for Sacrificial Second Chance7/20 c15 Binge Reader
It devolves into a bullshit at an awkward time.
It devolves into a bullshit at an awkward time.
7/20 c14 Binge Reader
Underwhelming. A waste of time. Too much insignificant blabbering contained in a single chapter.
Underwhelming. A waste of time. Too much insignificant blabbering contained in a single chapter.
7/20 c13 Binge Reader
Apaan sih, Anjing? Kadang lu nulis kayak habis kepentok dinding.
Apaan sih, Anjing? Kadang lu nulis kayak habis kepentok dinding.
7/20 c5 Binge Reader
This reeks of goody-two-shoes. Also, why isn't there a vote for Lily? Isn't that more exciting?
This reeks of goody-two-shoes. Also, why isn't there a vote for Lily? Isn't that more exciting?
7/20 c4 Binge Reader
I hope this is not going to be 'i'll spread my arse cheeks and drag them on broken glass, so forgive me' shit
I hope this is not going to be 'i'll spread my arse cheeks and drag them on broken glass, so forgive me' shit
6/14 c13 dragonheart117
the impossible anger is a trope that I'm tied of which killed my immersion and I realized that the story isn't going anywhere. The slice of life is kinda fun, but boring too because you don't have anything set up. Sure voldi is alive, but there is no immediate threat and everything happening has nothing to do with the voldi stuff so it just feels like the story isn't going anywhere. JKR can get away with writing all this world building stuff, because she is actually world building, this is fanfiction so really should get to the point faster.
the impossible anger is a trope that I'm tied of which killed my immersion and I realized that the story isn't going anywhere. The slice of life is kinda fun, but boring too because you don't have anything set up. Sure voldi is alive, but there is no immediate threat and everything happening has nothing to do with the voldi stuff so it just feels like the story isn't going anywhere. JKR can get away with writing all this world building stuff, because she is actually world building, this is fanfiction so really should get to the point faster.
1/30 c11 Guest
God everytime I see that Remus and Tonks paring my stomach turns, second worse paring in the entire series. To see it’s hinted at in this Story just turned me off so bad. Guess this is my stop.
God everytime I see that Remus and Tonks paring my stomach turns, second worse paring in the entire series. To see it’s hinted at in this Story just turned me off so bad. Guess this is my stop.
9/28/2023 c11 Fredward1
Tonks is only 6 years older than harry. Remus is the same age as james. So that means tonks is like 17 and remus is in his late 30s going on 40. I never understood how they got together
Tonks is only 6 years older than harry. Remus is the same age as james. So that means tonks is like 17 and remus is in his late 30s going on 40. I never understood how they got together
9/1/2023 c25 CM
Strong story telling, wonderful and vivid characters, thank you for posting.
Strong story telling, wonderful and vivid characters, thank you for posting.
7/30/2023 c1 Guest
riddle sucks cock abomination ass
riddle sucks cock abomination ass
7/24/2023 c25 Guest
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