for Sacrificial Second Chance3/8/2017 c6 user51s2r
I keep arguing with myself, about how I should NOT like this story. But I find myself liking it allot. So far, it has some very enjoyable characterizations and fun plot elements. The writing style is very easy on my mind also.
I keep arguing with myself, about how I should NOT like this story. But I find myself liking it allot. So far, it has some very enjoyable characterizations and fun plot elements. The writing style is very easy on my mind also.
3/8/2017 c7 Mutant Ascension
Seriously man you should have just made Harry's animagus form a Thunderbird
Seriously man you should have just made Harry's animagus form a Thunderbird
3/8/2017 c5 Mutant Ascension
That was definitely interesting, it would seem like their Harry didn't even want to rule like Tom did but rather just wanted to cause pain and destruction for the joy of it (granted Tom also loved to cause pain and destruction for the pleasure and bliss it gave him but he wanted to rule over everyone as well). And your right the relationship between a mother and child is special but like the saying goes theirs no greater love than what a mother has for her child/children.
That was definitely interesting, it would seem like their Harry didn't even want to rule like Tom did but rather just wanted to cause pain and destruction for the joy of it (granted Tom also loved to cause pain and destruction for the pleasure and bliss it gave him but he wanted to rule over everyone as well). And your right the relationship between a mother and child is special but like the saying goes theirs no greater love than what a mother has for her child/children.
2/27/2017 c1 Julius
Dude what the fuck u need to update this man the wait is killing soon bro
Dude what the fuck u need to update this man the wait is killing soon bro
1/18/2017 c12 JustAnotherSomething
I thought you weren't going to add beaver girl? Let the troll kill her...
I thought you weren't going to add beaver girl? Let the troll kill her...
1/15/2017 c19 Squarekiddo
This chapter killed your story. Truly horrible filth im afraid. There was literally nothing good with this chapter.
This chapter killed your story. Truly horrible filth im afraid. There was literally nothing good with this chapter.
1/15/2017 c18 Squarekiddo
Hes not eleven! stop making out to be such a damn baby, damn it is it annoying.
Hes not eleven! stop making out to be such a damn baby, damn it is it annoying.
1/14/2017 c11 Guest
Hes been in war dude, stop making him pee himself by simply noticing someone thats made at him. hes not 11.
Frankly thats very weak for an eleven year old aswell.
Hes been in war dude, stop making him pee himself by simply noticing someone thats made at him. hes not 11.
Frankly thats very weak for an eleven year old aswell.
12/29/2016 c19 jlt314
Dropping the fic as of this chapter due to the main character suddenly being hit with induced stupidity.
Using those chains as a battle spell instead of Seko or Crucio and having a daywalking werewolf Remus and Lily on scene before aurors under James' command appear was just too cringe-worthy.
For somebody knowing of, willing and capable of using Parseltongue and the unforgivables, his dealings with Vega were one major bout of "heroes ball". The proper course of action should have been:
0. Make sure that you can cast the Imperius in Parseltongue.
1. Point out that classrooms have listening or recording devices a.k.a. portraits.
2. Lead Vega into the Chamber.
3. Imperio her, obviously in Parseltongue - we assume most wizards will try to evade on hearing that spell's incantation.
4. Order Vega to follow you.
5. Leave Hogwarts and have Vega engage Necro.
6. Finish off the winner, cast the Morsmordre. Let the aurors deal with the letifolds.
7. Time-turn, return to Hogwarts. Leave the room after you and Vega left to enter the Chamber.
8. Tell witnesses that Vega tried to press you into service and left to retrieve something from the Potter Manor as proof of her organisation's capabilities.
Dropping the fic as of this chapter due to the main character suddenly being hit with induced stupidity.
Using those chains as a battle spell instead of Seko or Crucio and having a daywalking werewolf Remus and Lily on scene before aurors under James' command appear was just too cringe-worthy.
For somebody knowing of, willing and capable of using Parseltongue and the unforgivables, his dealings with Vega were one major bout of "heroes ball". The proper course of action should have been:
0. Make sure that you can cast the Imperius in Parseltongue.
1. Point out that classrooms have listening or recording devices a.k.a. portraits.
2. Lead Vega into the Chamber.
3. Imperio her, obviously in Parseltongue - we assume most wizards will try to evade on hearing that spell's incantation.
4. Order Vega to follow you.
5. Leave Hogwarts and have Vega engage Necro.
6. Finish off the winner, cast the Morsmordre. Let the aurors deal with the letifolds.
7. Time-turn, return to Hogwarts. Leave the room after you and Vega left to enter the Chamber.
8. Tell witnesses that Vega tried to press you into service and left to retrieve something from the Potter Manor as proof of her organisation's capabilities.
12/1/2016 c25 
5Mangaelf1997
Thank god this is abandoned because instead of making Harry beat all his enemies like a boss. He made him obey orders like a bitch
5Mangaelf1997Thank god this is abandoned because instead of making Harry beat all his enemies like a boss. He made him obey orders like a bitch
11/16/2016 c25 11Astroman1000
I am honestly shell shocked that thais has been a abandoned. It is amazing and could have been even better. Oh well.
For what it was
Thx ;)
11Astroman1000I am honestly shell shocked that thais has been a abandoned. It is amazing and could have been even better. Oh well.
For what it was
Thx ;)