3/24/2020 c1 Godhelm
Wow. Just wow. This is a great story, a little on the short side, but still great. I really wish you could make a sequel—I want to see Sasuke bashed even more. I love how you changed the reason for the Uchiha massacre, even if you don’t care about this review, it’s still great.

5/5/2018 c1 Curious-Brunette13
O.o
Wow
Kudos
-CB

6/9/2015 c1 18Onlyafraidoffear
Seriously, this needs a sequel or an alternate happy ending, I don't care which, but this is to good to just leave hanging!

3/1/2013 c1 em
this was good, but so freakin' sad! poor naruto! i wonder what will happen/where she will go from there... maybe one day you can do a semi-continuation? either way, thanks for an excellent story!

7/4/2012 c1 sandy-ramen-thief
Holy...Crap...that was incredibly sad...It was good, but it almost made me cry!

4/21/2012 c1 16Zelga Lim Li
oooo... this one is good.. hope you'll update sooner^^

uhm, what did kabuto do when he appeared after the fight in the valley of the end? did he knew naruto is pregnant or had an miscarriage? all i know is that he healed her but then what happened next?

2/1/2012 c1 3JuMiKu
Wow, this is a very good attempt at capturing the huge impact the loss of a child (even just a potential one), can have on one's life. But what was that short scene with the cloaked figure about?