for Our Timing Sucks3/15/2013 c7 Guest
PLEASE UPDATE SOON, I BEG YOU.
PLEASE UPDATE SOON, I BEG YOU.
1/1/2013 c7 
3NieveDrop
Yuzu's diplomacy saves the day! :D
Oh Byakins...don't be such a fuddy-duddy. ;) Urahara probably pissed you off on purpose. LOL
Glad to see this was the result. It was the only one that made complete sense. The reactions were well played out.
As much as it sounds like I don't want to dwell much on what went down in the past, I'm very curious as to what went down with the Karakura faction. I'm guessing either there was a trial run before Rukia or the courting & marriage of Rukia happened very quickly following whichever major Soul Society arc this is meant to follow.
3NieveDropYuzu's diplomacy saves the day! :D
Oh Byakins...don't be such a fuddy-duddy. ;) Urahara probably pissed you off on purpose. LOL
Glad to see this was the result. It was the only one that made complete sense. The reactions were well played out.
As much as it sounds like I don't want to dwell much on what went down in the past, I'm very curious as to what went down with the Karakura faction. I'm guessing either there was a trial run before Rukia or the courting & marriage of Rukia happened very quickly following whichever major Soul Society arc this is meant to follow.
1/1/2013 c6 NieveDrop
A giant tease of a chapter! :P
Love Yuzu and Karin. Hope the introduction of Urahara means we'll be seeing some of the Shoten gang in the future?
"Because if Rukia was afraid, then he would be terrified."
Nicely summed up. :)
A giant tease of a chapter! :P
Love Yuzu and Karin. Hope the introduction of Urahara means we'll be seeing some of the Shoten gang in the future?
"Because if Rukia was afraid, then he would be terrified."
Nicely summed up. :)
1/1/2013 c5 NieveDrop
"Onii-chan, I don't want you to panic,"
Aww...poor Yuzu got stuck trying to make sure Ichigo didn't panic. Yeah...like that's going to work. lol
"He always seemed to be running after this one woman, over and over again."
:(
"Angry, little, orange, bankai kittens."
I have a strong urge to see Rukia draw this!
"Onii-chan, I don't want you to panic,"
Aww...poor Yuzu got stuck trying to make sure Ichigo didn't panic. Yeah...like that's going to work. lol
"He always seemed to be running after this one woman, over and over again."
:(
"Angry, little, orange, bankai kittens."
I have a strong urge to see Rukia draw this!
12/31/2012 c4 NieveDrop
Rukia laying down the law to Isshin! HEART!
Although, it seems like Rukia's "weapons" are not necessarily a benefit to her. :/
Rukia laying down the law to Isshin! HEART!
Although, it seems like Rukia's "weapons" are not necessarily a benefit to her. :/
12/31/2012 c3 NieveDrop
"One of these days she was going to understand that she was beautiful and it wasn't merely just some visual impairment that only Ichigo suffered from and, damn it, he'll take all the help from this kind, old man he was going to get."
That just makes me awwwww.
Poor Rukia. The uncertainty, the disappointment, the guilt of feeling disappointed, the vomiting... :(
"One of these days she was going to understand that she was beautiful and it wasn't merely just some visual impairment that only Ichigo suffered from and, damn it, he'll take all the help from this kind, old man he was going to get."
That just makes me awwwww.
Poor Rukia. The uncertainty, the disappointment, the guilt of feeling disappointed, the vomiting... :(
12/31/2012 c2 NieveDrop
If Rukia was going to keep in touch with anyone, it would be Karin & Yuzu. Nice relationships you've built between the 5 of them.
It's interesting to see the similarities between Rukia & Karin & Rukia & Yuzu. Rukia & Karin are both strong, sarcastic, and don't take crap from anyone they don't want to take crap from. Yet Rukia & Yuzu are both the first to put everyone else before themselves. They will put their own lives and successes on hold to see the success of others. It explains a lot of Rukia's ability to bond with both of them.
Hahaha - Yuzu teaming up with Isshin! That was too funny.
If Rukia was going to keep in touch with anyone, it would be Karin & Yuzu. Nice relationships you've built between the 5 of them.
It's interesting to see the similarities between Rukia & Karin & Rukia & Yuzu. Rukia & Karin are both strong, sarcastic, and don't take crap from anyone they don't want to take crap from. Yet Rukia & Yuzu are both the first to put everyone else before themselves. They will put their own lives and successes on hold to see the success of others. It explains a lot of Rukia's ability to bond with both of them.
Hahaha - Yuzu teaming up with Isshin! That was too funny.
12/31/2012 c1 NieveDrop
This is a very natural and comfortable relationship you've created here. Very fun to read.
I also like how Rukia also keeps the rest of the Kurosakis in the forefront and considers that home.
This is a very natural and comfortable relationship you've created here. Very fun to read.
I also like how Rukia also keeps the rest of the Kurosakis in the forefront and considers that home.
8/20/2012 c7 Guest
oooohhhhh its getting sooo good!
oooohhhhh its getting sooo good!
8/19/2012 c7 Guest
I have to say, byakuya's entrance was totally welcomed! It was awesome. He was worried for rukia haha , that's so sweet. But I supposed he didn't want rukia to end up like her sister. Anyway update soon!
I have to say, byakuya's entrance was totally welcomed! It was awesome. He was worried for rukia haha , that's so sweet. But I supposed he didn't want rukia to end up like her sister. Anyway update soon!
8/19/2012 c7 anonaon
I love the way you wrote the pregnancy reveal scenes, especially the one between Rukia and Ichigo. It was extremely touching to read. Also, while it's true that pregnancy plots are used often, they are less often written the right way; however, you are definitely doing it the right way and it's very refreshing. So keep doing what you're doing, because it's working!
I love the way you wrote the pregnancy reveal scenes, especially the one between Rukia and Ichigo. It was extremely touching to read. Also, while it's true that pregnancy plots are used often, they are less often written the right way; however, you are definitely doing it the right way and it's very refreshing. So keep doing what you're doing, because it's working!
8/20/2012 c7 Sharksbean
Don't normally read bleach fanfiction but this is nice, I like it. Had it figured out from the start though that she was pregnant, even with the false negative you put in to throw us off the trail. Will be following this story so please update soon.
Don't normally read bleach fanfiction but this is nice, I like it. Had it figured out from the start though that she was pregnant, even with the false negative you put in to throw us off the trail. Will be following this story so please update soon.
8/19/2012 c7 13Iris Irine
YES! Finally the revelation of the truth of her sickness
Perhaps, with Byakuya comes the resolution to their problems? And it's nice to see that you're keeping this very realistic and down to earth with all the circumstances surrounding their financial condition and relationships
Update soon, please :)
13Iris IrineYES! Finally the revelation of the truth of her sickness
Perhaps, with Byakuya comes the resolution to their problems? And it's nice to see that you're keeping this very realistic and down to earth with all the circumstances surrounding their financial condition and relationships
Update soon, please :)
8/19/2012 c7 wynnsy
Im touched by byakuyas stoic ways of caring for his sister. I was scared that the chapter would end before the revelation. I cant wait til they break the news to everyone and until byakuya isshin ichigo hell even renji and ukitake spoil their child. Even urahara and yoruichi would make badass teachers. Gotta love the beach universe.
Im touched by byakuyas stoic ways of caring for his sister. I was scared that the chapter would end before the revelation. I cant wait til they break the news to everyone and until byakuya isshin ichigo hell even renji and ukitake spoil their child. Even urahara and yoruichi would make badass teachers. Gotta love the beach universe.