7/23/2012 c1 1Xander Esquire
is this you Lisa?
I mean if not I'm sorry its just a friend of mine is writing something like this and told me they were up to 30,000 words and well they wouldn't let me read it but said they were putting it on this site so yeah.
besides that this is a good fanfic I like the way its written and will spend the rest of the night finishing it interrogating my friend tomorrow
is this you Lisa?
I mean if not I'm sorry its just a friend of mine is writing something like this and told me they were up to 30,000 words and well they wouldn't let me read it but said they were putting it on this site so yeah.
besides that this is a good fanfic I like the way its written and will spend the rest of the night finishing it interrogating my friend tomorrow
7/10/2012 c5 Guest
Hot damn. Why is it that I find a story, read through all the chapters, and the chapter it stops on just so happens to be the chapter with the BIGGEST cliffhanger? I really like this story :) I absolutely love married stories. So many stories center on the formation of their relationship, so I love how this one centers on their married life (though I still love all Ichiruki fics and will still be reading your prequel haha).
Poor little Rukia :( I really hope she's pregnant. That's what my gut is telling me, but I don't want to commit to that answer hahaha
I fully expect a quick update! :P
Hot damn. Why is it that I find a story, read through all the chapters, and the chapter it stops on just so happens to be the chapter with the BIGGEST cliffhanger? I really like this story :) I absolutely love married stories. So many stories center on the formation of their relationship, so I love how this one centers on their married life (though I still love all Ichiruki fics and will still be reading your prequel haha).
Poor little Rukia :( I really hope she's pregnant. That's what my gut is telling me, but I don't want to commit to that answer hahaha
I fully expect a quick update! :P
5/18/2012 c5 4teshichan
What a cliffhanger! Hahaha. I wonder what Rukia's illness is? Hope you update soon... With all the torture that you've given us. Haha. Although i think Rukia might be pregnant. Hahaha
What a cliffhanger! Hahaha. I wonder what Rukia's illness is? Hope you update soon... With all the torture that you've given us. Haha. Although i think Rukia might be pregnant. Hahaha
5/17/2012 c5 Cisusi
Okay, I am reviewing, but I dont review often because I am no good at it. I cannot offer you suggestions or constructive criticism because I don't see anything wrong with your story. I don't give out suggestions because I like what the author has planed out, I dont want to give a bad idea and have the whole story be a flop.
But other wise I can give you praise! Nice job the story is really interesting and I cannot wait to see what is coming next! This is very very interesting!
Okay, I am reviewing, but I dont review often because I am no good at it. I cannot offer you suggestions or constructive criticism because I don't see anything wrong with your story. I don't give out suggestions because I like what the author has planed out, I dont want to give a bad idea and have the whole story be a flop.
But other wise I can give you praise! Nice job the story is really interesting and I cannot wait to see what is coming next! This is very very interesting!
5/17/2012 c5 1aokiiro
Whooa, you're evil! You're so cruel! You really makes me curious about if. (Even if maybe I can predicted what will happened next, but I still curious). Update soon pleaseeee
Whooa, you're evil! You're so cruel! You really makes me curious about if. (Even if maybe I can predicted what will happened next, but I still curious). Update soon pleaseeee
5/17/2012 c5 11LadyJirachi
Pregnancy is so boring . it's always pregnancy. It'd be cooler if she did have her sister's disease, like it's some hereditary thing in rukia's family or something. Then she can always ask byakuya about it. I like protective ichigo :) but protective-ichigo-over-his-pregnant-wife? It's very common.
Pregnancy is so boring . it's always pregnancy. It'd be cooler if she did have her sister's disease, like it's some hereditary thing in rukia's family or something. Then she can always ask byakuya about it. I like protective ichigo :) but protective-ichigo-over-his-pregnant-wife? It's very common.
5/16/2012 c5 13Iris Irine
Well, I hope it's something like pregnancy and not gastroenteritis or something worse like cancer or organ damage.
Well, I hope it's something like pregnancy and not gastroenteritis or something worse like cancer or organ damage.
5/16/2012 c5 Aletheya
That was EVIL! How could you! I wanted to know and you did that! D: you bad, bad person! T_T well, at least it doesn't look like it's that bad, despite Rukia's rection. Please don't take long to update, you got me so curious!
That was EVIL! How could you! I wanted to know and you did that! D: you bad, bad person! T_T well, at least it doesn't look like it's that bad, despite Rukia's rection. Please don't take long to update, you got me so curious!
5/1/2012 c4 Aletheya
Hm... She's definitely pregnant, I bet! She just didn't do it right!
Anyway, keep going! I want to see more of this story!
Hm... She's definitely pregnant, I bet! She just didn't do it right!
Anyway, keep going! I want to see more of this story!