for Our Timing Sucks2/25/2012 c3 
4teshichan
Wonder what's up with Rukia...?
An interesting story you got here. It's like they're too busy with their own lives to enjoy their lives together. Tsk tsk
I wonder what will happen next? Hope you update soon!:)
4teshichanWonder what's up with Rukia...?
An interesting story you got here. It's like they're too busy with their own lives to enjoy their lives together. Tsk tsk
I wonder what will happen next? Hope you update soon!:)
2/20/2012 c3 7garganta
I really like your story and enjoy it thoroughly! The atmosphere is light, it's easy to read and it's funny, the drama is well dosed, not overbearing. You are doing a great job!
I hope you will continue this story for a very long time...like another 100 chapters :P :)
Update soon :)
7gargantaI really like your story and enjoy it thoroughly! The atmosphere is light, it's easy to read and it's funny, the drama is well dosed, not overbearing. You are doing a great job!
I hope you will continue this story for a very long time...like another 100 chapters :P :)
Update soon :)
2/16/2012 c3 ichirukitard
Hmmm, before I was pretty certain that Rukia is pregnant, and this chapter kind of confirmed that until I read your author's note. Now I'm not so certain anymore. LOL. I hope it won't be something really bad or anything though. Anyways, I really enjoyed reading this chapter like the previous two. My heart just melt and turned to sweet gooey whenever Ichigo was so sweet and caring toward Rukia. I loved the part when Ichigo was thinking that he would have been fairly possessive of his wife if he didn't know the well-intentioned and completely harmless the shop owner's feelings really was for his wife. I had a smile reading that part. On the other hand, Rukia's scene in the bathroom had me cracked up. It was so funny seeing her waiting for the result and then her reactions of the said result. LOL. Also, she had Ichigo good with the tampon excuse. Haha poor Ichigo. And once again, their love making was interrupted. Gosh, you are so cruel to them. LOL. BTW, that scene was pretty hot! XD Now that Ichigo owe Rukia one later on, I hope you will see them through next time :D Lastly, I liked Rukia conversation with Karin and the calling for her black skirt at the end. XD All in all, another great chapter all around. =)
Like you, I prefer happy endings than tragic ones; so I'm glad to know this will be the former. Nah, I think this chapter length was good. Of course, I would prefer longer chapters but no where this chapter felt short (at least to me). I'm just thankful for you taking some time off from your busy schedule to write for us, so don't feel bad about it. You're doing us a great service, so thank you for that. Also, I'm happy that you agreed with me and thank you for the compliment ;) Awww I cannot wait to read the prequel, but I hope you don't quit updating the story while doing it. I'm actually surprised that you didn't get a lot of reviews since your story is very good with great IC characters, great dialogue, and well written at that. Well, at least I hope my review will help give you some encouragements XD. Maybe give it some more time for more people to get to know your story, you know? Oh, hooray for some characters from Gotei 13! I love them too! XP Okay then, take care until the next update =) (BTW, sorry for the long review. I hope I didn't bore you to death by now XD)
Hmmm, before I was pretty certain that Rukia is pregnant, and this chapter kind of confirmed that until I read your author's note. Now I'm not so certain anymore. LOL. I hope it won't be something really bad or anything though. Anyways, I really enjoyed reading this chapter like the previous two. My heart just melt and turned to sweet gooey whenever Ichigo was so sweet and caring toward Rukia. I loved the part when Ichigo was thinking that he would have been fairly possessive of his wife if he didn't know the well-intentioned and completely harmless the shop owner's feelings really was for his wife. I had a smile reading that part. On the other hand, Rukia's scene in the bathroom had me cracked up. It was so funny seeing her waiting for the result and then her reactions of the said result. LOL. Also, she had Ichigo good with the tampon excuse. Haha poor Ichigo. And once again, their love making was interrupted. Gosh, you are so cruel to them. LOL. BTW, that scene was pretty hot! XD Now that Ichigo owe Rukia one later on, I hope you will see them through next time :D Lastly, I liked Rukia conversation with Karin and the calling for her black skirt at the end. XD All in all, another great chapter all around. =)
Like you, I prefer happy endings than tragic ones; so I'm glad to know this will be the former. Nah, I think this chapter length was good. Of course, I would prefer longer chapters but no where this chapter felt short (at least to me). I'm just thankful for you taking some time off from your busy schedule to write for us, so don't feel bad about it. You're doing us a great service, so thank you for that. Also, I'm happy that you agreed with me and thank you for the compliment ;) Awww I cannot wait to read the prequel, but I hope you don't quit updating the story while doing it. I'm actually surprised that you didn't get a lot of reviews since your story is very good with great IC characters, great dialogue, and well written at that. Well, at least I hope my review will help give you some encouragements XD. Maybe give it some more time for more people to get to know your story, you know? Oh, hooray for some characters from Gotei 13! I love them too! XP Okay then, take care until the next update =) (BTW, sorry for the long review. I hope I didn't bore you to death by now XD)
2/15/2012 c3 MindlessAbandon
I really love this! Your portrayal of IchiRuki is amazing! They seem in character! And i love the subtlety of the fluff mixed with the drama! I also love your writing style! It's calm and articulate -not rushed and not dragged out. Just wonderful! Plus, your sense of humor is just right!
also, the idea -plot- is delectable! I love IchiRuki married life stories and yours is exceptionally well written! :)
Please do continue writing this and update us as soon as you can. Thank you!
I really love this! Your portrayal of IchiRuki is amazing! They seem in character! And i love the subtlety of the fluff mixed with the drama! I also love your writing style! It's calm and articulate -not rushed and not dragged out. Just wonderful! Plus, your sense of humor is just right!
also, the idea -plot- is delectable! I love IchiRuki married life stories and yours is exceptionally well written! :)
Please do continue writing this and update us as soon as you can. Thank you!
2/7/2012 c2 ichirukitard
Awww I loved the whole family get together scene; it was cute, funny, and heartwarming. Haha the father never cease to make me laugh. It's so nice to see the twins all grown up in here. Gosh Yuzu is such a darling for putting her goal behind in order to help her family. LOL at Ichigo for wanting to bankai all the boys; such an overly protective brother and husband XD Rukia was such a caring sister in law too; I always loved her relationship with the twins. Anyways, I think you captured all the characters in here pretty well; loved their interactions.
Awww I loved how sweet of a husband Ichigo is toward Rukia. I just loved all those affectionate scenes you had for them. Poor Ichigo, still didn't get to make love to his wife :D Despite this, he was so understanding and so caring toward her. I'm loving how mature you're making their relationship and characters to be in here. And omg, I think Rukia is pregnant. Am I right? LOL. I know she's on birth control pills, but the signs are telling me that she's pregnant. I'm thinking Isshin didn't give her the right pills or Urahara had something up his sleeve with her gigai. LOL. Well, great chapter once again. I cannot wait for your next update. Until then, take care. =)
Awww I loved the whole family get together scene; it was cute, funny, and heartwarming. Haha the father never cease to make me laugh. It's so nice to see the twins all grown up in here. Gosh Yuzu is such a darling for putting her goal behind in order to help her family. LOL at Ichigo for wanting to bankai all the boys; such an overly protective brother and husband XD Rukia was such a caring sister in law too; I always loved her relationship with the twins. Anyways, I think you captured all the characters in here pretty well; loved their interactions.
Awww I loved how sweet of a husband Ichigo is toward Rukia. I just loved all those affectionate scenes you had for them. Poor Ichigo, still didn't get to make love to his wife :D Despite this, he was so understanding and so caring toward her. I'm loving how mature you're making their relationship and characters to be in here. And omg, I think Rukia is pregnant. Am I right? LOL. I know she's on birth control pills, but the signs are telling me that she's pregnant. I'm thinking Isshin didn't give her the right pills or Urahara had something up his sleeve with her gigai. LOL. Well, great chapter once again. I cannot wait for your next update. Until then, take care. =)
2/7/2012 c1 ichirukitard
Hi there! I just wanted to let you know that I loved reading stories that have Ichigo and Rukia as a married couple, and your story didn't disappoint at all. I loved all their interactions in this chapter; it wasn't too sappy or too sweet, but just about right and in characters. Loved the bed scene! :P Haha at Ichigo for not getting what he wanted XD Although sexy Ichigo is too hard to resist, so I can see Rukia will be giving in soon. LOL. But poor Rukia for all those interventions and bad timings getting in her way. It's so sweet of her to try to work at the clinic so she could spend more time with her hubby. I really feel for them for trying to make their human world living as a married couple as best as they can while juggling with school, work, and everything else. All in all, a great start to a great story. Your writing and characterizations were all pretty good and spot on. I would definitely continue following this story for sure. keep up the good work! =)
As for your questions: I wouldn't mind what ever way you choose, but I think a prequel sounds good though. I would be happy to read it no matter how you incorporate it into the story as long as I get more Ichiruki fluffiness XD As for question 2, I don't mind Uryuu being paired up with Orihime since I think they make a pretty cute couple. :)
Hi there! I just wanted to let you know that I loved reading stories that have Ichigo and Rukia as a married couple, and your story didn't disappoint at all. I loved all their interactions in this chapter; it wasn't too sappy or too sweet, but just about right and in characters. Loved the bed scene! :P Haha at Ichigo for not getting what he wanted XD Although sexy Ichigo is too hard to resist, so I can see Rukia will be giving in soon. LOL. But poor Rukia for all those interventions and bad timings getting in her way. It's so sweet of her to try to work at the clinic so she could spend more time with her hubby. I really feel for them for trying to make their human world living as a married couple as best as they can while juggling with school, work, and everything else. All in all, a great start to a great story. Your writing and characterizations were all pretty good and spot on. I would definitely continue following this story for sure. keep up the good work! =)
As for your questions: I wouldn't mind what ever way you choose, but I think a prequel sounds good though. I would be happy to read it no matter how you incorporate it into the story as long as I get more Ichiruki fluffiness XD As for question 2, I don't mind Uryuu being paired up with Orihime since I think they make a pretty cute couple. :)
2/5/2012 c2 LRed
I have to say I am loving the story so far I love the way that you balance the cutesy moments now that they are married with how their personas really are. Personally that's how I prefer it just a dab at least in fictions where they are already together (I can be a sucker for fics where it leads up to them being together just flooded with fluff lol) and it keeps from me getting bored 'cause if they already are together seeing fluff after fluff after omg kawai!11! get's old fast which is something that turns me off of alot of fics where they are already together for the long run(i.e. long relationship/marriage).
As for the the back story for it I would personally enjoy it allot more if you did it in a prequel because I for one feel it would be easier for you to develop it further then just squeezing it in flashbacks and I feel you can start developing it now by maybe inserting references in this story and addressing them further in the prequel I feel it would be a much better way to tell a story you make this one and leave fans wondering about the references you made without going too into them then develop them in the prequel which, I feel, would make people who read this story really interested.I for one would read that.But alas even I have an ulterior motive which is ... OMG PLZ GIVE ME TEH FLUFFS PLZ I NEEDZ ITZ I WANTZ ITZ ALLZ ZE BLUSHES ZE AWKWARDZ MOMENTZ OMG PLZ PLZ PLZ !111!
*clears throat*
well...
sorry about that...
I bid adieu to you now while I talk some sense into myself.
Lot's of Love LRed ♥
I have to say I am loving the story so far I love the way that you balance the cutesy moments now that they are married with how their personas really are. Personally that's how I prefer it just a dab at least in fictions where they are already together (I can be a sucker for fics where it leads up to them being together just flooded with fluff lol) and it keeps from me getting bored 'cause if they already are together seeing fluff after fluff after omg kawai!11! get's old fast which is something that turns me off of alot of fics where they are already together for the long run(i.e. long relationship/marriage).
As for the the back story for it I would personally enjoy it allot more if you did it in a prequel because I for one feel it would be easier for you to develop it further then just squeezing it in flashbacks and I feel you can start developing it now by maybe inserting references in this story and addressing them further in the prequel I feel it would be a much better way to tell a story you make this one and leave fans wondering about the references you made without going too into them then develop them in the prequel which, I feel, would make people who read this story really interested.I for one would read that.But alas even I have an ulterior motive which is ... OMG PLZ GIVE ME TEH FLUFFS PLZ I NEEDZ ITZ I WANTZ ITZ ALLZ ZE BLUSHES ZE AWKWARDZ MOMENTZ OMG PLZ PLZ PLZ !111!
*clears throat*
well...
sorry about that...
I bid adieu to you now while I talk some sense into myself.
Lot's of Love LRed ♥
2/5/2012 c2 kurukurupa
Sugoi! I really love it! I tottaly enjoyed the pacing of this story..
It's such a shame that people don't even bother reading or worse reviewing your work.. It's worth it!
I wonder if Rukia is pregnant.. She's been sleeping too much and she's been throwing up alot.. Those are symptoms of pregnancy right...? I hope she is.. I would love to read more of a pregnant Rukia.. :-)
Ganbatte kudasai! 3
Sugoi! I really love it! I tottaly enjoyed the pacing of this story..
It's such a shame that people don't even bother reading or worse reviewing your work.. It's worth it!
I wonder if Rukia is pregnant.. She's been sleeping too much and she's been throwing up alot.. Those are symptoms of pregnancy right...? I hope she is.. I would love to read more of a pregnant Rukia.. :-)
Ganbatte kudasai! 3
2/5/2012 c1 MugetsuIchigo
Man! That was awesome and... what? Wow this fic sure deserves more reviews!
Man! That was awesome and... what? Wow this fic sure deserves more reviews!
1/30/2012 c1 Lago
I'm rather amazed this hasn't been reviewed more. I would have done it earlier if I had any idea what I wanted to say.
For your questions:
1. I would think it would be easier/more fun to do flashbacks. Having to refer between two different stories is a much more jarring reading experience. Depending on how you write them, flashbacks can flow very easily into the story since context is already established (you do a minor version of this perfectly with the little Yuzu section in this chapter).
2. I don't personally mind one way or the other, but it would be hard to not do it. It might just be my own interpretation of her character, but she's always seemed more "romantically" inclined than the rest of the cast. I'd probably do it just to make things easier on myself.
I'm rather amazed this hasn't been reviewed more. I would have done it earlier if I had any idea what I wanted to say.
For your questions:
1. I would think it would be easier/more fun to do flashbacks. Having to refer between two different stories is a much more jarring reading experience. Depending on how you write them, flashbacks can flow very easily into the story since context is already established (you do a minor version of this perfectly with the little Yuzu section in this chapter).
2. I don't personally mind one way or the other, but it would be hard to not do it. It might just be my own interpretation of her character, but she's always seemed more "romantically" inclined than the rest of the cast. I'd probably do it just to make things easier on myself.
1/30/2012 c1 kurukurupa
I really enjoyed reading this..! I was just a little disappointed cause it's not finish yet.. You will finish this story, right? I hope you will! I am really looking forward to more updates from you.. Ganbatte! @-}-
I really enjoyed reading this..! I was just a little disappointed cause it's not finish yet.. You will finish this story, right? I hope you will! I am really looking forward to more updates from you.. Ganbatte! @-}-