for Sacrificial Second Chance8/29/2018 c5 
3renextronex
I think it would be interesting if Sirius knew about everything, it would give him the role of he accomplice
3renextronexI think it would be interesting if Sirius knew about everything, it would give him the role of he accomplice
8/29/2018 c1 2allgood96
Sometimes people die in the real world. I hope you're not one kf them. If you are dead, then this was pointless.
2allgood96Sometimes people die in the real world. I hope you're not one kf them. If you are dead, then this was pointless.
8/19/2018 c19 4Khatix
This is where i stop reading, he had many options to use on her. Memory charms and impero which he used before, no reason to sign the contract at all.
4KhatixThis is where i stop reading, he had many options to use on her. Memory charms and impero which he used before, no reason to sign the contract at all.
8/14/2018 c25 TheSeceretMarauder
I have just one question. How long will it take for you to upload another chapter? I really liked the story, but could you please update I don't really like waiting. :)
I have just one question. How long will it take for you to upload another chapter? I really liked the story, but could you please update I don't really like waiting. :)
7/29/2018 c25 Wow
Ill be sitting here waiting until theres another chapter no matter how long i have to wait ill be ready to enjoy this story again
Ill be sitting here waiting until theres another chapter no matter how long i have to wait ill be ready to enjoy this story again
6/27/2018 c25 BoredPerson86
Hey are you ever going to write on this again? Mind you I just found it but it’s amazing and I hope you don’t discontinue it. I really hope you come back to this after 5 years but it’s highly unlikely.
Hey are you ever going to write on this again? Mind you I just found it but it’s amazing and I hope you don’t discontinue it. I really hope you come back to this after 5 years but it’s highly unlikely.
6/2/2018 c25 Jack
Won't abandon the story he said
I'll finish it He said
Disappointed I said
Won't abandon the story he said
I'll finish it He said
Disappointed I said
5/18/2018 c11 10AngorMike
"Now I've been getting reviews and PM's about life being to easy for him."
This short statement, to me, is fascinating because of it's implications.
1. There is a group of people who read about the fictional life of someone and are unhappy if the fictional character is happy. They are unsatisfied if life is too easy for the fictional character.
2. This is a work of fiction, so why are people fighting over control of what happens to the fictional character the author is writing about? I guess I'm saying, if you don't like it, create your own fictionVerse.
3. Why are these naysayers so averse to a happy ending? Or a happy middle story? Why do they despise that events favor the protagonist?
10AngorMike"Now I've been getting reviews and PM's about life being to easy for him."
This short statement, to me, is fascinating because of it's implications.
1. There is a group of people who read about the fictional life of someone and are unhappy if the fictional character is happy. They are unsatisfied if life is too easy for the fictional character.
2. This is a work of fiction, so why are people fighting over control of what happens to the fictional character the author is writing about? I guess I'm saying, if you don't like it, create your own fictionVerse.
3. Why are these naysayers so averse to a happy ending? Or a happy middle story? Why do they despise that events favor the protagonist?
5/15/2018 c18 UltimateSeal
It’s unfortunate that despite the amount of experience and intelligence he supposedly has, and no qualms with killing the necrophiliac, he is fine with being enslaved for a full year.
It truly bothers me that he is so useless in so many regards, not to mention that he isn’t whipped as a joke, but by literally every character. His actions make no sense for the most part and it seems all his proficiency disappears as soon as it is necessary.
A real turn off but major revisions may make it worth the effort.
It’s unfortunate that despite the amount of experience and intelligence he supposedly has, and no qualms with killing the necrophiliac, he is fine with being enslaved for a full year.
It truly bothers me that he is so useless in so many regards, not to mention that he isn’t whipped as a joke, but by literally every character. His actions make no sense for the most part and it seems all his proficiency disappears as soon as it is necessary.
A real turn off but major revisions may make it worth the effort.
5/5/2018 c25 scyfly
it is really funny, though way to long at this rate you'll end up with 2mil at least not to mention you abandoned it with a clifhanger. its also to bad that the only thing that goes right for harry is his luck
it is really funny, though way to long at this rate you'll end up with 2mil at least not to mention you abandoned it with a clifhanger. its also to bad that the only thing that goes right for harry is his luck