
8/14/2019 c9 Guest
Who Took Inuyasha's Virginity Was Shippo, Or Sesshoumaru, Or Was It Miroku. If Wasn't Shippo Who Took Inuyasha's Please Rewrite It This Suppose To Be InuyxShipp Story Not Anyone Else So Fix It Rewrite The Entire Story Prove To Everyone That For This Pairing Otherwise You'll Lying To Everyone Not To Mention Yourself.
Who Took Inuyasha's Virginity Was Shippo, Or Sesshoumaru, Or Was It Miroku. If Wasn't Shippo Who Took Inuyasha's Please Rewrite It This Suppose To Be InuyxShipp Story Not Anyone Else So Fix It Rewrite The Entire Story Prove To Everyone That For This Pairing Otherwise You'll Lying To Everyone Not To Mention Yourself.
5/25/2019 c5 Guest
Question Who Is Having Sex With Who In This Chapter I Am Confused
Question Who Is Having Sex With Who In This Chapter I Am Confused
3/17/2018 c8 DevilzSpawn
Okay, whoever wrote that terrible review, I have something to say to you. This author is doing the best that he/she can with out ungrateful rude people like you. At least she can properly spell and use proper grammar. There is something called spellcheck and I would highly recommend it to you. No need to put all caps, we use exclamation marks to emphasize already. Like this! Also, dreams are only the beginning so no need to be so negative. Lastly, I support all gay, lesbian, bi, transgender, and straight people out there. If you don't support that okay, that's your problem. But going around and throwing shade to gay people is not the way to go! It just shows you are an immature person. I know this is a review, which should be your opinion but there is constructive criticism and just being a plain ass. So, sorry if you are offended by my comment but, this is a fanfic. Don't like, don't read. Move on with your life already. Also, if this story sucks why are you still around? Hmm. Think about that for a minute.
P.S. If you are going to write something like that you should at least have the balls to put who it was from.
Okay, whoever wrote that terrible review, I have something to say to you. This author is doing the best that he/she can with out ungrateful rude people like you. At least she can properly spell and use proper grammar. There is something called spellcheck and I would highly recommend it to you. No need to put all caps, we use exclamation marks to emphasize already. Like this! Also, dreams are only the beginning so no need to be so negative. Lastly, I support all gay, lesbian, bi, transgender, and straight people out there. If you don't support that okay, that's your problem. But going around and throwing shade to gay people is not the way to go! It just shows you are an immature person. I know this is a review, which should be your opinion but there is constructive criticism and just being a plain ass. So, sorry if you are offended by my comment but, this is a fanfic. Don't like, don't read. Move on with your life already. Also, if this story sucks why are you still around? Hmm. Think about that for a minute.
P.S. If you are going to write something like that you should at least have the balls to put who it was from.
5/14/2017 c8 Guest
Don't pay attention to that person. He /She was to stupid to even mention kagome when clearly this is a yaoi story. I like reading stories that have their own point of view of how they think of others. Especially how inuyasha feels about Kagome treating him like a slave. I'm not sure if you remember that episode when she saved Kikyo but assumes inuyasha was going to see her sits him calling him all this other bullshit and when he tells her he wasn't going to see her she doesn't give him a meaningful apology. Kagome is also my least favorite character in the anime series.
Don't pay attention to that person. He /She was to stupid to even mention kagome when clearly this is a yaoi story. I like reading stories that have their own point of view of how they think of others. Especially how inuyasha feels about Kagome treating him like a slave. I'm not sure if you remember that episode when she saved Kikyo but assumes inuyasha was going to see her sits him calling him all this other bullshit and when he tells her he wasn't going to see her she doesn't give him a meaningful apology. Kagome is also my least favorite character in the anime series.
2/24/2016 c1 Guest
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10/27/2015 c3
8Miradel
What? No I didn't just read yaoi porn in dentist office. Why would you think that? Heheheh

What? No I didn't just read yaoi porn in dentist office. Why would you think that? Heheheh
8/28/2015 c9
1727Tsu18Kyou
I want more! It's awesome that you have Inu as seme! Not too many of them out there especially when paired with Sesshomaru. But I do hope you leave it as a threesome and have Sessho become a mate to both Inu and Shippo! ️ Can't wait for more updates *psst!* *glad you got Kagome out of there. She's a real immature girl sometimes*

I want more! It's awesome that you have Inu as seme! Not too many of them out there especially when paired with Sesshomaru. But I do hope you leave it as a threesome and have Sessho become a mate to both Inu and Shippo! ️ Can't wait for more updates *psst!* *glad you got Kagome out of there. She's a real immature girl sometimes*
8/5/2015 c8 iiTeddyBear
I have to say I truly love this story but my favorite part was the ending authors note, that was amazing. You made my day, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
I have to say I truly love this story but my favorite part was the ending authors note, that was amazing. You made my day, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
6/10/2015 c1
14Silent Kill Z
Haven't read it yet, but i added it to favorites to read later on today. The description was enough to get me interested and plus ITS A YAOI! I LOVE YAOI!

Haven't read it yet, but i added it to favorites to read later on today. The description was enough to get me interested and plus ITS A YAOI! I LOVE YAOI!
4/23/2015 c8 meiTeabags
Don't let that bad review get to you, I think this is downright entertaining. I Googled Inuyasha x Shippo as a joke, but this is actually pretty interesting yaoi. GG
Don't let that bad review get to you, I think this is downright entertaining. I Googled Inuyasha x Shippo as a joke, but this is actually pretty interesting yaoi. GG
2/11/2015 c8
4Peya Luna
just for the record: im happy you got rid off kagome. cant stand her either most of the time ;-)
aside from that, i just LOVE your story. great twists on the original plot, and what feels like my new OT3 to boot! ive never come across a inu/sess/shippo before, but ive got to say their dynamic works perfectly for me. inu as alpha, sess as incredibly strong beta and shippo as a less strong beta who also bottoms for sess and evens their tempers, it just fits! so far i only knew inu/sess/kou threesome, with sess being alpha and inu/kou being the betas, and that sadly didnt work at all - inu and kouga where constantly fighting for second place. and the odd sess/shippo? sorry, but shippo is just too weak for one as sess. but this? utter awesomness. i hope itll become a new trend.

just for the record: im happy you got rid off kagome. cant stand her either most of the time ;-)
aside from that, i just LOVE your story. great twists on the original plot, and what feels like my new OT3 to boot! ive never come across a inu/sess/shippo before, but ive got to say their dynamic works perfectly for me. inu as alpha, sess as incredibly strong beta and shippo as a less strong beta who also bottoms for sess and evens their tempers, it just fits! so far i only knew inu/sess/kou threesome, with sess being alpha and inu/kou being the betas, and that sadly didnt work at all - inu and kouga where constantly fighting for second place. and the odd sess/shippo? sorry, but shippo is just too weak for one as sess. but this? utter awesomness. i hope itll become a new trend.
12/13/2014 c3 Guest
YOU ARE A BITCH. KAGOMES NOT THAT BAD, HAVE YOU EVEN THOUGHT FOR A SECOND THAT INUYASHA WAS THE FREAKIBG ASSDICK HERE? SHES ONLY A BITCH WHEN IT COMES TO INUYASHA, WTF WOMAN? MAYBE ITS CAUSE YOURE JEALOUS THAT YOUR NOT KAGOME OR MAYBE YOUR ASS IS A FUCKING VIRGIN. I DUNNO IF YOUR A GUY OR NOT, BUT BITCH ABT KAGOME SOMEWHERE ELSE. THERES A WHOLE LOT MORE OF KAGOME FANS THAT HATERS HERE. LOOK AT THE INUYASHA CROSSOVER ARCHIVE. BITCH. LOSER. GAY DREAMER. VIRGIN BITCH WHO CANT CATCH A GUY AND FUCK. HOW ARE U DIFFERENTFROM HER AANYWAY? I GUESS YOURE PRACTICAPLY DEFENSELESS BUT AT LEAST KAGOME HAS PRIESTESS POWERS AND YOUR AN ORDINARY UGLY HOE WHO LOOKS LIKE A WART WITCH. I DONT MIND THE LEMON BUT THE PLOT IS BULLSHIT. LESS THAN A WEEK? HOW CAN SOMEBODY FALL IN LOVE THAT SHORT? THATS MORE LIKE A CRUSH. MAY YOUR FICS BE BRANDED FUCKING FULL OF BULLSHIT BY KAGOME FANS.
YOU ARE A BITCH. KAGOMES NOT THAT BAD, HAVE YOU EVEN THOUGHT FOR A SECOND THAT INUYASHA WAS THE FREAKIBG ASSDICK HERE? SHES ONLY A BITCH WHEN IT COMES TO INUYASHA, WTF WOMAN? MAYBE ITS CAUSE YOURE JEALOUS THAT YOUR NOT KAGOME OR MAYBE YOUR ASS IS A FUCKING VIRGIN. I DUNNO IF YOUR A GUY OR NOT, BUT BITCH ABT KAGOME SOMEWHERE ELSE. THERES A WHOLE LOT MORE OF KAGOME FANS THAT HATERS HERE. LOOK AT THE INUYASHA CROSSOVER ARCHIVE. BITCH. LOSER. GAY DREAMER. VIRGIN BITCH WHO CANT CATCH A GUY AND FUCK. HOW ARE U DIFFERENTFROM HER AANYWAY? I GUESS YOURE PRACTICAPLY DEFENSELESS BUT AT LEAST KAGOME HAS PRIESTESS POWERS AND YOUR AN ORDINARY UGLY HOE WHO LOOKS LIKE A WART WITCH. I DONT MIND THE LEMON BUT THE PLOT IS BULLSHIT. LESS THAN A WEEK? HOW CAN SOMEBODY FALL IN LOVE THAT SHORT? THATS MORE LIKE A CRUSH. MAY YOUR FICS BE BRANDED FUCKING FULL OF BULLSHIT BY KAGOME FANS.
6/15/2014 c7 Eyea
Hah so so so cute and... Weird? Whatever I lover it
Hah so so so cute and... Weird? Whatever I lover it