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7/2/2018 c1 Guest
Don't trust Matthew everwoods... if you were a guest Reviewer, he would delete your review.

Don't believe it? See for yourself.. If you give him good amount of constructive criticism.. He will Delete it or Deny it. Lol
5/8/2013 c1 Guest
Read "Bringer of Death." It's an awesome DBZ fic.
7/19/2012 c1 Guest
Literally right after i posted my review i remembered that sasuke doesnt need the rasengan cuz he's got the chidori which was based of the rasengan in the first place
7/19/2012 c1 Guest
I think it would make a good story except for the team rasengan. Rasengan is a namikaze family jutsu and the only reason kakashi and ero-sennin know it is because they were close to minato.
5/9/2012 c1 10JohnStang
Did you not read the story guidelines when you made this story?

Do you not read the reviews of attached to this challenge?

If you had then you will know posting of challenges such as this is prohibited in this section.

You shoul consider deleting this. I did when I made the exact same error.
3/5/2012 c1 TheRealCockBlocker
Entries not allowed:

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3. MST: comments inserted in between the flow of a copied story.

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Your story is not allowed under section 1 of the guidelines.

You should be posting this sort of thing on your profile page and/or a message board/forum instead of here since this isn't a real story.
1/31/2012 c1 MrGoodyTwoShoes
Entries not allowed:

1. Non-stories: lists, bloopers, polls, previews, challenges, author notes, and etc.

2. One or two liners.

3. MST: comments inserted in between the flow of a copied story.

4. Stories with non-historical and non-fictional characters: actors, musicians, and etc.

5. Any form of interactive entry: choose your adventure, second person/you based, Q&As, and etc.

6. Chat/script format and keyboard dialogue based entries.

Your story is not allowed under section 1 of the guidelines.

You should be posting this sort of thing on your profile page and/or a message board/forum instead of here since this isn't a real story.
1/31/2012 c1 2pensuka
this is interesting i wonder will happen?
1/30/2012 c1 5Thee Fallen Demon
i only see two major problems with this. A. you miss up the time line if Sasuke does not leave for Orochimaru. B. the Rasengan was made by the forth NAruto's dad who taught it to his students Aka Kakashi and to Jiraiya his sensei. Jiraiya taught it to NAruto because it was his by birth right so Naruto had to give the ok. and from the way Sasuke and him act he would not teach it to him. if sasuke was going to learn it KAkashi would have taught him it durning the one month break for the chunnin exam, but once again it was not his to give away. other then those two thing i could do the challenge
1/30/2012 c1 animefan123
Awsome i love this pairing update soon. :)

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