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2ElizaWest221b
Perfect. There are no words. Good job writing the passion and portraying Mycroft and Anthea. I laughed reading this. Thank you!
2ElizaWest221bPerfect. There are no words. Good job writing the passion and portraying Mycroft and Anthea. I laughed reading this. Thank you!
1/9/2017 c1 Kat
Very nice
Very nice
12/3/2016 c1 Kat
Loved this, hope to read more Mycroft/Anthea stories from you.
Loved this, hope to read more Mycroft/Anthea stories from you.
5/5/2012 c1 deletedaccount1112131415161718
If this doesn't actually happen I'm gonna kill myself (well... that's a but extreme)
If this doesn't actually happen I'm gonna kill myself (well... that's a but extreme)
2/11/2012 c1 8xxL2xx
I really enjoyed their interaction and this story does make him seem human! lol! Good job! I hope to see more! :)
8xxL2xxI really enjoyed their interaction and this story does make him seem human! lol! Good job! I hope to see more! :)
2/5/2012 c1 Eliza Provident Martense
I thought this was a very enjoyable little vignette between Mycroft and Anthea - always a pairing I found cute. I do hope that you write more like this; your detailing of Anthea's thoughts regarding Mycroft - her love of his power but also of who he is - is really well done and could lead to other romantic moments. Good work!
I thought this was a very enjoyable little vignette between Mycroft and Anthea - always a pairing I found cute. I do hope that you write more like this; your detailing of Anthea's thoughts regarding Mycroft - her love of his power but also of who he is - is really well done and could lead to other romantic moments. Good work!
2/5/2012 c1 7eccentricpetal
Hello lovely. :)
I'm sorry it's taken me some time to read this. I saw your message in my emails, last night. But I was already reading and by the time I was finished I was so tired. But I've read it now! On with my review:
I never really cared much for this couple. I support them but it's not one I bothered about. You just changed my mind. I absolutely adored this. You wrote it in a way that was so natural and thoroughly believable. For your first story this was superb! I was truly immersed in to it. There were a few minor gliches in phrases, and grammar but hell every does it! No ones perfect. Most can't notice it in their own work. God knows I can't. It doesn't make the story hard to read and it doesn't make you get any less in to it. Those mistakes are easily fixable! :) Other than that, your story was amazing. If you write anymore Anthea/Mycroft fics let me know; I'll he sure to read. You've made this couple seem more enjoyable to me now.
I have a suggestion: You could write a companion piece in which you detail the day after this lovely experience between them. I feel that would be... interesting. ;)
Petal.
7eccentricpetalHello lovely. :)
I'm sorry it's taken me some time to read this. I saw your message in my emails, last night. But I was already reading and by the time I was finished I was so tired. But I've read it now! On with my review:
I never really cared much for this couple. I support them but it's not one I bothered about. You just changed my mind. I absolutely adored this. You wrote it in a way that was so natural and thoroughly believable. For your first story this was superb! I was truly immersed in to it. There were a few minor gliches in phrases, and grammar but hell every does it! No ones perfect. Most can't notice it in their own work. God knows I can't. It doesn't make the story hard to read and it doesn't make you get any less in to it. Those mistakes are easily fixable! :) Other than that, your story was amazing. If you write anymore Anthea/Mycroft fics let me know; I'll he sure to read. You've made this couple seem more enjoyable to me now.
I have a suggestion: You could write a companion piece in which you detail the day after this lovely experience between them. I feel that would be... interesting. ;)
Petal.
2/4/2012 c1 ReadingByStarLight
I quite liked your story. I hope to read more Sherlock stories by you. Thanks for an enjoyable fic.
I quite liked your story. I hope to read more Sherlock stories by you. Thanks for an enjoyable fic.