for If You Fall7/16/2012 c8 Guest
Amazing story! I love it xD
Amazing story! I love it xD
6/10/2012 c8 
5ReadrOfBooks
Can Molly's mother hen Patronus be canon? Or is it already? I need to check Pottermore? I'm so glad that I got a fluffy ending to this. It would've been too much for me to take otherwise. :)
5ReadrOfBooksCan Molly's mother hen Patronus be canon? Or is it already? I need to check Pottermore? I'm so glad that I got a fluffy ending to this. It would've been too much for me to take otherwise. :)
5/20/2012 c8 3AnMXD
this was fantastic! probably one of the best fics I've ever read! I loved your word choice and just how seemlessly everything flows together! it's quite beautiful! my favourite was probably the last chapter! I love fluff so it's okay! it was just so cute! I couldn't stand it! loveeeed it! and Molly's patronous being a hen: very clever .
cutos to you! this was great! :D
3AnMXDthis was fantastic! probably one of the best fics I've ever read! I loved your word choice and just how seemlessly everything flows together! it's quite beautiful! my favourite was probably the last chapter! I love fluff so it's okay! it was just so cute! I couldn't stand it! loveeeed it! and Molly's patronous being a hen: very clever .
cutos to you! this was great! :D
3/25/2012 c8 Hannah
*SOB* cant believe it's over :( but it was a gorgeous ending to an incredible story! It was so adorable and perfect and believable throughout, you have so much talent! :) I hope you write more soon! Xx
*SOB* cant believe it's over :( but it was a gorgeous ending to an incredible story! It was so adorable and perfect and believable throughout, you have so much talent! :) I hope you write more soon! Xx
3/25/2012 c8 Kitten Kisses
And now it's over. :'( It was a good ending. I was really glad to see that she wanted him to kiss her to sort of let her know that it would be different with him than it was with the douchebag.
[Remus wasn't kissing her, they were kissing, and it made all the difference in the world.] This was definitely my favorite line, probably in the entire fic. Perfectly done, your wording choice was ace.
Of course, I love that they don't have to do anything dramatic, like actually have sex, for things to turn out on the brighter side. Obviously it will take her time to come to terms with things, but in the end it will happen with time (as most things do), and though it'll never really "go away", at least she'll be able to put it to the back of her mind.
Anyway, great ending chapter. I'm sorry it took me so long to get to it...I've been working sixty-plus hour weeks because of this early spring we're having here in the States. Anyway, take care and I hope to see more 'fic from you soon!
Cheers,
Manna
And now it's over. :'( It was a good ending. I was really glad to see that she wanted him to kiss her to sort of let her know that it would be different with him than it was with the douchebag.
[Remus wasn't kissing her, they were kissing, and it made all the difference in the world.] This was definitely my favorite line, probably in the entire fic. Perfectly done, your wording choice was ace.
Of course, I love that they don't have to do anything dramatic, like actually have sex, for things to turn out on the brighter side. Obviously it will take her time to come to terms with things, but in the end it will happen with time (as most things do), and though it'll never really "go away", at least she'll be able to put it to the back of her mind.
Anyway, great ending chapter. I'm sorry it took me so long to get to it...I've been working sixty-plus hour weeks because of this early spring we're having here in the States. Anyway, take care and I hope to see more 'fic from you soon!
Cheers,
Manna
3/24/2012 c8 1pinkbunniesinthemeadow
I think it was a very good story. There were n't any bad things so :)
I hope you'll write another fanfiction one time :)
1pinkbunniesinthemeadowI think it was a very good story. There were n't any bad things so :)
I hope you'll write another fanfiction one time :)
3/23/2012 c8 17Lupinfangirl
Oh God, I'm sooo sorry for not reviewing the last chapter, especially since comforting Remus made an appearance. *squeal* But seriously, WOW. No words. It was even better than I imagined because I never even thought Tonks would be so quick to say she loves Remus. But OMG, this is probably the best Remus/Tonks I've ever read. So clean and chaste and I still feel that oxytocin rush when I think of it! I loved these last two chapters and can't wait for more hurt/comfort goodness from you (you will keep writing, won't you?)
When I read about Remus beaming, I squealed. It was just so adorable and in-character how Remus can't believe Tonks could ever love him. And of course I loved Tonks' vulnerability, especially when she hugged him because she couldn't thank him enough. And the part with the nightmare and comforting Remus was amazing as well. Oh, and Molly's Patronus being a hen was just perfect!
Just one little typo: "She slowly became aware that she was clutching very tightly onto Remus' shit with white-knuckled fists."- you should really change that to "Remus' shirt", lol
Otherwise, great work and keep up the writing! 3
17LupinfangirlOh God, I'm sooo sorry for not reviewing the last chapter, especially since comforting Remus made an appearance. *squeal* But seriously, WOW. No words. It was even better than I imagined because I never even thought Tonks would be so quick to say she loves Remus. But OMG, this is probably the best Remus/Tonks I've ever read. So clean and chaste and I still feel that oxytocin rush when I think of it! I loved these last two chapters and can't wait for more hurt/comfort goodness from you (you will keep writing, won't you?)
When I read about Remus beaming, I squealed. It was just so adorable and in-character how Remus can't believe Tonks could ever love him. And of course I loved Tonks' vulnerability, especially when she hugged him because she couldn't thank him enough. And the part with the nightmare and comforting Remus was amazing as well. Oh, and Molly's Patronus being a hen was just perfect!
Just one little typo: "She slowly became aware that she was clutching very tightly onto Remus' shit with white-knuckled fists."- you should really change that to "Remus' shirt", lol
Otherwise, great work and keep up the writing! 3
3/23/2012 c8 StrawberryFields
Oh. My. Goodness. Gracious! I was afraid to read the last chapter because I didn't want the story to end but that was one of the best yet! Remus was so perfect and adorable especially when he comforted Tonks after her nightmare and I so loved this line: "There was no pain, no disgust, and she thought, idly, that it also had something to do with the fact that Remus wasn't kissing her, they were kissing, and it made all the difference in the world." so amazing! My favorite part was when she told him she loved him because I could see that happening just like that! Just spectacular job and I loved every word of the story and the ending was great! I'm just sad it's over but thank you for all the dedications and for posting the story and I cannot wait to read more from you!
Oh. My. Goodness. Gracious! I was afraid to read the last chapter because I didn't want the story to end but that was one of the best yet! Remus was so perfect and adorable especially when he comforted Tonks after her nightmare and I so loved this line: "There was no pain, no disgust, and she thought, idly, that it also had something to do with the fact that Remus wasn't kissing her, they were kissing, and it made all the difference in the world." so amazing! My favorite part was when she told him she loved him because I could see that happening just like that! Just spectacular job and I loved every word of the story and the ending was great! I'm just sad it's over but thank you for all the dedications and for posting the story and I cannot wait to read more from you!
3/22/2012 c8 1IsThisLove394
:')
Wow.
Oh sweet merlin, that was PERFECT. Just everything about it. I loved how sweet and gentile it was and I just ADORE the way you write lupin. He was a true hero here. The detail with the nightmare and then him going in to wake her up, I absolutely loved.
It was just a gorgeous ending, I loved those last lines. And I am so sad that this is the end! Thank you so much for the mention!It was my pleasure xD But I hope you do know, I shall be throwing a tantrum until you write something else.
Just well done, I love this story and I know it's one that I'm going to read again and again, whenever I need my Tonks/Lupin fix
Amazing! xxx
1IsThisLove394:')
Wow.
Oh sweet merlin, that was PERFECT. Just everything about it. I loved how sweet and gentile it was and I just ADORE the way you write lupin. He was a true hero here. The detail with the nightmare and then him going in to wake her up, I absolutely loved.
It was just a gorgeous ending, I loved those last lines. And I am so sad that this is the end! Thank you so much for the mention!It was my pleasure xD But I hope you do know, I shall be throwing a tantrum until you write something else.
Just well done, I love this story and I know it's one that I'm going to read again and again, whenever I need my Tonks/Lupin fix
Amazing! xxx
3/22/2012 c7 IsThisLove394
Where do I start?
I absolutely loved this chapter. Remus 100% redeemed himself. I really adored the beginning, it was very tender and sad but sweet. It was also a very clever idea to give us that scene again but from Lupin's point of view to give everyone a chance to put down their pitchforks and let him explain. The line 'The sight of her threatened to break his heart.' was very powerful, I adored that bit.
He felt his insides drop, but it was. It was hard to say.
I loved this bit because you very cleverly turned the tables here, we know Tonks has been through a lot but I'm not sure if she's not being unfair to Lupin. What's great about that scene is that their interaction went horribly wrong somewhere and we have no idea who's fault it is.
"She what?" Molly all but shrieked.
Hahahaha! Molly, perfectly in character as always. I loved hers and lupins very quick conversation at that bit. Two people that both love Tonks in different ways, having a sad, but still quite funny conversation. (I love the way you write)
When Remus started crying... totally unexpected but incredible. Reading that line made my tummy lurch a little. I thought their interaction/make up here was beautiful. It got me a bit teary when Tonks got so mean but the end was just...
N'awww! I love it so much! Cant believe only one chapter left... I'm going to have to read that one so slowly XD
So yeah, I loved it (suprise suprsise) and now onto chapter 8!
xxx
Where do I start?
I absolutely loved this chapter. Remus 100% redeemed himself. I really adored the beginning, it was very tender and sad but sweet. It was also a very clever idea to give us that scene again but from Lupin's point of view to give everyone a chance to put down their pitchforks and let him explain. The line 'The sight of her threatened to break his heart.' was very powerful, I adored that bit.
He felt his insides drop, but it was. It was hard to say.
I loved this bit because you very cleverly turned the tables here, we know Tonks has been through a lot but I'm not sure if she's not being unfair to Lupin. What's great about that scene is that their interaction went horribly wrong somewhere and we have no idea who's fault it is.
"She what?" Molly all but shrieked.
Hahahaha! Molly, perfectly in character as always. I loved hers and lupins very quick conversation at that bit. Two people that both love Tonks in different ways, having a sad, but still quite funny conversation. (I love the way you write)
When Remus started crying... totally unexpected but incredible. Reading that line made my tummy lurch a little. I thought their interaction/make up here was beautiful. It got me a bit teary when Tonks got so mean but the end was just...
N'awww! I love it so much! Cant believe only one chapter left... I'm going to have to read that one so slowly XD
So yeah, I loved it (suprise suprsise) and now onto chapter 8!
xxx
3/22/2012 c8 2Just a Cute Idea
Aw, that was so sweet; I really love the relationship you developed between Tonks and Remus. This is defiantly one of my favourite stories i have read. I cannot wait to see what you do next, I hope you have something new coming soon :D
2Just a Cute IdeaAw, that was so sweet; I really love the relationship you developed between Tonks and Remus. This is defiantly one of my favourite stories i have read. I cannot wait to see what you do next, I hope you have something new coming soon :D