawk Wolf
I enjoyed reading this one just as much as the last one. I’m glad that you ended that one windbags life instead of letting him live like he did in the movies. I would add book but I’ve never read them and I don’t plan to either.
The changes you have made really has made it seem better then what I remember the movie being and seemed better as well. I look forward to reading the 3rd one now.
I enjoyed reading this one just as much as the last one. I’m glad that you ended that one windbags life instead of letting him live like he did in the movies. I would add book but I’ve never read them and I don’t plan to either.
The changes you have made really has made it seem better then what I remember the movie being and seemed better as well. I look forward to reading the 3rd one now.
12/31/2017 c9 
1TheWateringWizard
I wonder what Nicholas needs to show Harry ! Probably something badass ! On to year 3 !
1TheWateringWizardI wonder what Nicholas needs to show Harry ! Probably something badass ! On to year 3 !
12/31/2017 c8 TheWateringWizard
Man that orgasm I had when Lockhart was ripped apart ! I loved it ! And great twist on not killing the Basilisk
Man that orgasm I had when Lockhart was ripped apart ! I loved it ! And great twist on not killing the Basilisk
12/31/2017 c7 TheWateringWizard
Haha i would’ve hugged Harry for knocking Lockhart unconscious if I could
Haha i would’ve hugged Harry for knocking Lockhart unconscious if I could
12/31/2017 c5 TheWateringWizard
Isn’t Harry at least wondering why Ginny was missing at the exact moment when another attack occurred ? Come on it seemed glaring to me
Isn’t Harry at least wondering why Ginny was missing at the exact moment when another attack occurred ? Come on it seemed glaring to me
12/31/2017 c4 TheWateringWizard
Man Harry sees that Ginny is a little pale but doesn’t do a damn thing about it ! Come on man !
Man Harry sees that Ginny is a little pale but doesn’t do a damn thing about it ! Come on man !
12/31/2017 c3 TheWateringWizard
God I’m so glad that these two assholes were expelled ! What they did was despicable !
God I’m so glad that these two assholes were expelled ! What they did was despicable !
12/31/2017 c2 TheWateringWizard
Holy shit ! Hahahaha Neville has my eternal respect ! Knocking Malfoy out with just one punch was amazing
Holy shit ! Hahahaha Neville has my eternal respect ! Knocking Malfoy out with just one punch was amazing
12/31/2017 c1 TheWateringWizard
What a shame Harry and travis didn’t bord the train, that’s a missed opportunity for Travis
What a shame Harry and travis didn’t bord the train, that’s a missed opportunity for Travis
1/3/2017 c9 2silentfan9
don't the things that pull the carriages(forgot the name) become visible when you have seen someone die, as mentioned in order of the phoenix. on a related but more pleasant note i really do like the story so far and hope that the rest is just as, if not more so, good.
2silentfan9don't the things that pull the carriages(forgot the name) become visible when you have seen someone die, as mentioned in order of the phoenix. on a related but more pleasant note i really do like the story so far and hope that the rest is just as, if not more so, good.
11/1/2016 c7 4Eltyr
"And Harry Potter himself is the property of Ginny Weasley"
... How did I NOT spot that the first time I read through this? XD Oh my sides, my sides hurt from how hard that made me chortle X)
4Eltyr"And Harry Potter himself is the property of Ginny Weasley"
... How did I NOT spot that the first time I read through this? XD Oh my sides, my sides hurt from how hard that made me chortle X)
10/31/2016 c1 Sammy9137
Hey, I just wanted to point out that since Harry did see Lockhart getting eaten and then killed as well as quirrell dying in your first story, I would assume that he would be able to see the straps by now. Just pointing out in case you wish to update it otherwise its upto you. Great story by the way
Hey, I just wanted to point out that since Harry did see Lockhart getting eaten and then killed as well as quirrell dying in your first story, I would assume that he would be able to see the straps by now. Just pointing out in case you wish to update it otherwise its upto you. Great story by the way