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2/18/2012 c7 Kyukon
Thanks for the update.


...only for her dark skin to take on a reddish hew...

Cho Chang has dark skin? What am I missing here? And it's hue, not hew.


Update soon.
2/18/2012 c6 1Lord Maurya
Interesting story! there are many similar stories out there in which harry gets a chance to with his family but all of them are abondoned...

hope that doesn't happen here.

I like how you gave him the second chance to live, it is original and unique. the karma-harry intraction is one of the best part and real fun to read.

the second thing i liked was the elf-power karma gave but only if he work for them.

As for harem girl, Romilda could be an interesting pairing to see.

Animagus form should be a phoenix (for rebirth) or some varient of dragon species with smaller size as they are very powerful with protective nature.

Wand core should be nundu hair string coated with pheonix tears encased in yew wood. It could also come from family vault.

Overall a good story.

Waiting for some more Iris, ivy interection, hope you will update soon...
2/18/2012 c7 Naginator
Nice look forward to more and hope his darker side doesn't cause any problems with his family
2/18/2012 c7 LordofGalaxies
good chapter and i cant wait for more so plz update as soon as possible.
2/18/2012 c7 Zicou
Great chapter!

I can't wait to


2/17/2012 c6 5flame55
this is great i can't wait for more of this story so what girls are going to be in his harem i hope you add hermione to
2/17/2012 c6 Maleivius
Awesome chapter, once again, I really liked the idea about the elves and how they went extinct as well. Interesting cover story about his vision and the changes as a result, along with the family's reactions to his changes. I really like the dynamic between Harry and James, adds an extra something something to the story and just makes it more interesting for some reason. I really look forward to the next chapter, and my vote for the 4th girl would have to be either Fleur or Gabrielle Delacour or his sister, either would fit in my opinion. Can't wait for the next update!
2/17/2012 c6 Umbra8191
great story i can't wait for the next update.
2/17/2012 c5 Shank5
i think becasue harry is so powerful he should bind himself to iris and the other girl he will be paired with like alucard from hellsing is to Integra Hellsing.
2/17/2012 c6 Shank5
2/16/2012 c6 juggler196
Definitely an interesting start to a unique and well-written story. Keep up the good work as soon as you can :-)
2/16/2012 c6 shugokage
This extremely interesting I can't wait for more and I especially like that you are quick updater!
2/16/2012 c6 S-Wanderer999
Well a nice story so far, although Harry is going to have an upward battle with people (after all James would ask both McGonagall and Snape to keep an eye on what Harry does at Hogwarts, due to not trusting him).

I like the gift that you gave Harry, although it's going to cause him some problems with most students (fangirls, and jealous boys mainly). As for the person the prophecy means, I say to go with Harry due to Neville going Dark, and Dumbledore seeing it happen (but when is up to you).

A couple of things I see that Harry can do to help earn some trust. The first deals with his wand (I'm thinking a custom wand from Ollivander using a third feather from Fawkes, since Neville bought the holly wand) and asking Lily to hold onto his wand until he leaves for Hogwarts. The second would be to swear a magical oath promising not to intentionally hurt the Potters, Sirius, and Remus in front of either those mentioned above, Dumbledore, or McGonagall.

As for Harry and his parselmouth abilities, how are you planning to deal with that. After all with his body's previous reputation and what people think of parselmouths, he could get in quite a bit of trouble if he hides it (especially with James). As for who he should tell, my thoughts would be to tell and prove it to both Remus and Sirius at the same time and ask if they can tell his parents (I'm seeing that Sirius and Remus are the moderates opposing each other while James and Lily are the extremes concerning Harry in your story). After all once they got over the shock of Harry being a parselmouth (and that he told them that), they could figure out how to present it to James and Lily in the best fashion.

Anyways keep up the good work and I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.
2/16/2012 c6 3frytrix
the story is good, altough i wish the chapters could be a tad longer.
2/15/2012 c6 Don't Drop The Soap
Good story...although i really like the plot of your story, i do have one complaint...which is the pairing in this story, i have no problem with Cho, Katie and his OC sister...but i do think it's kind of weird to pair Harry who like 17-18 when he died with girls who are several years younger than even his new physical age...seriously he has to be some kind of pedophile to even consider going out with my opinion it would be a lot better to replace Astoria with Daphne and Gabrielle with Fleur who are at the very least closer to his new physical age...besides this minor complaint i consider this story to be one of my new favorite Harry Potter Fanfics...
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